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[Daval3D] Immoral Desires

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All this will be pointless because at the end, Daniel will outsmarts them too, he will find a way to delete any recording of them fucking and even ruin their business, we all know that's the outcome, the only way Daval could surprise us is if they actually manage to blackmail Daniel and forces them to make more porn movies... at some point you expect them to run out of plot armor.
 
Daniel better notice something is very suspicious around, why he and Lana are alone in the camp? also after what he encounter against Kiara and Sharon in the hotel with their recording and all that he must know it should be cameras around the place too.

Esther is the only one who can outsmart him here since she proved she's more sneaky than Alexa , he's against 3 girls now so he better knows at least something is very fishy, we know Lana ain't going to notice shit of course, this could be a easy blackmail against him but the stupid plot armor can kick in anytime one of the reasons why this comic fucking sucks ass 💩.
 
Caring is one thing, 90% of the South American mothers are like that, mine included, so I understand Daval, especially if he's from South America too... but going in person to take care of your adult son is a totally different thing! and I know that Daniel lives with them and all, but he's someone who is show as mature and independent, Alex knows that and he's right when he said "he will be fine" because any capable adult can take care of themselves unless they are seriously ill, if that were the case I think even Alex would cancel his festival plan to help his son, but well... every character is dumber than Daniel, they never suspect anything, they never ask for details, it's just another shitty excuse that will work because the plot requires it.

Now I wonder what shitty excuse they will give him when he calls in the next days, if Lana says that Daniel is still sick, Alex will think it's something serious and return, if Lana says that Daniel is fine, Alex will ask her to return because the festival didn't even start yet, the camp will now be like a whole week long, how do you explain that Daniel has been sick a whole week? then they need to return before Alex does... again, the sick excuse works better if it's just for one night or the son is like 12 or so, someone who can't take care of himself, that's why I said that Daval writes with his "other stories" in mind, he doesn't know how to write an adult son.

I feel this whole camp setup would have been better in a more honest approach you know? unfortunately the irrelevant trip to the uncle's house ruined everything, but this whole thing would have been better if:
-Daniel tells Lana about the camp
-They pretend to have a serious beef for X reason (like Daniel not going home that night)
-Lana talks to Alex and proposes a mom/son camp to try to fix things with Daniel and since Alex is stupid he would believe that.

All this would make more sense because in the first issue the story makes clear Daniel and Lana have a bad relationship, so Alex would think they are in bad terms like in the past... no big lies, more freedom, but Daval prefers that fake drama that leads to nothing because there are no consequences at all.
Daval is Spanish, not from South America. But what does your place of origin matter for your mother to love you? Why would it be different or strange for your mother to decide to take care of you knowing that you are sick, regardless of your age? Normally, when you are a planned child and not a mistake, parents in general tend to care about their children at any age, especially mothers. It is not unreasonable for a mother to want to make sure her child is okay and therefore decide not to go on a vacation. On the contrary, it is sadder and more concerning if a mother decides that, since her son is an adult, he should manage on his own or that she will do the bare minimum, while choosing to go to a festival.

The reason why these stories state that all the characters are of legal age is out of courtesy. And it is never made clear that Daniel and Lana have a bad relationship. On the contrary, Lana acts prudish toward Daniel, since in the first issue, he has just returned from a party despite being punished by his father, with Daniel being an “adult,” :sneaky::ROFLMAO:. And Lana decides to cover for him and not tell Alex. If they had a bad mother–son relationship, why would she care about him not being punished, or why would she help him? :p
 
Daval is Spanish, not from South America. But what does your place of origin matter for your mother to love you? Why would it be different or strange for your mother to decide to take care of you knowing that you are sick, regardless of your age? Normally, when you are a planned child and not a mistake, parents in general tend to care about their children at any age, especially mothers. It is not unreasonable for a mother to want to make sure her child is okay and therefore decide not to go on a vacation. On the contrary, it is sadder and more concerning if a mother decides that, since her son is an adult, he should manage on his own or that she will do the bare minimum, while choosing to go to a festival.

