[Daval3D] Immoral Desires

[Toba1010]

It is said that the blank page terrifies writers, but in literary writing, as for pornographic writing, writers underestimate the reader and choose the easier path that does not cost them difficulty in writing and thinking. I believe that Daval chose the easier path by making everyone have sex with everyone, as in the rest of his stories, and I do not know what happened in His head in order to spoil one of the best pornographic stories, and had it not been for the protest of the subscribers, I do not think he would have retracted his step. It is a translation from my original language, and I apologize for any misunderstanding.

This story arc hasn't even reached parity in the M/s dynamic. The underlying tension is all about sexually frustrated wife and mother of a very horny and hung son. Lana is giving up and is beginning to accept her fate. Alex's disinterest has caused this and Daniel is ready to satisfy. Also, Daval3d has already rejected your storyline.

The last arc after this will have both main characters have to make very important decisions about their illicit relationship, including pregnancy.

 

[Deleted member 8670]

This story arc hasn't even reached parity in the M/s dynamic. The underlying tension is all about sexually frustrated wife and mother of a very horny and hung son. Lana is giving up and is beginning to accept her fate. Alex's disinterest has caused this and Daniel is ready to satisfy. Also, Daval3d has already rejected your storyline.

The last arc after this will have both main characters have to make very important decisions about their illicit relationship, including pregnancy.

"also,Daval3d has already rejected your storyline" he has done this after the protest of subscribers( many dislike)

 

[Deleted member 8670]

The beginning of id 10 is more than wonderful, but when I think that Sofia will discover them, everything is ruined. I hope that Daval will find a solution, either by having her fall down the stairs, or that Daniel hypnotizes her or gets her drunk so that she will not know tomorrow whether what she saw is reality or a dream.

 

[sam211]

hooo what a hot boobs

 

[mickeymc]

The sex time from Lana enters Daniel's room to Sophia catching them is only 30 mins. For me, it was so short. For me, to showcase Lana and Daniel having a wonderful sex time together should be 1 hour or onwards before Sophia finding out what is happening.

 

[djgjhbc]

I think this would be a good plot moving forwards:

Lana confesses everything to Sophia and persuades her to help hide their relationship from Alex. Sophia helps by keeping Alex away from Lana and Daniel, lying for them and plying Alex with alcohol every night. Alex’s drinking gets out of hand, but eventually discovers Lana and Daniel, but it’s too far gone; Lana and Daniel are lovers and Alex is an alcoholic. Lana still loves Alex as her husband, and doesn’t want to leave him, so convinces him to accept Daniel as her lover and he can carry on drinking. She moves into Daniel’s room and everybody is happy. End.

 

[djgjhbc]

Perhaps the final plot twist could be Lana reflecting back that it was Lana’s fantasy since before chapter 1 and she’d set the whole thing up, planting the idea in Daniel’s head.

 

[HellAmigo]

I think this would be a good plot moving forwards:

Lana confesses everything to Sophia and persuades her to help hide their relationship from Alex. Sophia helps by keeping Alex away from Lana and Daniel, lying for them and plying Alex with alcohol every night. Alex’s drinking gets out of hand, but eventually discovers Lana and Daniel, but it’s too far gone; Lana and Daniel are lovers and Alex is an alcoholic. Lana still loves Alex as her husband, and doesn’t want to leave him, so convinces him to accept Daniel as her lover and he can carry on drinking. She moves into Daniel’s room and everybody is happy. End.

Sofia wants Daniela, she will blackmail Lana. Lena allows Daniela Sofia to keep the family together

 

[NewtBlack]

Sofia wants Daniela, she will blackmail Lana. Lena allows Daniela Sofia to keep the family together

Daval3D stated:

I had some options to finish ID9:-

1) lana tells Daniel that she wants to fuck with him and in ID10 start with a long sex scene where at the end of the chapter sofia would discover her secret.

2) that at the end of ID09 sofia discovered the secret to creating expectation, but that in ID10 she started with a long sex scene showing the moments before Sofia comes.

Any of the alternatives sofia would discover the secret and that would start a stage where Daniel and Lana solve that problem together. that's my intention. I'm not going to add Sofia to the relationship, SOFIA IS NOT GOING TO BLACKMAIL THEM FOR SEX. I won't create orgies, Lana won't fuck Uncle Peter NO! NO! NO! none of that will happen and I have to explain that because some subs think I will do all those things.

Sofia will not start to be important to the plot, in fact she will not appear much more. that was my idea but some subs think that now Sofia will be the new protagonist.

This is my comic and I know it.

 

[Johnsina21]

SPOILER | credit: shese

 

[dykan29]

also another edited from sexcomik2 posted in f95 (https://f95zone.to/threads/daval3d-collection-2024-10-10-daval3d.79941/post-15076585) and is cropped in bottom side.. so far all posted pages are coming from sexcomik2....

 

[Johnsina21]

SPOILERS | credit: shese

 

[dykan29]

since posted in f95 will arrive soon here daval.s great ID10. even from sexcomik2 edited they show daval's great work in graphics in story also in dialogs, after very hot-wild fuck scenes in 9 chapters lana is ready to do anything with daniel, so far daval-daniel setup very smart all these chapters so now lana is ready to beg daniel to fuck her. sure daniel will fuck her all ways I wish not anal for now. well done daval...... https://f95zone.to/threads/daval3d-collection-2024-10-10-daval3d.79941/post-15079721

 

[dykan29]

Immoral Desires ID10.(edited)
daval is a master of teaser...

