The art and writing in this chapter were amazing. I really miss this kind of thing in Jack and Jill. A scene of surrender and acceptance like this is so good… but the story often gets stuck in the same dilemma, and it sometimes feels like it doesn’t move forward. My favorite story by Emory.
Emory's not the kind of person who forgets.
Page 12-754 Kristine specifically mentions using tattoo cover-up makeup.
My thing was how Alan's appearance has changed substantially from previous episodes and he even looked inconsistent in this one.
That has more to do with these early days of AI and the tech still needing time to get there.
It drew me out of the fantasy a bit though.
The attention to background detail surprised me.
Not sure why Emory never really shows sexual penetration, perhaps Emory hasn't got the hang of rendering it, or finds it displeasing?
I think it had a lot more potential than what were given.
I have always said if your going to do this, always take the time to do it right.
It is grounded in reality and looks nice, for me though it's just not enough considering who made it.
Please Emory don't rush for the sake of getting work out there, think of your Legacy.