The reason why these stories state that all the characters are of legal age is out of courtesy. And it is never made clear that Daniel and Lana have a bad relationship. On the contrary, Lana acts prudish toward Daniel, since in the first issue, he has just returned from a party despite being punished by his father, with Daniel being an “adult,” :sneaky::ROFLMAO:. And Lana decides to cover for him and not tell Alex. If they had a bad mother–son relationship, why would she care about him not being punished, or why would she help him? :p

Don't you think that the fact that he calls his mom "Lana" at the start is a sign that there's bad blood between them? read the first issue again, Daniel doesn't care about Lana at all, he's a rebellious party-lover son who only starts to care about her when he saw her half-naked one night, of course now he loves her but their relationship was not good or normal.

Ok, let's assume that's totally realistic that a mother takes care of her adult son even from a cold, don't you think the father should be worried too? also... again with my main question, how long do you think this bland excuse will work? because this sick excuse would work better if it were just for one night or two, we are talking about a whole week here, I insist that an honest approach would have been better but Daval and his decisions to keep Daniel and Lana separated made it impossible.
 
Don't you think that the fact that he calls his mom "Lana" at the start is a sign that there's bad blood between them? read the first issue again, Daniel doesn't care about Lana at all, he's a rebellious party-lover son who only starts to care about her when he saw her half-naked one night, of course now he loves her but their relationship was not good or normal.

Ok, let's assume that's totally realistic that a mother takes care of her adult son even from a cold, don't you think the father should be worried too? also... again with my main question, how long do you think this bland excuse will work? because this sick excuse would work better if it were just for one night or two, we are talking about a whole week here, I insist that an honest approach would have been better but Daval and his decisions to keep Daniel and Lana separated made it impossible.
The whole illness excuse to bring Lana back is ridiculous and just lazy writting, this comic is silly as a porn film just to enjoy Lana having sex with Daniel again and again in different scenarios. It is just that.
 
Don't you think that the fact that he calls his mom "Lana" at the start is a sign that there's bad blood between them? read the first issue again, Daniel doesn't care about Lana at all, he's a rebellious party-lover son who only starts to care about her when he saw her half-naked one night, of course now he loves her but their relationship was not good or normal.

Ok, let's assume that's totally realistic that a mother takes care of her adult son even from a cold, don't you think the father should be worried too? also... again with my main question, how long do you think this bland excuse will work? because this sick excuse would work better if it were just for one night or two, we are talking about a whole week here, I insist that an honest approach would have been better but Daval and his decisions to keep Daniel and Lana separated made it impossible.
No. In several countries, it's common for children to call their mothers by their first names or by nicknames, like (Ma, Mommy, Ma'am). Some parents are strict and insist on being addressed as "Sir" while others let their children call them by their real names. It depends on the region and upbringing.

Was all of that really in the first issue, with Daniel mistreating Lana and being an uncontrollable bully? Maybe I'm wrong, and this comic isn't porn, but social commentary. Daval is a damn genius. :ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO:

All of the above are your assumptions.;) It's never explicitly stated that; it just shows that Daniel isn't a fan of rules, something that continues to this day. We don't have to assume anything. It's perfectly realistic for a mother to continue caring for and loving her son even though he's no longer a 10-year-old. It's less realistic, and incredibly sad, that once you grow up, your mother stops loving you in the same way. Simply because you're an adult. Fathers aren't usually as affectionate with their children as mothers are. And Alex is neither a model father nor, much less, a model husband.
 
It's pointless to try to explain what, to me, the comic show/hint itself and would make more sense plot-wise for this plan, but also... yeah, it's a fucking porn comic, why I'm trying to find logic in what happens? I was just saying that the excuse was just bad, that it works better for a day or two, not a whole week, Daniel is supposed to be this mastermind but that's the best he could come up with? I really hope it backfires but their plot armor is strong, really strong, to the point that Daniel could tell Alex to his face that he will fuck his wife and he will not suspect anything.

