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[Daval3D] Immoral Desires

... didn't happen the wish of lana to wake daniel with his balls in her mouth. but daniel's tongue in her possy. daval did a time trip again NICE !
 
So again the other are drugged by the wine and Lana is got fucked in another round.....lazy writing. I hope Daval3d the story won't develop based on Sofìa and Martha forget everything because of the wine / drug. On the other hand, there were five peopel in that house and during, least to say long long weekend nobody realized the oddly behavior of Daniel and Lana.
 
Hi there good people !
There's been some back and forth, and somehow over the Christmas and New Year, I have lost track on what pages belongs to what chapter.
I have everyting of "Immoral Desires" up to a complete chapter 9. But I don't have anything from chapter 10, and now it looks like pages from chapter 11 is comming.
So a request please: can anyone attach a zip-file of complete chapter 10 (in HQ), and also a zip of all chapter 11-files up to now ?
Much appreciated !
 
these are the main dates....
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..... 1. I wonder if this is true happening and alex will just stay there or enter the room and destroy everything ...
2. or daval play again with lana's mind...
 
Nah, hopefully they will talk, Lana explaining that she found a great lover and real, young man in her son, her son saying that he's in love with his mom and that's it, end of story, everyone lived happily ever after. Yeah, obviously last page should be (narration box writing "5 months later...") Lana with pregnant belly. By the way, i found it really beautiful and exciting image.
 
Daval wont't kill his goose that lays the golden eggs, as it's said Alex won't see Lana and imagine Daniel is having sex with another person. This is the dinamic ten more chapters of Lana and Daniel having sex in wonderful ilustrations but the same lame history of Daniel and Lana deceiving the other and Daniel as a cuckold. The next chapter is Daniel wanting anal Sex and perhaps a girlfriend to make Lana Jeaulous because she wanted to end and in chapter 20 o 21 Lana getting pregnant and Alex celebrating her new son and Daniel going to the University.
 
Somebody, subscriber or whoever please tell Daval that his models tits are way too big, that way it becomes an actual turn-off, non realistic and not exciting stuff.
 
Somebody, subscriber or whoever please tell Daval that his models tits are way too big, that way it becomes an actual turn-off, non realistic and not exciting stuff.
I think it's all a matter of taste. Personally, I like the breasts just the way they are!!
Thx Daval for your great work!!
 
Pool party needs to end. Rumours, gossip, intrigue take over.

Alex back to work. More Daniel and Lana combatting the rumours. That’s the story imo going forward.

Divorce? Pregnancy— yes. Alex either he gets cucked or divorce.

Other characters are unimportant. Just intrigue and Lana hiding her secret. It should arc around that she stomps Daniel for being too brazen.
 

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