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[Garak3D] A Desire in the Family

Thanks for checking in at the very least, @Garak3D. I’m all for you doing what you want. Seeing the loudmouths just spouting off in every other part of this forum just proves they can’t be pleased and I get why people just leave the noise.
If you ever post any more pages, or heck, send ‘em to me! lol. I’ll take a look and enjoy like I always have. 👍🏻
 
We’ll definitely see. My motivation to continue definitely went waaay down on this one after no one seemed to like it or at least my perception was I was mostly getting negative. I have new pages but since they were a commission I’ve just been sending them to that person. Maybe once I get to the end I can just share everything in one heap of the guy is cool with that.
Or maybe I’ll work on Strangel! 😉
I would be very sorry to see you leave it at this point, I very much like your comics, don't let some whiners get you down.

OTOH. I would not mind at all to see some new additions to Strangel :D
 
For me, do what you want @Garak3D . We can say our suggestions but in the end, it all depends to you.
But if you'll ask me, maybe it's about time to start in making IWMM2. You know that many wants it. Maybe it will help you to be inspired if you'll see the positive comments for it. And I'm so sure that it will draw many likes and hearts.

Be Happy!
 
We’ll definitely see. My motivation to continue definitely went waaay down on this one after no one seemed to like it or at least my perception was I was mostly getting negative. I have new pages but since they were a commission I’ve just been sending them to that person. Maybe once I get to the end I can just share everything in one heap of the guy is cool with that.
Or maybe I’ll work on Strangel! 😉

I have always thought that the author of a work must be autonomous when executing a story, whether it seems good or bad to his fans. So you just continue with your ideas and move forward ;)
 
I think you, as an artist and storyteller, shouldn't be looking at community feedback as a PRIMARY source of guidance.

You should always prioritize telling the story you want to tell, in whatever pace you want. When it comes to this story, in my opinion, it's good, or at least has the potential to be. It's all about setup and payoff, and that vision, perseverance and time, both real and in-story.
Where I *personally* lose interest is in the setting itself. Because you're using already established characters in an already established universe (Batman), it feels like a parody, even though the story is original and unique, just the presence of the characters makes me feel that way.

However, I do encourage you to finish this despite the reception, whether good or bad. It'll make you feel good and most importantly, you'll improve with each finished project.

If you feel like the community perception is getting in your way of creating what you want, then you might want to reconsider the way you release your content.
Dripping content on weekly basis like Pegasus Smith, Daval3D and MandoLogica only works if your story is already set in stone and don't care about community perception influencing you, and even then that's not easy.
Pegasus Smith learned that the hard way in Au Naturel #10 with an NTR attempt, considering his audience is mainly "somewhat" pure Incest fans, that didn't go over too well and the backlash was great enough to where he wouldn't try that again. In fact, I would say that experience taught him a thing or two about pacing, character relationship development and long term storytelling. Which actually bled into his other IP "Timmy strikes back" and is very noticable when you compare the chapters that were release post AN#10 at the same time.
Keep this in mind, if you were to only listen to your audeince, you would be on your 6th IWMM issue with 30th Parker and Dawn scene by now... and a Shay scene here and there (... what, I want my Shay ♥)...
Non the less, if you're easily influenced, then this isn't the schedule for you.

I feel like the old school "make the whole comic, then ship it out all an once" approach would benefit you more, especially since your comic issues are on the longer side (343 pages of IWMM and ADitF #1 >200 pages), or you can split them into 2-3 smaller "to be contined" 100ish pages. Again, just a suggestion.
That way you can do your work in peace unifluenced by others and take feedback after.

One thing I observed with the community is, just like everywhere else, there is a silent majority and a vocal minority, so you really should just treat this platform as a way for community to discuss and argue. In my country we have a saying "Sto ljudi, sto ćudi", which means "hundred people, hundrted wonders" meaning you can't please everyone and nor should you try to.
Another thing is that "less is more" more often than not, and I'm refering to sex scenes here. It's better to have fewer with more meaning than many that feel like fetish checklist, especually with the main cast of characters. However do keep in mind that there should be a good balance of both considering these are porn comics after all.

This industry is a niche by itself and there are communites around each genre, some bigger, some smaller. However, a good story can go above that, case in point, Himero's "Bucket list", a proof that you can even make and "old man/daughter" incest appeal to a wider audience just on the back of good writing and characters.

I hope you don't see this as critique, but rather as an advice and encouragement. I do hope you continue to create, and on the side note (come on, no way you didn't expect this, I think you saw enough of my messages by now) I hope you continue IWMM story one day, I feel like that one is a lightning in a bottle filled with potential.
Best of luck mate :D
Well said and I second that!
 
We love you garak ,please continue the story🙏👍🏼🗣🦸🏾‍♂️

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Is there at website\platform do you use for commission work? Like patreon or subscribestar. I would love to pay to read more of your work especially the latest comic of Batman
 
God bless you man!!! thanks a lot for once again an amazing update!!! your story is at the moment one of my top five, just loving it!!!

yes he did, around the last days of May he said he would take a longer break. So maybe he takes a summer break and will be back around end of September early October o even his break will take longer then that, we will see
funny so I had a feeling it would be around September, I'm really glad that you did!!!
 
God bless you man!!! thanks a lot for once again an amazing update!!! your story is at the moment one of my top five, just loving it!!!


funny so I had a feeling it would be around September, I'm really glad that you did!!!
I agree, thanks for the update, great story great artwork difinitely one of the best
 
Hello Garak3D.

It's a pleasure to have you back with this great story you've created. I haven't written anything until you decided to come back properly. I've followed the forum from time to time and I know that you've had a certain downturn due to criticism from some users (either because they don't like the story or because you don't upload more content). You know perfectly well that many of us support your work and value your effort with this comic. Your meticulousness in every detail is impressive, I'll never tire of telling you that. You've made and continue to make a great story that captivates. I don't know if you'll continue doing this for a long time, like Pegasus Smith, but you will be respected, whatever decision you make about continuing, how to write this story, etc. It's your work and yours alone, and only you know how to get it done.

And now, focusing on the comic, I must say that it's impressive. For example, the drops of sweat look almost authentic, it must be a monumental job to make them one by one. As well as the eyes of the mothers.

I have to admit that at first, imagining a fight between Batman and the mothers wouldn't have pleased me very much, but after these new images I must say that I'm captivated. Seeing the mothers in a "wild" mood to defend their sons and their cocks seems almost "natural".

-Will the mothers have a headache or something that stops them?
-Will the sons suddenly wake up and save Batman?
-Will the mothers have to receive their "dose" for the rest of their lives?

PS: waiting to see if this affects Commissioner Gordon and if Barbara will have to "cure" him hahaha

Looking forward to seeing how the story progresses.

My greetings
 
Garak3D! I am delighted to see you well 😊

And it is an arousing joy to watch this series be continued!
I love to see the two mothers being very protective and territorial about their sons, interesting to see how the serum is working into their minds. For some, inhibiting supressed incestual desires, and implanting them on others. As well as boosting their stamina... my oh my! I need that serum haha!

I don't want to influence you, this story as it is, comming out of your mind is amazing ❤️‍🔥
 

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