[Incognitymous] Power Pack - Chain Reaction Discussion Thread

GoogaPuss said:
Remember how most of the Kai-Ben pages were reuses?
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Yeah, i was thinking how that scene was getting boring until some user pointed out how incog draw basically the same page over and over during the scene.
In this case, if the panel in the bottom was drawn from a different perspective, like in front of them it would have been fine, but the last two pages look way too similar to each other, like an alternate version of the same one.
The panels in the bottom of the two pages look almost the same.
 
JillK said:
Yeah, i was thinking how that scene was getting boring until some user pointed out how incog draw basically the same page over and over during the scene.
In this case, if the panel in the bottom was drawn from a different perspective, like in front of them it would have been fine, but the last two pages look way too similar to each other, like an alternate version of the same one.
The panels in the bottom of the two pages look almost the same.
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It was me, I was the one who pointed it out during the Kai-Ben arc... It was really annoying because It was a solid scene, just that the positions and panels were so damn similar, that the wait between pages, only to get a new page that was almost EXACTLY the same as the previous felt like a real cop out...

But like I said back then, I'm not a subscriber to Incog, so I can hardly complain tbh, but it's still a valid criticism.
 
I think that not only the art has gotten boring the story as well. I mean its just settled into a suck n fuck story that most artists use anywhere from 3 to 10 pages to do.
 
DLitaly said:
The "look like copy/paste of page 161 and 162
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I got to say, that now with the colors is not as bad as it looked like in black and white.
The different background in the two panels does make some difference, even though the two pages still look quite the same.
Donut87 said:
It was me, I was the one who pointed it out during the Kai-Ben arc... It was really annoying because It was a solid scene, just that the positions and panels were so damn similar, that the wait between pages, only to get a new page that was almost EXACTLY the same as the previous felt like a real cop out...

But like I said back then, I'm not a subscriber to Incog, so I can hardly complain tbh, but it's still a valid criticism.
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I remember someone pointed that out but i didn't remember it was you.
But you were right, that scene was getting stale and i couldn't exactly say why until you pointed that out.
Anyway, i think incog is a great artist and does some awesome stuff ( I wouldn't be here to look for his comics, otherwise) but that doesn't mean it is always flawless and safe from criticism.
 
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Yeah. The story kinda petered out around page 110 or there abouts. Now its just fuck and suck.

Do you know why the movie "Deep Throat." was looked at at as a breakthrough movie? It was the first of it's kind to have a story and plot.
 
Barkin10 said:
Yeah. The story kinda petered out around page 110 or there abouts. Now its just fuck and suck.
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Now it's "just fuck and suck" simply because things are escalating and most likely this is the final chapter.
Alex did it Julie, so Jack did it with Katie.
Then Katie did it with Alex, and now Jack is doing it with Julie.
The only thing missing now is all of them doing it together, so i don't think there's still need for much "plot" at this point.
Probably there will be some "plot" when the four of them reunite again right before the final orgy, but i don't think it will be anything major.
(Not that there needs to be any)
 
I actually think the problem with Chain Reaction now is the lack of story or plot, just being a normal hentai is boring.
Or maybe I just dislike Jack and Julie together and I'd rather have more Alex and Julie (but tbh there's not much Incog could do with them either anyway)

I think this scene could improved if they were in a different location, or Julie being in awe of Jack's abilities, maybe something to do with their parents almost walking on them and both having to be quiet, clothed sex, etc
 
I already wonder what Incog is planning for the final foursome orgy, i just hope it will be good and long enough.
 
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