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bubbasaurs
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New Amanda is always good, but I just wish she was gangbanged by the two homeless men and the two dogs at the same time. Would love to see her getting knoted by both dogs during a DP while sucking the homeless men dicks.
The_Nonce
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The problem with the Amanda story, as a whole, is that PigKing is committed to her being pregnant. How exactly is he going to ride that out with all of the other stories? It's already taking forever for Brenda from Father-in-Law at Home to get married and go to Jukka's farm, how is Amanda going to be pregnant for 9 months in this comic universe? Since it's already been established that nearly all of PigKing's stories are connected, are we going to have to wait until they all move forward in their respective plots before Amanda gives birth? And then what? How is the baby going to fit into the narrative? Are we then going to have to wait 18 years (in the comics) before Amanda inevitably has sex with her biological son?
Jhony Cash (Trader)
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There are times when they lose their way in the narrative. They create a lot of characters, but the plot often feels superficial. It seems challenging for them to tie the story together within this chronological framework. Many characters don't stand out much, even though some have potential and could benefit from more development. In fact, there’s a need to give some characters a break to avoid overcrowding the story. Writing a compelling narrative is not as easy as it may seem. The issue arises when the story becomes too cliché—the narrative and the poses in the renderings start to feel extremely repetitive. Some elements could definitely be more polished, though I understand that the workload of Pig King is considerable, and given that, they’re actually doing quite well.
An example is the character Darla, Cynthia's maid. They could have taken advantage of Cynthia’s trip to the island and, during that time, developed a story about Darla taking care of the dogs and her child, for instance. The last two solo chapters featuring Darla were excellent, with incredible rendering, full of details that stood out, creating a performance with the action and the resolution of the scene in a well-structured chronological order, with a clear beginning, middle, and an ending that effectively wrapped up the action of a specific scene. After that, they never repeated this kind of detail, which I think is a shame because I miss these more subtle touches in the rendering. However, I do recognize that many works turned out really well. That said, I think it's just the way it is: some works are magnificent, while others are less engaging in terms of narrative and rendering. Overall, I find PigKing's work very interesting and enjoyable.
***Crazydad3d ***
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Big Black Cocks - Parte 08 Coming Soon
Jhony Cash (Trader)
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Free adaptation in AI-generated English, based on the work developed by PigKing. New approach to the story of Lost Family 30 (Part 1)
Jhony Cash (Trader)
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Free adaptation in AI-generated English, based on the work developed by PigKing. New approach to the story of Lost Family 30 (Part 2)
Jhony Cash (Trader)
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Thank's !
Alex75
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Do you have preview of chapter 3 ? Thanks
***Crazydad3d ***
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Father-in-law at home - Parte 54
Alex75
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Hello, do you plan to make a seperate story with Amy from Turner Family ?
THanks
rosie13
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I miss these episodes. Who has them?
Tomb Raider 2 3 4 5 7
Nicoly 5
Hell Village – Ryan 10 11
Hell Village – The House 1 2
Foster Mother 50
The Grandma 33
Big Black Cocks 8
AI Generated Shemale 7
AI Generated Milfs - 1 Hot Teachers - 2 Milf 1 - 3 Milf 2 – 4 Nuns
Juan Counter Strike Remaster
Father in Law at Home 54
Gammer Mrs Camila 1 2
Amanda 45
Nicoly 5
Hell Village – Ryan 10 11
Hell Village – The House 1 2
Foster Mother 50
The Grandma 33
Big Black Cocks 8
AI Generated Shemale 7
AI Generated Milfs - 1 Hot Teachers - 2 Milf 1 - 3 Milf 2 – 4 Nuns
Juan Counter Strike Remaster
Father in Law at Home 54
Gammer Mrs Camila 1 2
Amanda 45
Jhony Cash (Trader)
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I have a question: why don’t you share anything on the forum, given that you ask others to distribute things for free? I find it strange that there is a demand for sharing without any reciprocity."
***Crazydad3d ***
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Caroline - Parte 08 - Coming Soon
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