[Garak3D] A Desire in the Family

[Garak3D]

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[Mrh69]

Hello everyone

Emily is mentally determined to be Daddy's little slut. When it's her turn, it's going to be epic. I love it

Mother and son are finally being honest with each other. When she tells him to stop, is it because the poison's effects are wearing off, or does she still have doubts?

Her English teacher? It seems the mother has been a bad girl since high school.

I'm interested in seeing these kinds of situations happen more often in public, on the street or on public transport. It would be interesting if, for example, Julia, in her continuous attempt to catch the Joker, gets frustrated or angry about something and decides to go out in her car or take the bus to clear her head. And while she's doing that, she sees mothers/sons, fathers/daughters doing it naturally. It could even be in the office itself with a female police officer and her son

 

[Gnaparelli]

I love this mom, i could easily relate, or better - imagine her as my fantasy mom, almost perfect. Really sexy and exciting, but unfortunately, i didn't like as much both dialogues and entire plot/situation. Dialogues are kind of confused and offsetting, it's not clear who's seducing who, is there actually a seduction, are they under some type of narcotic or what? Then, again, visually and plot-wise i think it would have been better if this type of mother character had been dressed properly, as a classic middle-class, conformist lady/housewife. and then undressed by her son, with realistic underwear and so on, then fucked hard with all remorse and stuff. Just my feedback and my ideas, clearly all coming from my fixation for very realistic situations, characters and plots. Since we are here immersed in DC comics fantasy world, it's hard to ask for realism.

 

[Steelsword40]

I love this mom, i could easily relate, or better - imagine her as my fantasy mom, almost perfect. Really sexy and exciting, but unfortunately, i didn't like as much both dialogues and entire plot/situation. Dialogues are kind of confused and offsetting, it's not clear who's seducing who, is there actually a seduction, are they under some type of narcotic or what? Then, again, visually and plot-wise i think it would have been better if this type of mother character had been dressed properly, as a classic middle-class, conformist lady/housewife. and then undressed by her son, with realistic underwear and so on, then fucked hard with all remorse and stuff. Just my feedback and my ideas, clearly all coming from my fixation for very realistic situations, characters and plots. Since we are here immersed in DC comics fantasy world, it's hard to ask for realism.

The mother/grandmother and daughter had the toxin sprayed on them, but not on your namesake at least as far as we know.

 

[robobob]

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Thank you, thank you

 

[Radnor Arno]

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yeah, thank you

 

[Garak3D]

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[robobob]

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Thanks a loy for the update

 

[Gnaparelli]

Entire scene and dialogues are kind of confusing...i think it should have been created differently, it somehow lacks excitement. As if something is missing here... or simply right characters in wrong situation/plot. This is another proof of how is much better to create different, separate, shorter stories with different characters, than only one, long and complicated story/comic filled with too many characters, it's just hard to follow and quality build-up is almost impossible to create.

 

[pinheiroleo33]

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Good sequence. I'm looking forward to the returning of Jace and Julia plot.

 

[Nippur]

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Great chapter But I have to say it damn you now I have a great question Who is Serena what did she do?

 

[GokuBlackUSA]

Entire scene and dialogues are kind of confusing...i think it should have been created differently, it somehow lacks excitement. As if something is missing here... or simply right characters in wrong situation/plot. This is another proof of how is much better to create different, separate, shorter stories with different characters, than only one, long and complicated story/comic filled with too many characters, it's just hard to follow and quality build-up is almost impossible to create.

I agree with you, the main plot has been lost and now the comic is no longer understandable.

 

[Garak3D]

I agree with you, the main plot has been lost and now the comic is no longer understandable.

Glad ya like it, Goku!

 

[GokuBlackUSA]

Glad ya like it, Goku!

Seriously Garak, you're taking the comic off on tangents. The main plot is Batman and the detective, but you insist on doing whatever you want and not listening to our suggestions.

 

[nightwing]

Seriously Garak, you're taking the comic off on tangents. The main plot is Batman and the detective, but you insist on doing whatever you want and not listening to our suggestions.

Do you listen to yourself, man? He is the fucking artist, for crying out loud! "Our" sugestions shouldn't mean shit to him.

 

[Garak3D]

Fair enough Goku, but I’m not too keen on your overall attitude. So even though I appreciate it, I’m probably not going to change the story for you … like at all. If you want to move on from the story I totally understand. No hard feelings

 

[Deleted member 6150]

Do you listen to yourself, man? He is the fucking artist, for crying out loud! "Our" sugestions shouldn't mean shit to him.

and because it's his comic, garak3d can take it in whatever direction he wants.

 

[Nippur]

and because it's his comic, garak3d can take it in whatever direction he wants.

Of course he can

GokuBlackUSA just made a critic.​

We all know It is free, and the artist owes the reader NOTHING at all, but as any artistic act, is not spared of criticism.. Said that, I have to be clear I don`t agree with him for me the story is great.

 

[Scorpius]

A critique is one thing , but this guy and his duplicated ilk are just mouthing off with nothing solid. Just cause HE doesn’t like it he takes it as the entire message board hates it. Gets real aggressive about it too. So no Garak don’t listen to this guy.

 

[nightwing]

How can it not matter to him? An artist owes everything to his audience. If an artist does whatever he wants, that will simply be the end of him.

Nonsense! If artists are good at what they do, which Garak definitely is, then there will always be fans enough to enjoy their work. You might bicker about his work, but there are plenty of us who think his stories are great.