Ferocious Gnat
Member
FYI, I've got the next page of Kaptain up on subscribestar.
OldGreyGeek
Active member
Back on post #28 you said
"So when anyone sees the first pages of Kaptain, please let me know your "uncensored" thoughts on it."
Well, when I first read it I was disturbed. I've been disturbed since and I guess it's time to make a comment.
First caveat: 'cept for the cover page I've got no idea where you're planning to go with this. That said...
If you say it's a real story (Background.txt from Patreon post), so be it. Not really an issue here, I think? Anyway, page 2 panel 1 (2-1), 3-1 and 3-3 all appear to indicate that sex with her husband is not something she enjoys. Not just the usual unsatisfied condition but a matter of disgust. Again not at all sure where it's headed but that's a little unsettling at this early stage.
I figure I'll know more when you get past page 5 and I get past the Trust Period.
"So when anyone sees the first pages of Kaptain, please let me know your "uncensored" thoughts on it."
Well, when I first read it I was disturbed. I've been disturbed since and I guess it's time to make a comment.
First caveat: 'cept for the cover page I've got no idea where you're planning to go with this. That said...
If you say it's a real story (Background.txt from Patreon post), so be it. Not really an issue here, I think? Anyway, page 2 panel 1 (2-1), 3-1 and 3-3 all appear to indicate that sex with her husband is not something she enjoys. Not just the usual unsatisfied condition but a matter of disgust. Again not at all sure where it's headed but that's a little unsettling at this early stage.
I figure I'll know more when you get past page 5 and I get past the Trust Period.
Ferocious Gnat
Member
OldGreyGeek,
Thanks for your comments.
Let me try and address your post as best as I can understand:
First off, if you feel disturbed, please let me know a little more about what you find disturbing so I can help you decide if you want to see any more of the comic.
I obviously do not want to upset any viewers. And I am not judging anyone's tastes.
The story is taken from a pulp porn book of the 70's or 80's. It is a "real" story like Fargo was a "real" story. That is, not.
So the story is about a corrupt police chief and the mysterious murder of his lieutenant that the honest cop David wants to solve. His wife wants to help her husband's career and ends up doing things her husband might not approve of. So, Marylin begins sexually repressed due to her upbringing, but ends up much less so by the end of the story. In short the most controversial content is coerced sex, rape and bestiality. There is no gore.
I completely understand if this is not your cup of tea. I was going for something different with this one.
I will still post the updated pictures of Eugene 1, 2 and 3 and will continue part 3 in October.
Thanks
OldGreyGeek
Active member
Appreciate the response and you don't have to worry about me being disturbed or upset; ain't likely to happen on any site you can get subscribers for.
I appreciate that the story is an instantiation of yet another story, real or not (probably not).
What my "issue" was the apparent disgust a wife would have for sex with her husband. Maybe that got portrayed just a little heavy handedly.
So you just keep doing you and don't you worry 'bout me. I'm a firm believer in changing the channel if I don't like the show.
So that should clarify that issue.
Ferocious Gnat
Member
Couple more pages of Kaptain are up. Next week I'll add more Eugene.