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Who knows maybe it is Nolan who Melissa's secret writer and Aphrodite's Mirror was his first bad attempt of Greek's myth adoption.
 
Who knows maybe it is Nolan who Melissa's secret writer and Aphrodite's Mirror was his first bad attempt of Greek's myth adoption.
Which Greek myth is Mirror supposed to adapt? Or is it like modern Greeks naming their daughters Athena without any respect for the name, ie only a name
 
Are you going to prune the final 700 (!) pages too?
This is where I left it, with the wife leaving and Nico gone as well. I would probably pick it back up with her being kidnapped and quickly from there to the wedding. I just honestly don't see the point. I'll do it if people want it but I'm fed up with the glacial story pacing and the constant intrusive elements like spy crap and dream sequences to the point that I just cancelled my subscription.

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The discussion and comments here are better than the stories Melissa is making.

BTW Besties are out now and wouldn't be surprised if moving forward, 3 Besties and 1 Kpop release per month.

I'm already starting to believe in some comments here that there is another person that pretends to be Melissa and making this stories.
 
Would be funny if he leaves his wife for someone that actually respects him. But knowing Melissa, he will magically discover he's gay and never hate his wife.
he hate that his wife is turning him into a complete bimbo even in his mind, but he discover that he is a masochist, that's why he get so excited by being forced into humiliating situations and living as a Bimbo 24/7 is the max humiliation but at the same time, he felt the most pleasure
he isn't and never will be gay, but his wife will change how his body will respond to pleasure, by making him get aroused and reach climax only with man and only when he gets fucked in the ass, adding more humiliation, therefore pleasure

at least, that's how i see it
 
This is where I left it, with the wife leaving and Nico gone as well. I would probably pick it back up with her being kidnapped and quickly from there to the wedding. I just honestly don't see the point. I'll do it if people want it but I'm fed up with the glacial story pacing and the constant intrusive elements like spy crap and dream sequences to the point that I just cancelled my subscription.

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This story was totally crap It never gave a reasonable argument why he was feminizes, Marina's revenge? Niko's desire.
 
This story was totally crap It never gave a reasonable argument why he was feminizes, Marina's revenge? Niko's desire.
Also, what was with that second feminization plot with Joel? It had all this setup with facial damage, surgery, salon, etc. with no payoff except two throwoff panels right at the end.

The obvious conclusion is this doctor just really likes doing giant boob jobs on dudes and he keeps talking his shady clients into it....
 
there is no logic anywhere... I was wondering did I miss anything.. but in reality, everything is missing..
This story was totally crap It never gave a reasonable argument why he was feminizes, Marina's revenge? Niko's desire.ya totlly gree.. i felt this will go to new plots.. but just repeated and like nothing has happened..
 
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Also, what was with that second feminization plot with Joel? It had all this setup with facial damage, surgery, salon, etc. with no payoff except two throwoff panels right at the end.

The obvious conclusion is this doctor just really likes doing giant boob jobs on dudes and he keeps talking his shady clients into it....
for a spin off maybe?
 
for a spin off maybe?
I don't think so. Melissa has other plans in mind, that's what she said..šŸ‘‡

Hey!
This is just a concept cover for the first chapter of the comic I plan to work on in the future (I’ll share more about the story later, but for now I can say it’s set in a cyberpunk universe and will feature plenty of sexy scenes :-D). However, before diving into the new story seriously, I want to make progress on Kpop and Bestie. I’ve also been working on a project with Nicegent42 in my spare time that I think you guys will like! Anyway, I’m posting this cover today because I’d love to hear your thoughts on the new comic's layout. Do you prefer the style I’ve been using now (horizontal pages, one image per page) or a more classic comic book style (vertical pages, multiple images per page)? I’d appreciate everyone’s input. I think the downside of a vertical page layout is that we wouldn't have those panoramic chapter covers, but the upside might be a better reading experience? Anyway, I'll let you decide! :)

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