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[Daval3D] Immoral Desires

These tits are exaggerated , it looks like Pigking/Crazydad comics, makes no sense whatsoever, when tits and asses are so huge, waaay too big it's just an actual turn-off for me. Characters should be as realistic as possible in my opinion.
 
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Well, I lOVE the artwork, but I am really not into the storyline of the son basically raping his Mother. Could have gone a better route. Still a lot to read, but so far, it is just not doing it for me. The visuals are amazing, though !
 
Well, I lOVE the artwork, but I am really not into the storyline of the son basically raping his Mother. Could have gone a better route. Still a lot to read, but so far, it is just not doing it for me. The visuals are amazing, though !
Within the Incest story telling universe it's called coercion my friend, you gotta get the messaging correct ;)
BTW, your at the decent part of the story, it's kinda a gradual decline from there IMO, you are right though, the female renders from Daval are top shelf.....
 
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Within the Incest story telling universe it's called coercion my friend, you gotta get the messaging correct ;)
BTW, your at the decent part of the story, it's kinda a gradual decline from there IMO, you are right though, the female renders from Daval are top shelf.....
Coercion/rape, banana/bah-nah-na, pajama/pah-jah-ma, let's call the whole thing off ! LOL Like that song goes. Wait, it gets worse, from here on in ? Gosh and golly. I don't know if I want to continue, then ? :-P See, it would be better if this was more set up as a comedy or a light-hearted tale where both Mom and son, fall into things together, and go from there. This is just blatant ra....I mean, coercion. Ruins the mood for me, anyways. And if I see a dog anywhere, I'm gonna scream !
 
Thanks for all your work with the translations and watermark removal! But might be a slight translation error on this one. Where it says, "He wasn't joking when he said he loves her!", maybe that should be "loves it"??? Thanks again! (y)
You are right justanothernoob, this is the correct dialogue.


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It’s obvious that Daniel spiked Sophia’s wine with the same drug that started this weekend vignette.

Sophia will wake up in the morning and Lana and Daniel will gaslight her, claiming that she is a pervert and that she merely dreamt the whole thing.
 
Coercion/rape, banana/bah-nah-na, pajama/pah-jah-ma, let's call the whole thing off ! LOL Like that song goes. Wait, it gets worse, from here on in ? Gosh and golly. I don't know if I want to continue, then ? :p See, it would be better if this was more set up as a comedy or a light-hearted tale where both Mom and son, fall into things together, and go from there. This is just blatant ra....I mean, coercion. Ruins the mood for me, anyways. And if I see a dog anywhere, I'm gonna scream !
I see nothing like that. The narrative I see is reluctance. Not a fan of the disrespectful bitch or the anal suggestion. The entire taboo of mother son incest is all about reclaiming the birth place, not the poop place. That is consistent with Daniel always wanting Lana to kiss him and wanting to cum in her pussy. Cumming in your own fertile mother is the peak Oedipal taboo.
 
I don't know... everyone probably has their own opinion about the story or the pictures. For me, I think both the story and the pictures are extremely successful and I'm looking forward to every next chapter! Thanks!
 
I don't know... everyone probably has their own opinion about the story or the pictures. For me, I think both the story and the pictures are extremely successful and I'm looking forward to every next chapter! Thanks!
Agreed. I'm quite eager to move away from Martha's villa and back to Alex's and Lana's home.

Lana is going to become an equal partner. The end game is she'll be pregnant and leave Alex because he's a shmuck.
 
It’s crazy how manyvtimes Daniel Cummed in less than 2 days in Martha’s house.

ID 7: three times in the first night
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P.152

ID8: three times in next morning
P.66
P.80
P.91

ID9: five times in the same day afternoon
P.78
P.97 - p.107 bath scene (4 times, one by bj, three in dg style, he couldn’t cum for fifth time)

P.125 (they missed for half hour but not mentioned how much time he cummed so I assume zero)

ID 10: two times
P.68
P.139

In just 2nd day (ID 8 & 9) he cummed 8 times at least, at night same day 2 times.