Anyway, leaving that aside! I was thinking... Daval should take advantage of the camp to bring back one of Lana's friend, probably Martha since she's the only one with a confirmed son, it's still a shame that those models are being wasted so it could be something good, don't know what you guys think about the possible mom/son couples we will see soon.
 
The moment the girls changed Daniel and Lana day the incest camp is over , nothing interesting is going to happen there lol Daval ruined it.
 
It's pointless to try to explain what, to me, the comic show/hint itself and would make more sense plot-wise for this plan, but also... yeah, it's a fucking porn comic, why I'm trying to find logic in what happens? I was just saying that the excuse was just bad, that it works better for a day or two, not a whole week, Daniel is supposed to be this mastermind but that's the best he could come up with? I really hope it backfires but their plot armor is strong, really strong, to the point that Daniel could tell Alex to his face that he will fuck his wife and he will not suspect anything.

Anyway, leaving that aside! I was thinking... Daval should take advantage of the camp to bring back one of Lana's friend, probably Martha since she's the only one with a confirmed son, it's still a shame that those models are being wasted so it could be something good, don't know what you guys think about the possible mom/son couples we will see soon.
Like you said, it's up to you. There are many ways to look at it, but that doesn't mean they're right. If Daniel had been a bad son, Lana wouldn't have had a problem punishing him like she did in the third movie. It's not that they had a bad relationship, it's just that Daniel is like that. It's not for nothing that he's always insulting his father.

I never said Daval's excuses were good. Most excuses are bullshit. Liam slept with his aunt in a truck and there were no repercussions. Luke is the biggest cuckold in the galaxy along with Alex and he still doesn't realize it, even though they slept with his wife right in front of them. :ROFLMAO:

But that's not what we were talking about. The problem is that they dismissed it as implausible that a mother with an "adult" son would care about her adult son, seeing it as the weirdest thing in the universe. There are many things to criticize in ID, and they criticized the stupidest of them all. :p As I said, it is very sad that some people consider it strange for a mother to love her child regardless of age.
 
They acting like a married couple already, nice! wonder if Daval has an ending planned of something for them, you can't milk them forever...

I still think that since they will not allow Daniel to fuck Sharon, they should at least use her to trick Alex, get him drunk, make him fuck Sharon thinking it's Lana, record it and boom! divorce! but then you have the problem that they will need to hide they love forever.
 
Honestly, I'm starting to get tired of some users complaining about the same thing over and over again. We understand that some of you don't like how it's going. But for the 80% of people who follow this comic, things are fine the way they are. The last thing I want is a toxic character like Peter in this comic. That user who paid Deval to ruin that comic is more than enough.

From the way the comic is structured, it's clear as day that the plot is Lana/Daniel. Honestly, no matter how beautiful and sexy the other girls/women are, I'm not interested in seeing them in action. All I want is for a chapter where Lana is finally pregnant with Daniel's child (lots of pregnant sex scenes). Then her husband to find out and get the hell out of there. Then, I want to see the two of them fly off to some lawless state, get married, and have sex like rabbits.

After that, I hope Deval creates a new story that still centers on mother-son incest. But in that comic, the son can also have sex with other women and start a small harem. And I repeat, I don't want other men! They're fine for furthering the plot. But for nothing else. I'm not at all interested in seeing other male attributes in comics. Especially not in MMF threesomes. I only and exclusively favor MFF threesomes.

Anyway, getting back to the comic, I hope we get some sex scenes soon, because it's been a while since we've seen Daniel fill Lana's womb :love:
And not only that, but bet ya that the bulk of complainers aren't even paying.
 
True, but subs or not, some of those criticisms are valid, Immoral Desires is an ongoing with a fantastic start, the whole build up until sex in issue 3 is perfect, all the next issues too, then everything changed during the "Martha's house" issues, that's when this comic became this meme:

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Daval is playing it safe with the direction of this comic and yeah it's wholesome seeing Lana and Daniel act as a loving couple, but there are no consequences and that makes the comic a bit boring, no matter the setback Daniel always outsmart everyone so a problem isn't a problem at all, it's all fake drama, that's why most people don't expect much from the camp arc, since once it's over you can summarise it as "just another place for Lana and Daniel to fuck"... Esther, Silvia and Alexa plan will backfire so much that you wonder how much it will affect SN and if there's any way to destroy Lana and Daniel plot armor.

