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[E.C. Gordon] Big Brother Series

Part 20

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Thanks for a great new chapter.
This wonderful story has already presented readers with many unexpected and interesting plot twists that constantly maintain interest in the adventures of the main character, but what turned out to be in the new part simply shocked me! Could Max be killed because of his abilities?! What a surprise! Then of course he should keep his abilities a secret. His family definitely won’t betray him, and it seems to me that Olivia won’t loose her tongue. I hope the situation will normalize soon. Once again I say these words, dear author: you are a GENIUS! and a master of unpredictable plot twists.
 
The last installment took a long time because I kept re-writing the scene with Diane and Olivia. It took me over a month to get it into some sort of shape. To keep my focus, I did write a few chapters following it. I have the first on polished, and rather than wait, I thought I'd go ahead and post the next one now. So here is #28

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