[InCase] Alfie

[lamythefirst]

Will the story ever get exciting again?

I don't think so.

 

[lamythefirst]

Even the best story ends at some point ...

[InCase] Alfie Chapter 18 Page 106:

Artist's note:
"Hey, look at this! The last page of the story! Well, there’s still the epilogue coming up – after a break – but this is it as far as the main storyline goes. These two dummies found a way to have a relationship that doesn’t stink. Yeehaw!

I was gonna write more here, but I pulled some back muscle on my vacation and writing hurts. So this is all you get. Expect the epilogue to begin in the first half of may.

See ya!"

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[Fanboy]

That was a really surprising end.

 

[lamythefirst]

That was a really surprising end.

Yeah, indeed, but every story has to end at some point.

 

[anayachandra]

[InCase] Alfie Chapter 10:

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wow.. nice style and color

 

[lamythefirst]

wow.. nice style and color

You're welcome.

 

[justanothernoob]

Artist has started back, at least to finish the story in color. Here is [InCase] Alfie Chapter 18 pages 88 - 106, 1196x1800, 15.4mb total



Edit, found more colored pages, post updated

 

[StarTreeZOO]

Alfie epilogue​

A little preview of how the work is going. Page 1 out of 33 is mostly finished.

 

[Booger]

Lovin' the colored versions.
They look awesome ...

 

[Emilyvt]

Alfie epilogue​

A little preview of how the work is going. Page 1 out of 33 is mostly finished.

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Was she always supposed to look green?

 

[Feenus]

Was she always supposed to look green?

Looks like there's been a timeskip since the final chapter ended. Alfie's hair is longer again and coloured differently, and she's back near the redwoods from earlier in the series. Final chapter she ends with a pair of blue bangs, epilogue has a single green strand. That may also be one of the goblins behind her which would mean a significant cultural shift in others as until now they were all looked down upon as nothing more than chaos gremlins who stole, fucked, and disrupted anything they could. For an inn to actually let one stay says a lot about how they would be considered now, let alone how the goblin herself is behaving rather than giving in to the stereotypical kleptomania and nymphomania the entire species has been show with.

Still feels like the ending was quite flat and rushed, possibly because of the recurring hand/wrist issues the artist has had for a long time now. Whether going cold turkey and stopping all work in the meantime would have meant a better original finish or not is debatable since it may have also had other financial problems if he did stop so suddenly.

Also the fact Alfie never once did anal in the entire thing just seems like a wasted opportunity. Even if this epilogue includes some, or just more sex in general, it could feel like something of an emergency pull long after the fact, as is often the case with epilogues and other works that come out long after the supposed end.

MHA for example did something similar with the potential relationship many readers had wanted for years between Izuku and Ochacho. Finally alluding to it happening on something like the very last chapter of a tacked on epilogue felt more like a reaction to a poor reception from readers to both that and other features of the finale.