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I'm not even disappointed the ending was trash because the story lost its plot a long time ago and you can tell she just threw a sex scene in there because she saw all the complaints about how stupid it was getting. At least it's finally over but considering how stupid bestie in the making is and how abysmal the pacing in KPoP is going I don't have much excitement in what Melissa N or whoever is pretending to be Melissa N will do next .
 
Well we knew that it would end happily ever after as far as Melissa was concerned but the story has a lot of loose ends and really needs a better finish. once i get the DS1000 story rewrite finished i can give it a go. Anything you would like to see in a chapter 31 and 32?
Well, it should be a horror story so it should either have a dark ending or a bittersweet ending. But that ship sailed long ago when it was established Elena subconsciously wanted to be an older woman all along.
 
Well, it should be a horror story so it should either have a dark ending or a bittersweet ending. But that ship sailed long ago when it was established Elena subconsciously wanted to be an older woman all along.
yes I was being sarcastic with my comment - a far better story would have been Elena hypnotised or in such a state of mind that she thinks she has always been a 55 year old mature woman except that when she dreams, she dreams that she was a 20 something young man who was married to a woman.
 
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