[Daval3D] Immoral Desires

[WhiskeyTangoFoxtrot]

Shit, that bouncing ass is crazy

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Thanks for the Wonderful gif. Would it be possible to add some sound effects as well. Balls slapping against the soaking Wet Pussy lips or Ass Cheeks Clapping.

 

[Balrog]

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Personally, I think Daval's biggest challenge won't be continuing Daniel and Lana's story, but creating another protagonist as effective as Daniel. It's relatively easy to write a selfish or morally questionable character, but getting the reader to continue sympathizing with them despite their actions is much harder. Daniel works because his personality, however unpleasant it may be, is consistently built. He never pretends to be better than he is, nor does he change his goals to suit what the reader might want to see. From the beginning, he had a single desire: to make his mother exclusively his, and the entire story revolved around that obsession until he achieved it. That consistency is what makes the character interesting and, to some extent, exceptional compared to the rest.

However, it's also true that this storyline has run its course. The best course of action would be for Daval to conclude it at the camp, with Lana either agreeing to marry Daniel or having his child. Afterward, he could explore other storylines. Sofia and the Black boy introduced in the first chapter could star in a standalone story, but Martha probably offers the most possibilities. Her open marriage... In this way, Daval would preserve one of his most successful works intact and, at the same time, avoid wasting a secondary cast that still has narrative potential. Although, of course, only time will tell what his decision will be.

I’m not sure that a resolution involving marriage or Lana getting pregnant really fits this comic. As you said, Daniel’s goal from the start was simply to satisfy his desire for his mother’s body—something he has now achieved. For her part, Lana initially resists him, even though their encounters are incredibly pleasurable for her every time. It took weeks and countless ruses on Daniel’s part—combined with Lana’s deep frustration regarding her relationship with Alex—for things to get serious. To me, Lana only gives in to Daniel because he is amazing in bed and because of the experiences he creates for her, not because he’s some great smooth talker.

When you look closely, sex and their shared games are the only things bringing them together. On a personal level, we’re only just beginning to see Daniel show more care and Lana break free from her maternal role. It would be better to focus on the different universes Daniel can create to maintain Lana into a form of a dream come true, while also exploring Alex’s perspective on his wife’s growing distance. He’s been trying to satisfy her again for a while now, but to no avail, not to mention Lana’s refusal to have another child, something she had wanted herself not long before. This is bound to make him questions the reason why it vault ever to be married or realizing that nothing works with Lana anymore.

If it leads to divorce, there would be no reason for Lana and Daniel to get married or have a baby, yet they would still be free to continue doing exactly what they’re already doing—freely and discreetly. Besides, aiming for an ending that cements an incestuous romance as a "win" is a very difficult path for an author to take. It would damage his image, and I’d feel guilty about my own artistic leanings.

 

[WhiskeyTangoFoxtrot]

I agree: that “incest” between a stepmother and her stepchildren just like the one between step-siblings is total bullshit. There’s no comparison to real incest. It’s the watered-down, tamed, spineless version. Without true blood ties, there’s no magic. IncestWin only works when, deep down, you know she’s really your sister or your mother. The rest is just amateur theater with legal labels to dodge bans. Without blood ties, there’s no win.

You would love my favorite 2D story AWAM (A Wife and a Mother) series. It is Amazing.