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[Daval3D] Immoral Desires

Heh heh heh. Looks like this rascal's done it again.
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I'll have to add him to the list of others I've collected.
 
Despite any criticism we may have, we have to admit that they are an incredible couple, their chemistry is unmatched and, except for a few issues that felt like filler, their progression is great too, I mean look! it's the most succesful Daval comic despite being monogamous and repetitive, meanwhile the harem comic is forgotten!

Still... I insist they will not have much to offer soon, once they reach another milestone, that's when Daval will have to make the decision to end it on a high note, but since this is his golden goose I don't think it will ever end, also... I think this will be really hard to replace, we will need a cooler MC than Daniel and a hotter milf than Lana, wonder if that's possible.
 
Despite any criticism we may have, we have to admit that they are an incredible couple, their chemistry is unmatched and, except for a few issues that felt like filler, their progression is great too, I mean look! it's the most succesful Daval comic despite being monogamous and repetitive, meanwhile the harem comic is forgotten!

Still... I insist they will not have much to offer soon, once they reach another milestone, that's when Daval will have to make the decision to end it on a high note, but since this is his golden goose I don't think it will ever end, also... I think this will be really hard to replace, we will need a cooler MC than Daniel and a hotter milf than Lana, wonder if that's possible.
Personally, I think Daval's biggest challenge won't be continuing Daniel and Lana's story, but creating another protagonist as effective as Daniel. It's relatively easy to write a selfish or morally questionable character, but getting the reader to continue sympathizing with them despite their actions is much harder. Daniel works because his personality, however unpleasant it may be, is consistently built. He never pretends to be better than he is, nor does he change his goals to suit what the reader might want to see. From the beginning, he had a single desire: to make his mother exclusively his, and the entire story revolved around that obsession until he achieved it. That consistency is what makes the character interesting and, to some extent, exceptional compared to the rest.

However, it's also true that this storyline has run its course. The best course of action would be for Daval to conclude it at the camp, with Lana either agreeing to marry Daniel or having his child. Afterward, he could explore other storylines. Sofia and the Black boy introduced in the first chapter could star in a standalone story, but Martha probably offers the most possibilities. Her open marriage... In this way, Daval would preserve one of his most successful works intact and, at the same time, avoid wasting a secondary cast that still has narrative potential. Although, of course, only time will tell what his decision will be.
 
They calling each other mom and son again, the world is healing! Daval should not forget what's the main fetish in his comics and even if the act is there, the dialogue should follow! not saying we should not have moments of them acting as a couple, just a balance to avoid vanillization.
 
I agree: that “incest” between a stepmother and her stepchildren just like the one between step-siblings is total bullshit. There’s no comparison to real incest. It’s the watered-down, tamed, spineless version. Without true blood ties, there’s no magic. IncestWin only works when, deep down, you know she’s really your sister or your mother. The rest is just amateur theater with legal labels to dodge bans. Without blood ties, there’s no win.
 

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