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[Garak3D] A Desire in the Family

Hi Garak3D.

I wanted to tell you something I just noticed in the comic.

I see that the first mother who fights Batman is Mrs. Myers. But when I re-read some previous pages when Batman arrives at the place and faces Insane Father (page 80), he says that the missing boys are David Myers and Liam Charlton. This led me to re-read the pages of the whole little plot of these two mothers and their sons in this warehouse (after the flashback with Martha Wayne) and I realized that there was a mistake, when the Joker arrives and says the names of both mothers and sons. Let me explain:

-Jessica, the mother who first fights Batman and who he has called Mrs. Myers, is Liam's mother (while she tries to call him while they fuck and the Joker himself when he "takes an interest in her situation").

-And the second mother, who knocks Batman down, is Tricia, David's mother.

What I'm getting at is that I think you've got the last names wrong. Instead of correcting everything, I'd suggest:

Either you change Liam and David's last names on page 80 (which is on page 13 of the forum, when Batman faces Insane Father), or faster still, you change the last name by which Batman addresses the first mother, Jessica, on page 88 (page 16 of the forum). Instead of Mrs. Myers, it should be Mrs. Charlton.

I guess that with how far the comic has come, it's normal for these things to happen.

I'm sorry for be meticulous about this, but I have a habit of paying close attention to details, as I've told you many times.

My regards 👍
 
Hi Garak3D.

I wanted to tell you something I just noticed in the comic.

I see that the first mother who fights Batman is Mrs. Myers. But when I re-read some previous pages when Batman arrives at the place and faces Insane Father (page 80), he says that the missing boys are David Myers and Liam Charlton. This led me to re-read the pages of the whole little plot of these two mothers and their sons in this warehouse (after the flashback with Martha Wayne) and I realized that there was a mistake, when the Joker arrives and says the names of both mothers and sons. Let me explain:

-Jessica, the mother who first fights Batman and who he has called Mrs. Myers, is Liam's mother (while she tries to call him while they fuck and the Joker himself when he "takes an interest in her situation").

-And the second mother, who knocks Batman down, is Tricia, David's mother.

What I'm getting at is that I think you've got the last names wrong. Instead of correcting everything, I'd suggest:

Either you change Liam and David's last names on page 80 (which is on page 13 of the forum, when Batman faces Insane Father), or faster still, you change the last name by which Batman addresses the first mother, Jessica, on page 88 (page 16 of the forum). Instead of Mrs. Myers, it should be Mrs. Charlton.

I guess that with how far the comic has come, it's normal for these things to happen.

I'm sorry for be meticulous about this, but I have a habit of paying close attention to details, as I've told you many times.

My regards 👍

Had to check it myself haha!
You are right, well spotted! Yes, the correct names should be Jessica Charlton and Tricia Myers and as you said, only one single image would need an edit.
Here the mentioned dialogue with the mixed names XD

Family names.jpg
 
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@Mrh69! You sir, win the No-Prize! lol.

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Good catch! & I thought I didn't mix that up ... must have mixed it up while trying not to mix it up!

The Page is Updated!

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My only regret is now that version is out there FOREVER on all the sites. I'm looking at YOU svscomics! :rolleyes: ;)
 
Thanks, Garak3D.

The truth is, I haven't done it for any mention or reward in general. Just that when I see an interesting story (be it a book, comic, series, movie...), I like to maintain the narrative coherence of it. And respect the creation made by the author, being a fan, sponsor, etc.

This Batman story is very attractive and I would like it to have not only an ending, but also a development worthy of Batman himself hahaha

As for the fact that now that version is on all the websites, that's the only thing to regret. Here's an example:


PS: sorry once again, but I just realized that the next page, number 89 (when the mother tries to hit Batman) would also have to be updated. AND THAT'S IT, I PROMISE.

Being so meticulous will be the end of me 🤣🤣

My regards 👍
 
Aaannd Page 89 is Updated as Well. :)(y)

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Yeah, I noticed even when I update they don't update these other sites - they just want content fast and now. Sucks.
 
Well, our Dark Knight was almost in for a bit of a hard time.

Back in flashback with Bruce's parents. It's been a while since Martha and Bruce showed up.

Wonder Woman? This totally caught me off guard. Does this mean the comic is going from being about Batman to being about the Justice League? LOL. Hopefully Diana's appearance in this story will be interesting.
 
Please Garak, continue with this series, this story is one of the most interesting I've seen in years, you are an excellent artist, and we are looking forward to more, please continue (sorry for my bad English)
 

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