Also, Lana stayed in ID 9 bath scene for 1 hour in dogystyle on the bath earth, so it’s strange can stay like this for so long and after that there’s no sign of red on her leg after she stand up.

I know it’s just a comic and I like ID I think best now, but still will be good if artist pay attention to some detais.
 
I see nothing like that. The narrative I see is reluctance. Not a fan of the disrespectful bitch or the anal suggestion. The entire taboo of mother son incest is all about reclaiming the birth place, not the poop place. That is consistent with Daniel always wanting Lana to kiss him and wanting to cum in her pussy. Cumming in your own fertile mother is the peak Oedipal taboo.
Great comment man. One of key words of every incest-fantasy story should be RELUCTANCE, or at least a little bit of reluctance, and always from female character, clearly (mom or daughter). While male character (son, father) should be always in one way or another, the initiator. So yeah, no rape here, by any means, just a nice , well written story with conviction, seduction, light coercion and so on. Very exciting, at least first 4-5 chapters, then it became incredibly repetitive and uselessly long. But again, every incest story should actually have few basic key points or principles to follow : Taboo, prohibited, forbidden, seduction/conviction, reluctance, guilt, great passion-pretty hard sex.
 
Great comment man. One of key words of every incest-fantasy story should be RELUCTANCE, or at least a little bit of reluctance, and always from female character, clearly (mom or daughter). While male character (son, father) should be always in one way or another, the initiator. So yeah, no rape here, by any means, just a nice , well written story with conviction, seduction, light coercion and so on. Very exciting, at least first 4-5 chapters, then it became incredibly repetitive and uselessly long. But again, every incest story should actually have few basic key points or principles to follow : Taboo, prohibited, forbidden, seduction/conviction, reluctance, guilt, great passion-pretty hard sex.
As I wrote months ago, the narrative is slowly changing with Lana suffering both guilt and desire. It's going to tear at her. She will slowly, very slowly, give in and turn the dynamic against Daniel. Simultaneously, she remains adamant that her incestuous affair with her son is not discovered.

Sofia is out of picture, because Daniel drugged her, I think. But, Martha overheard details that Daniel doesn't know. Plenty of exciting ways forward, starting with Lana becoming more aggressive and suffering even greater guilt for betraying her morality and Alex.

Alex is definitely the main antagonist going forward as Lana tries to keep this incestuous affair secret. Both lust and guilt will build in Lana. Even Daniel will be concerned.
 
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my problem with the series is that Daval3D completely abandoned the story or any form of storytelling. It took 2 chapters to even create a moment between Daniel and her, and 3 for a sex scene. Even looking back it's a bit rushed for a mom to have sex with her son that fast. The story with the other boys was completely abandoned. And after chapter 3 it feels like they were just going from one room to the next with Lana saying "No we cant do that" to him replying "but you like it" with her thinking "oh yes i do"..... what started off as a decent comic basically is now an endless sex scene.
 
my problem with the series is that Daval3D completely abandoned the story or any form of storytelling. It took 2 chapters to even create a moment between Daniel and her, and 3 for a sex scene. Even looking back it's a bit rushed for a mom to have sex with her son that fast. The story with the other boys was completely abandoned. And after chapter 3 it feels like they were just going from one room to the next with Lana saying "No we cant do that" to him replying "but you like it" with her thinking "oh yes i do"..... what started off as a decent comic basically is now an endless sex scene.
That's not a problem at all... 🤣
 
my problem with the series is that Daval3D completely abandoned the story or any form of storytelling. It took 2 chapters to even create a moment between Daniel and her, and 3 for a sex scene. Even looking back it's a bit rushed for a mom to have sex with her son that fast. The story with the other boys was completely abandoned. And after chapter 3 it feels like they were just going from one room to the next with Lana saying "No we cant do that" to him replying "but you like it" with her thinking "oh yes i do"..... what started off as a decent comic basically is now an endless sex scene.
It’s true sex scene rushed in ch3
The bj could be enough.
And more, in ch3 the did sex scene in front of dad/husband which also more rushed to this step
But overall it’s still I think best comic of current.
 

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