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It seems that I'm wrong at every turn here this week. :oops:
Is fine.. sorry don't want to seem critical as I know new readers probably have little or no knowledge of the genesis of the graphic novel I produce starting at f95zone forum... And even though I acknowledge L&P for the basis of the core characters of the story I produce, my GN and his Ren'py game, have no association... My works is an expansion of the San Alejo universe as Fan art only to what is the base canon of story in the game..
 
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Is fine.. sorry don't want to seem critical as I know new readers probably have little or no knowledge of the genesis of the graphic novel I produce starting at f95zone forum... And even though I acknowledge L&P for the basis of the core characters of the story I produce, my GN and his Ren'py game, have no association... My works is an expansion of the San Alejo universe as Fan art only to what is the base canon of story in the game..
And you have done an Excellent job of storytelling with those characters. Your stories keep me looking forward to what's next.
 
The Fashion Show Redux page 106

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I like the flexibility (of Dylan) to be able to design the next "Operations Plan" while the actions are in full development. A true commander on the battlefield. Ha ha ha.
Dylan thinks of himself as the controller of the narrative for the evening through all his planning, but a cat and mouse game between mother and son where the true power is swapped and transferred between the two keeps both having to think on their feet and constantly adapt at the changes the other throws at them... :)
 
The Fashion Show Redux page 111
"... Keeping ahead of Dylan is not as easy as it seems. ..."

I still think the "Commander of Operations" is still Dylan.
Remembering studies in physics... "Every effect is preceded by a cause"
So... Sophia only turns to her "old" experience to act and be "The effect" of Dylan's actions (The cause)
I like your work.
 
"... Keeping ahead of Dylan is not as easy as it seems. ..."

I still think the "Commander of Operations" is still Dylan.
Remembering studies in physics... "Every effect is preceded by a cause"
So... Sophia only turns to her "old" experience to act and be "The effect" of Dylan's actions (The cause)
I like your work.
:unsure:mmmmm, yes, but let's not forget Newtons 3rd law... Every action has an equal but opposite reaction... Thanks for your feedback (y)
 
Chapter 5.4.1 - Preflight for a big night pg22-51 + txt translation

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