It does not matter. You put in the effort, bought it to our attentiion. For that you deserve my (our) thanks.
Courious though?? what sie was it origionaly posted??
Lana I could wake him up with his cock in my mouth It is just gross and how she refers to her husband who pays the bills makes her like a piece of shit. That evolution of the character is kind of rush I think. And I wonder how many chapters with Lana just fucking Daniel or having his mouth with Daniel's cock may resist without getting repeated itself.
Lana I could wake him up with his cock in my mouth It is just gross and how she refers to her husband who pays the bills makes her like a piece of shit. That evolution of the character is kind of rush I think. And I wonder how many chapters with Lana just fucking Daniel or having his mouth with Daniel's cock may resist without getting repeated itself.
It's very hard to know where your criticism or discomfort about Lana's comment comes from. Because you seem to be upset that Alex is being denigrated, which doesn't make sense, since chapter 3 Daniel has said worse things about his father, like he's an idiot, a cuckold, etc. You also say that Lana's evolution is rushed for saying that, when in previous chapters Lana already had those thoughts, she just didn't express them openly. I don't understand why you have this strange need to say that ID is boring or that it won't be long before it becomes boring, just because in one chapter there is a lot of action, when it had already happened before in chapter 7, where it was also mostly sex, and in chapter 8, where there was more dialogue and you also complained because nothing interesting happened. It's sad that most of the criticisms of ID don't bring a really constructive point of view, but something more empty.
Martha (Lana's friend with ponytail hair) is really hot, she should have comic/story of her own, with both her teen son and mature father, that would be great. Hopefully Daval will use similar model for his next story.