[Garak3D] A Desire in the Family

[Garak3D]

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[ComicsparaAdultosVIP]

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and when is sex?

 

[Scorpius]

I kinda hope Garak drags it out just to personally annoy you.

 

[ComicsparaAdultosVIP]

I think there's more sex in the original Batman comics at DC

 

[Scorpius]

Says there's "more sex in the Batman comics". Shows a scene with no sex.
Dude, go away. You don't like the story, you're sore that Garak won't do comics for your website. Go to a thread for a story you do like.

 

[ComicsparaAdultosVIP]

Says there's "more sex in the Batman comics". Shows a scene with no sex.
Dude, go away. You don't like the story, you're sore that Garak won't do comics for your website. Go to a thread for a story you do like.

Learn to accept constructive criticism, crystal generation

 

[Scorpius]

Learn to accept constructive criticism, crystal generation

You're just a whiny jerk. No one has to accept anything from your type, degeneration.

 

[brotech11]

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Looks great; I love the buildup and anticipation of the sex!

 

[Danuta]

Learn to accept constructive criticism, crystal generation

That's not constructive criticism. You just blurted "and when is sex?" which is exactly a comment as shallow, as the content that you expect to get from an erotic/porn comic. You complain because you lack the erotic finesse to enjoy realistic characters and sexual tension buildup.

There are countless works out there, with flat characters mindlessly getting into sexual intercourse within one sentence. Which is fine if you need your five-minute premature ejaculation. Just leave this thread for the people who enjoy good erotica.

 

[cooldude2324]

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Thank Garak3d, looks great don't listen to Comicsadultosvip.

 

[Gnaparelli]

Not bad, i like how they, again- pretty realistacally - are verbally getting to the sex-topic, and two of them are getting closer... Wine, chess, just keeping company... step by step, phrase after phrase, they are now touching sensible subject. I hope that he will be the initiator, trying and seeking more and more, first with words, then physically. But it will be interesting to see what you will use as a "trigger-point" to get over the taboo-hump. One more thing, as i said before - i think she maybe could/should have been created little bit more mature, i'm talking like a wrinkle here, another sign of age there... but maybe, hopefully we will see her maturity once she's naked, on her tits and ass... hopefully soon.

 

[Garak3D]

Just remember ... let my art bring us together. Not tear us apart! ​

 

[Mrh69]

It's true, Garak3D. I know you're going to bring us an incredible story with some amazing moments. We just have to be patient. Looking forward to what you have prepared for us.

 

[Bellerophon]

Martha must be really drunk. There is no check;-) Really great build up. To me this is much hotter than most sex scenes and will make the sex sooooo much hotter! Would support you on Subscribestar.

 

[Garak3D]

I think there's more sex in the original Batman comics at DC

I love when they have sex scenes in the comics ... even if most are implied. It's still hot!!

Looks great; I love the buildup and anticipation of the sex!

Thanks @brotech11! ... I'll be the first to admit, I'm doing alot of build up in this one. I don't blame anyone for not hanging on.
But if you do ... I salute you.

That's not constructive criticism. You just blurted "and when is sex?" which is exactly a comment as shallow, as the content that you expect to get from an erotic/porn comic. You complain because you lack the erotic finesse to enjoy realistic characters and sexual tension buildup.

There are countless works out there, with flat characters mindlessly getting into sexual intercourse within one sentence. Which is fine if you need your five-minute premature ejaculation. Just leave this thread for the people who enjoy good erotica.

I appreciate it, @Danuta! It definitely seems like I'm delaying alot of things, but it's honestly my schedule. I work on the comic when I can ... and go where I want to go. I wanted to do a chess game ... even though I don't play chess! & it's modelled after real game. lol. I'll try to make ya think everything is worth the wait for the sex scenes.

Thank Garak3d, looks great don't listen to Comicsadultosvip.

Thanks again @cooldude2324! I listen to no one but myself on this one. I don't blame anyone for having their opinions for sure ... but some are a little more "aggressive" than others. Won't change anything I'm doing ... and besides, maybe it's a chance to catch up on some Z's for some people. ha ha

It's true, Garak3D. I know you're going to bring us an incredible story with some amazing moments. We just have to be patient. Looking forward to what you have prepared for us.

Much appreciated, @ Mrh69.

Martha must be really drunk. There is no check;-) Really great build up. To me this is much hotter than most sex scenes and will make the sex sooooo much hotter! Would support you on Subscribestar.

Yep, Martha is gettin' tipsy for sure. Let's see where it leads!

 

[Dustellar]

I'm loving it, let the man cook, you know the sex scenes will be great with such build up.

 

[mickeymc]

I think the build up is very good and it will make the sex scenes worth waiting.

 

[Steelsword40]

Wow ! new update. Thank you Garak3d. The build up is great, as a lover of chess I like how you are using it, thru there interaction. (also if you don't think chess can be sexy, there is a movie with Steve McQueen and Fay Dunaway that dispels that notion, can't remember the name though . I think Martha is very lonely her husband is very busy running the Wayne billions and is also a doctor. So I think he's neglecting his wife and son. Which is bringing them together. as always can't wait to the next update.

 

[robobob]

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Thanks a lot Garak3D for sharing

 

[Garak3D]

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