Forever Summer [MOONLLY]

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Also in this version since I obviously skipped a lot of scenes and future plot developments, I decided to keep Rika-chan as a trans who didn't undergo any Bottom Surgery ^-^ I'll release a future fan comic for when Raku found out.
 
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Theger320 said:
Here it is guys. I wanted to get your thoughts especially since I'm not a very good writer and I am just doing this since I'm a fan of the series and the characters so I wanted to keep it going. So I deeply apologize to the garbage writing and directions of some scenes and I hope to get your feedbacks soon ^-^ Next part is tomorrow!
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Pt 2 👀?
 
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Theger320 said:
Here you go guys, enjoy! ദ്ദി(˵ •̀ ᴗ - ˵ ) ✧
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Ngl you really have the talent to create this stuff man, even though story and dialogue isn't the best. It definitely can be improved. If you ever feel like creating a story of your own one day, definitely create a patreon. And don't worry about being bad at story and all that, creating and taking action is the most important, and just to remind most of the creators aren't even from english speaking country. Staying consistent and giving your best is really all that matters.
 
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He is really making me want to do that as well.

Churn out like 30 pages. Then go on a long never ending hiatus.

This new passive money making scheme reveled
 
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I feel like this one tells a lot about his mentality.
 
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