 

[Deleted member 8670]

Immoral Desires ID10.(edited)
daval is a master of teaser...
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he's teasing us not only lana, my clock is set to id update!

 

[Deleted member 8670]

id 10 last update spoiler mainly dialogues plz!

 

[dykan29]

this is not a spoiler but lana saying to daniel after the first orgasm !! ......"I WANT YOU TO FUCK ME RIGHT NOW. THAT'S AN ORDER! I'M YOUR MOTHER. YOU MUST OBEY ME!"
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[Johnsina21]

ID10 | SPOILER | credit: Trile3

Spoiler: Pages: 01-15

Lana tells her son that she needs to talk with him about a problem that was happened tonight because she doesnt have anyone else she can trust. Seeing her in bunny outfit, Daniel thinks that she is driving him crazy on purpose. As she talks how his dad disappointed her again, drunk too much and fal asleep again, he says that he is sorry while looking at her ass trying to play cool and resist urge to squeeze it, thinking about ramming her huge ass in every possible position. Mom tells him that she came here to make her mariage better, but it is gotten worse. She even wear this outfit for Alex, but she isn't important for him anymore. Daniels tells her that dad doesnt value her as he should. Lana finaly noticed Daniel hard cock and lustful way he looks at her "I hope he doesnt get wrong idea. All i want to do is talk and i have nobody else to talk to". She tried to leave, telling him it was mistake to came. Daniel grabs her from behind, fondling her breast "It wasnt mistake, we both know real reason you came here. You knew that i was dying to see you wearing this outfit, so you took your shirt off. You want me to want you". He free her breast and starts to caressing them. She tells him that he is wrong but she is wondering if he is right. He says "Stays with me all night. I'll treat you exactly as you need to be treated. Think about all wild, sexy times we shared today. I know you loved every minte of it". She realize that he is right, her body long to be touched. "Why does he have to be so damn good at this? Why am i so weak for him? I'm getting so hot! Too hot! My entire body is on fire! But i must resist him! I must!". He tells her"I'll fuck you so hard and long that you will forget that dad even exist! Isn't that what you realy want? What do you say mom? Will you stay here with me tonight?" .She kiss him thinking how many times she swore that she will never let him kiss her". How can i resist him at all? He treats me exactly the way I always wished Alex would. Yes, yes son! I am yours and yours alone tonight, all night long! "Daniel realized that mom is giving in "I'll fuck her in every hole untill were both totaly satisfied. It will be fucking epic! "While kissing him passionately she thinks "Who do i keep fooling? I knew when i came here in sexy costume that he will end fucking me. Why cant i just admit what i realy want? Besides he deserve this. Alex keeps loosing me with his stupid selfish action and Daniel keeps wining me with hii superior sexual power." Daniel starts to touch her wet pussy and she felt its flowing like river and that she will starts to scream in frustration if he doest fuck her soon. She ask her son to start to fuck her thinking" We will end up doing absolutely everything! I am going to suck his cock, he damn well better fuck my tits. But mostly he going to fuck me! Doggy-style, cowgirl, missionary. Every damn position there is ! Yessss!. "Daniel starts to eat her from behind and she tells him" Son please hurry allready! You are driving me crazy! "while thinking" Too much! He is making me cum even before he even starts fucking me just with his tongue! Why cant Alex worship and adore me like this? Screw him! He doesnt deserve me!".

ID10 | SPOILER | credit: Trile3

Spoiler: Pages: 16-25

Daniel stick his nose in Lana's asscrack and she cums hard thinking how is always so intense and rush with him, but never with Alex. Lana is shaking with orgasm and begs, Daniel to wait a little before he starts to fuck her so he plays with her tits and kissing her on neck while she recovers. He tells her how much he loves her huge and perfect tits "your body is mine mom at least for tonight, it's all mine and I'm going to own and rule it!". She wonders what he means by that and thinks "It sounds pretty hot! Especially with the way he is running his hands all over my body like it is his personal property. Why oh! why can't Alex treat me like this? I never knew before that I get off on being dominated sometimes. Son, when you talk like that and touch me everywhere like this. Especially when you finger my pussy. It makes me crazy, too crazy! I can't believe what I'm saying this. My pussy is still trembling and gushing from my recent orgasm, but I need you to fuck me already!". He is thinking "Mom is so fuckable! Bit by bit, I really am making her mine. Unfortunately this time is only for tonight, and tomorrow shell have to go back to pretending to be happy with dad. But soon, shell be the one coming to me, begging to get fucked again!". She turn arround and lay on top of him saying "Daniel please stop teasing! I cant take it anymore. You're tormenting me, acting like you can't manage to slip it in. I want you to fuck me right now. That is an order! I'm your mother .You must obey me!". He puts his cock in her pussy and she starts to riding him thinking "That's really hits the spot. Who was I fooling, telling my self, that I wasn't coming here so he could fuck my brains out? He is just so good at it. I've got a real problem, because I'm getting seriously addicted. But I'll worry about that tomorrow. Tonight, I'm going to totally surrender to sexual pleasure!". She tells him "Son, mommy is riding your cock! Look at me! Up and down, up and down, over and over! Do you like that?" and he answered "Ha! Hell Yeah!. As if you have to ask! I'm in motherfucking heaven! Literally!" Meantime, Downstairs Sofia is thinking "I'm getting seriously pissed! This is supposed to be my time to seduce Daniel. What the hell is taking Lana so long?".

 

[Deleted member 8670]

after this update,will daval solve the problem of sofia? i hope so!

 

[Nksat]

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