Pretty much all bimbofication comics get to a point where the artists fetish level exceeds your own personal fetish level and becomes uncomfortably overdone.
It is the nature of the beast.
It is also why I like stories where they corrupt/bimbofy one girl and then she helps her master bimbofy a second girl for whatever reason but slightly differently(motivation, process etc) so the original girl is still getting changed into a bigger slut but you have a second one who isn't all the way there yet.