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[AffectionOtto]

Happy Sadie Hawkins Dance day! Did you remember to get a corsage?

That [the camera recording is all Cassie's doing] is actually the premise I'm going with, I think Cassie is behind all of this. . . . I think it's possible she intentionally filmed it and sent it to Darcy for.....idk

With the ending of the comic completely cutting Darcy out of the action, I doubt Cassie has any plans involving Darcy at all at this point. She certainly hasn't sent her any video files from the camera, nor do I imagine she'd be likely to at any time soon. Sure, my plan for inserting the Darcy pages much earlier in the story did feel a bit janky, but at least it allowed her the possibility of being involved in some way, even if it was only as a voyeur. Their actions (could have) had an effect on her, and (maybe) opened the door for her to make some sort of reaction to it in the future. But placing the Darcy pages at the very end creates the opposite of a cliffhanger: It confirms that Darcy wasn't there, didn't learn anything, and most likely won't be doing anything. So what the hell was the point??

. . . once you start taking money from people it doesn't matter, you have a responsibility to provide those people quality and man he is just putting out the same thing year after year after year. And Halloween is the perfect excuse to do something different . . .

Strong agree. This whole mindset of "Get one idea, and draw one costume, then do slight variations of that for 4 years running" is the opposite of art. Honestly, at this point, this "Ctrl-V Megan in different poses" is literally no different than what AI can do has already done, with Andava's own style. He should be showcasing his originality, fighting to prove that he's better than an AI, not giving free ammunition to the enemy.

Here's a topical halloween idea: it's the ol "stuck in a wall" bit but instead of some normal regular wall, its "The Backrooms™". Can even have the character quoting the whole "I like it in here" bit while getting fucked. Doesn't even have to be supernatural if we care about lore, it can just be the real backrooms ie some office with shitty yellow wallpaper.
"Lily was climbing through a hole and got stuck. She sees where she is and freaks out thinking she's in the backrooms. In reality it's just some random office.

Okay, but I'd like to swap in Megan instead of Lily. It makes more sense to start Megan off in an office environment, and seeing her enjoying sex (or at least being peacefully content with it) would be more of a welcome change for her.

Totally agree. I really love that shot of Cassie.

But, the guy's just . . . poking at the roof of her mouth? I mean, maybe he likes it that way, but . . . why? (Then again, maybe that's why Cassie looks surprised.)

I love the Taniyah one. . . . i think this one would look even better without the dick in it. Just a cute girl being happy and not noticing she shows more than she wants.

Bingo!