[Allan Aldiss] Old story - refurbished

[renoblue]

Years ago, I stumbled over (the late?) Allan Aldiss` novel "White Slaves in Black Africa". Although fascinated by the theme, I found that the misadventures of Emma were described in a rather dry and insensible way, not caring much about the thoughts and feelings of the hapless heroine. So I tried to write down a somehow "extended version", emphazising these aspects, while following strictly the course of the story.
When reading my attempt, please bear in mind that I am not a native English Speaker.