[Tal3s of Debauchery] A Mothers Shame

[xpsmachine6]

Any Indian subscriber here?
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Yea

 

[mickeymc]

Hi,
The next 15 Pages (283 incl Cover) of Chapter 2 for A Mothers Shame are now out on fanbox and subscribestar!

Frozen in place, maybe because she secretly does want it?! (Sneak Peek of Chapter 2 Page 283)

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very interesting. I hope it will be hot as well.

 

[tylyko]

Anyone can share a spoiler?

 

[Fan of Tal3sofD]

Hi all,
here we are with the next 20 pages of A Mothers Shame chapter 2. Where Dylan again takes his chance, as they get back to their room...


Enjoy !

 

[Gnaparelli]

It's ok to have a good build-up , but this is kind of too long, maybe. Dialogues are improved, now the taboo feeling is more present, but it could be even more "mom/son forbidden things" than "just a regular couple playing seducing game".

 

[ilove3dmoms]

Lets go baby

 

[ilove3dmoms]

Yea

Check DM bro

 

[mickeymc]

Thank you so much for sharing!
I just want to say that lighting on dark scenes should be improve even if the scene requires to be darker. This kind of darker light is so dark, I think.

 

[Dustellar]

Loving the direction of the story, wonder if Isabella will research about "genetic sexual attraction" later in the story, at least to try to find an excuse.

 

[USP45]

I wonder if the MC's mom has a sister(s) and/or GILF mom that we'll meet soon?

 

[Fan of Tal3sofD]

It's ok to have a good build-up , but this is kind of too long, maybe. Dialogues are improved, now the taboo feeling is more present, but it could be even more "mom/son forbidden things" than "just a regular couple playing seducing game".

I think the feeling will become more present in the next few coming scenes, because there is a key moment for that happening.

Thank you so much for sharing!
I just want to say that lighting on dark scenes should be improve even if the scene requires to be darker. This kind of darker light is so dark, I think.

No problem, my pleasure. Yeah, still trying to dial in the perfect lighting for such scenes. I really liked the lighting mood in that scene but next time I´ll definetly up the brightness a bit. It really was a tad too dark.

Loving the direction of the story, wonder if Isabella will research about "genetic sexual attraction" later in the story, at least to try to find an excuse.

Haven´t really thought about that yet, but that could for sure be something I could implement. Thanks for the idea .

I wonder if the MC's mom has a sister(s) and/or GILF mom that we'll meet soon?

Currently I´m not planning to integrate other Charackters into the story with which either of the two will get on with.

 

[Fan of Tal3sofD]

Hi,
The next 20 Pages (303 incl Cover) of Chapter 2 for A Mothers Shame are now out on fanbox and subscribestar!

Fighting to not give in to the pleasure... (Sneak Peek of chapter 2 Page 296)

 

[Nippur]

At some point, to be consistent, the boy should demand some explanation about the abandonment, those are feeling stronger than lust.

 

[Fan of Tal3sofD]

At some point, to be consistent, the boy should demand some explanation about the abandonment, those are feeling stronger than lust.

The situation will come.

 

[Fan of Tal3sofD]

Hi all,
here we are with the next 20 pages of A Mothers Shame chapter 2. Where in the heat of the moment, Dylan has a somewhat slip of the tongue...


Enjoy !

 

[Gnaparelli]

I liked it, improved dialogues, images 169 and 183 for example... maybe little bit too dark, though. Anyway, yeah, taboo feel is growing, and that improves everything, excitement and all. Maybe, or definitely, it's time now to go toward full sex scene - still with all the doubts, fears, little bit of reluctance (from mother) but with son who is more and more determined to fuck her. At least i hope it will go that way.

 

[LinP83]

This is such a great story!!
Isabella is so beautifully HOT!!

Can't wait to see how it continues between these two

 

[Dustellar]

I really don't mind the darkness here, in fact I think it helps the plot and development, the fact that they can barely see each other makes things easier for them.

 

[Fan of Tal3sofD]

I liked it, improved dialogues, images 169 and 183 for example... maybe little bit too dark, though. Anyway, yeah, taboo feel is growing, and that improves everything, excitement and all. Maybe, or definitely, it's time now to go toward full sex scene - still with all the doubts, fears, little bit of reluctance (from mother) but with son who is more and more determined to fuck her. At least i hope it will go that way.

Well, I´m happy to hear that it develops more to your liking. Though regarding the full on sex scene, are the minds somewhat split. It will come but it´s not just right around the corner yet.

This is such a great story!!
Isabella is so beautifully HOT!!

Can't wait to see how it continues between these two

I´m happy to hear that you enjoy the story and Isabella .

I really don't mind the darkness here, in fact I think it helps the plot and development, the fact that they can barely see each other makes things easier for them.

That was for sure one of the reason why I first decided for such an rather poor lit scene, though again I could up the saturation on the pictures a bit so it isn´t all to dark.

 

[Deleted member 13946]

Recently, I have read A Mothers Shame and it's really good. I appreciate your great work in this comic.
Keep this up!