[Bela04] Collection

Hello, I love AP and AR, I have submitted a lot of commissions in the past, gift clock, deal, the perfect family, I might do a lastcommisions but it is really expensive, so if you have idea with age swap, age transfer, like continuation of https://agearts.com/portfolio/the-deal-2016/ ,gift cloak , or make story very close, around 20 to 30 pages, if it is really good I will contact bela04 for more detail.
 
sirval said:
Hello, I love AP and AR, I have submitted a lot of commissions in the past, gift clock, deal, the perfect family, I might do a lastcommisions but it is really expensive, so if you have idea with age swap, age transfer, like continuation of https://agearts.com/portfolio/the-deal-2016/ ,gift cloak , or make story very close, around 20 to 30 pages, if it is really good I will contact bela04 for more detail.
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I need some feedback on what could be better. bela04 used to ask details with every dialogue and every scene. Don't hesitate to post some links where your ideas are from, he explains he don't have time to do a good story like he did in the past, he is a perfectionist with the quality he works on now, he will need 4 times more to old comics like babysitter.
 
sirval said:
Hello, I love AP and AR, I have submitted a lot of commissions in the past, gift clock, deal, the perfect family, I might do a lastcommisions but it is really expensive, so if you have idea with age swap, age transfer, like continuation of https://agearts.com/portfolio/the-deal-2016/ ,gift cloak , or make story very close, around 20 to 30 pages, if it is really good I will contact bela04 for more detail.
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A man and woman go to a brand new casino and use all there money when they notice a room in the back that is much different and allows them to bet there age. Thatā€™s where they fully lose it all.


A group of girls go to a witch shop in Salem thinking this stuff is all fake magic only to find an hourglass that if messed with will send these 3 back in time to there childhood in the blink of an eye. The witch warns them next to not be so foolish




An 18 year old girl who is living rough and tight on money takes a helped wanted add she reads off line about a one night babysitting job that pays enough for her to finish her college semester. She finds it odd but in need of money she takes it anyway and shows up to the house. She is greeted by the parents house maid which is about to leave for the day and says the family had already left which she finds odd. When she reaches the young boy or girl doesnā€™t matter she is thrown off about how much older and smarter he seems despite being only 4. He uses a device on her which zaps her and steals her age and transfers it to him. She is left to be the baby of house now but at least she wonā€™t have to worry about bills and college



Not well thought out but a daycare worker is regressed into one of the babies at the daycare. Really simple one



A mom is sick of her two teenage kids treating her like garbage and she cooks a meal that downsizes them back to little angles. For this maybe they use the bathroom first and it as they go it mentally regresses them and all.




a woman goes to a live hypnotist show and wants to feel young and wanted again! The hypnotists brings her on stage and hypnotizes her to feel younger again and whatever she thinks she turns into that age. She think 30 at first then stars thinking younger like 21 and before she knows it her mind over flows and she thinks about her high school and then teenage and middle school days before she knows it she is thinking about being back in pre school and the crowd is shock as the once older business woman is now a child on stage! The hypnotists says tada and the curtains close leaving him with his new daughter!


Something like or could work as someone using an app that alerts there mind to hypnotize the woman is private





- a woman is obsessed with her socials and phone that she never puts it down. When she goes to her parents to visit one day they tell her to take a break from it and itā€™s totally ruined her ability to focus on the real world. She brings it to the bathroom and the parents knock on the to tell her to get off it after endlessly scrolling on it for over an hour and being locked in the bathroom. Thatā€™s when she starts to regress all the way back to being a baby and this time her parents will raise her right. Now all she can focus on are toys and trying to fill her diaper



Everyone letā€™s decide what we think!
 
The original story ring was one I prefer, the one Apfan used to make his story with Ashley and Jennifer. Regenerix from CYOC, an age swap between mother and child, was also great. The problem with a 30-page comic is that it's hard to make a great one. The casino (from Martymorris) could have had good potential, but it would be wasted in a short comic. Babysitting by Bela was great; he loves them, but he doesn't have the courage to do it again in a great quality and better storytelling.
 
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