Why keep reading then? because the models and the scenes are still amazing, I can't get enough of Lana's model, their chemistry is great and Daniel is a way better main character than Liam and David combined, both in personality and model.
 
True, but subs or not, some of those criticisms are valid, Immoral Desires is an ongoing with a fantastic start, the whole build up until sex in issue 3 is perfect, all the next issues too, then everything changed during the "Martha's house" issues, that's when this comic became this meme:

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Daval is playing it safe with the direction of this comic and yeah it's wholesome seeing Lana and Daniel act as a loving couple, but there are no consequences and that makes the comic a bit boring, no matter the setback Daniel always outsmart everyone so a problem isn't a problem at all, it's all fake drama, that's why most people don't expect much from the camp arc, since once it's over you can summarise it as "just another place for Lana and Daniel to fuck"... Esther, Silvia and Alexa plan will backfire so much that you wonder how much it will affect SN and if there's any way to destroy Lana and Daniel plot armor.

Why keep reading then? because the models and the scenes are still amazing, I can't get enough of Lana's model, their chemistry is great and Daniel is a way better main character than Liam and David combined, both in personality and model.
sure daval keep the balance between his toughts and his subs. sure he ask the higher level subs for this "characters mix". I believe there will be a mix among ID and the those diddirdirdir...
 
True, but subs or not, some of those criticisms are valid, Immoral Desires is an ongoing with a fantastic start, the whole build up until sex in issue 3 is perfect, all the next issues too, then everything changed during the "Martha's house" issues, that's when this comic became this meme:

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Daval is playing it safe with the direction of this comic and yeah it's wholesome seeing Lana and Daniel act as a loving couple, but there are no consequences and that makes the comic a bit boring, no matter the setback Daniel always outsmart everyone so a problem isn't a problem at all, it's all fake drama, that's why most people don't expect much from the camp arc, since once it's over you can summarise it as "just another place for Lana and Daniel to fuck"... Esther, Silvia and Alexa plan will backfire so much that you wonder how much it will affect SN and if there's any way to destroy Lana and Daniel plot armor.

Why keep reading then? because the models and the scenes are still amazing, I can't get enough of Lana's model, their chemistry is great and Daniel is a way better main character than Liam and David combined, both in personality and model.
"Subs or not, some of those criticisms are valid" fucking finally you opened your eyes that took a while tho, only if you were like that from the beginning things will be different, I was right 😗.
 
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True, but subs or not, some of those criticisms are valid, Immoral Desires is an ongoing with a fantastic start, the whole build up until sex in issue 3 is perfect, all the next issues too, then everything changed during the "Martha's house" issues, that's when this comic became this meme:

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Daval is playing it safe with the direction of this comic and yeah it's wholesome seeing Lana and Daniel act as a loving couple, but there are no consequences and that makes the comic a bit boring, no matter the setback Daniel always outsmart everyone so a problem isn't a problem at all, it's all fake drama, that's why most people don't expect much from the camp arc, since once it's over you can summarise it as "just another place for Lana and Daniel to fuck"... Esther, Silvia and Alexa plan will backfire so much that you wonder how much it will affect SN and if there's any way to destroy Lana and Daniel plot armor.

Why keep reading then? because the models and the scenes are still amazing, I can't get enough of Lana's model, their chemistry is great and Daniel is a way better main character than Liam and David combined, both in personality and model.
Damn this guy 👦 cant understand that everyone has different liking. Daval try to cater accordingly. SN for harem and TO for old guy and NTR and ID for monogamous audience. Pick your option you cant have it all. There are world people with different likings and you need to accept it than trying to convince others for your liking.

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