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Unfortunately, there's no way for the story to stop now. You can give Lester and Sarah a break and develop other parts of the story. You can close the hospital arc (Lester getting revenge on everyone for Sarah), the good thing is that you don't need to keep focusing on sex. There's also Dan's arc with the possibilities: 1. We have Trisha being able to evolve in her attacks on Dan, everything they see happening is too much, for Dan to endure alone, there are consequences for everything Sarah and Lester put him through, 2. Dan's revenge is to look for the former tenant. We have a lot of things for fights between Dan and Sarah. When Dan goes to play video games with the girls and sees that his progress has been erased (Dan didn't evolve much in the game, because it was something he did with his daughters), Sarah complains and says he's a whiny little boy because of his game, with Lester playing with the children only talking badly about Dan, the children not liking it. While Dan travels and advances in his work, Lester fucks Sarah at night and when the kids are away, and when they are home, Lester makes small, despising remarks about the children. I think the story ends in chapter 50. Chapter 35 sees the argument and Dan considering divorce for the first time (his daughters weren't respected, and Sarah doesn't care about them). Any father would be worried about leaving his daughters around their mother, who is behaving like a slut, directly influencing their character development. Sarah has already forgotten her daughters to fuck Lester, she has fucked Lester with the kids at home, and she had sex in the kids' bed (these are warning signs any father would be alert to). In chapter 20... The receptionist led Dan to a corner office, where Jesse was sitting behind a wide desk, staring intently at something on his laptop screen. His eyes flashed at Dan, and a mischievous smile quickly spread across his face.

"Thank you, Trisha," he said, waving his wrist to dismiss the receptionist. "Dan, how are you? You look better than the last time I saw you."

Now would be the time for Trisha to ask Dan what happened, making him look so miserable, with a sad and worried look.
 
Unfortunately, there's no way for the story to stop now. You can give Lester and Sarah a break and develop other parts of the story. You can close the hospital arc (Lester getting revenge on everyone for Sarah), the good thing is that you don't need to keep focusing on sex. There's also Dan's arc with the possibilities: 1. We have Trisha being able to evolve in her attacks on Dan, everything they see happening is too much, for Dan to endure alone, there are consequences for everything Sarah and Lester put him through, 2. Dan's revenge is to look for the former tenant. We have a lot of things for fights between Dan and Sarah. When Dan goes to play video games with the girls and sees that his progress has been erased (Dan didn't evolve much in the game, because it was something he did with his daughters), Sarah complains and says he's a whiny little boy because of his game, with Lester playing with the children only talking badly about Dan, the children not liking it. While Dan travels and advances in his work, Lester fucks Sarah at night and when the kids are away, and when they are home, Lester makes small, despising remarks about the children. I think the story ends in chapter 50. Chapter 35 sees the argument and Dan considering divorce for the first time (his daughters weren't respected, and Sarah doesn't care about them). Any father would be worried about leaving his daughters around their mother, who is behaving like a slut, directly influencing their character development. Sarah has already forgotten her daughters to fuck Lester, she has fucked Lester with the kids at home, and she had sex in the kids' bed (these are warning signs any father would be alert to). In chapter 20... The receptionist led Dan to a corner office, where Jesse was sitting behind a wide desk, staring intently at something on his laptop screen. His eyes flashed at Dan, and a mischievous smile quickly spread across his face.

"Thank you, Trisha," he said, waving his wrist to dismiss the receptionist. "Dan, how are you? You look better than the last time I saw you."

Now would be the time for Trisha to ask Dan what happened, making him look so miserable, with a sad and worried look.
I like this concept...if only...
 
Here's a summary of some couples from some stories I read, with different situations:

Lauren and Corey (married for many years): When Ryder crossed the line, she broke up with Ryder right away. And she got Corey back. Sarah: When Lester mistreats Dan and says he's jealous, Sarah is getting Dan back. Lester sends Sarah upstairs, and Dan then goes to the basement. Sarah doesn't get her husband back (instead, she violates her daughters' bed).

Daisy with Ash: Conner is in trouble after an accident. When Ash starts attacking her husband, he defends her. Conner is sexually broken and doesn't have cuckold kinks.

Julia and Tom: They don't have children. Tom awakened his wife's sexuality, but he was cut off and betrayed and knows he'll never be able to satisfy her. Her wife likes sex and Devon. Julie wanted Devon. Not the man himself, but the sex. She loved me, but she didn't want to give up this new side of herself. New adventures and feelings. # Just like Dan and Sarah, the consequences and the end of their marriage.

Ashley and Jacob are a young couple, only a few years into their marriage. But Jacob isn't a coward; he confronted Carlos. Life went on; Dan couldn't face Lester, who depended on him financially.

Louise and Johnny: Johnny sent Louise to Tony's hands, and he had only one rule: to know and use a condom. Just like Sarah, she lost her career, fell into the clutches of a teenager, and cut Johnny off from sex altogether.
Emily was waiting for Johnny, and Trisha is waiting for Dan. Sarah leaving Dan aside will take Dan away from Sarah. Tony makes Louise lose her sense of everything, just as Lester does with Sarah.

Nolan and Grace have a conversation, and Nolan regrets it. "...So, how do you feel? Knowing Nate slept with your girl?" she added, wanting more of that dirty talk to encourage him.

Nolan swallowed and cleared his throat, shifting in his chair as he tried to find the words.

"It's... weird," he admitted. "I mean, I knew that was a possibility when we started all this, but it's different hearing about it, knowing it happened and there's no going back. That another man knows how you... feel."

Grace smiled and squeezed his hand again. "I know," she said. "And I'm sorry if it hurts. But I also find it kind of arousing knowing that someone else has been inside me. That another man has claimed me, and that you have to deal with that."

Nolan took a deep breath. That had hurt him. But before Grace could continue, Nolan spoke. "I can't deny that it hurts to hear that, that you could consciously choose to hurt my feelings for your own pleasure," he said. "But you're right. I find it kind of arousing. Not just kind of arousing. Really arousing, actually. Knowing that you're being shared, that you're not just mine, even though you still are."

Grace nodded, her heart swelling at the revelation.

"That's why I think we need to continue this journey together," Grace said. "We're both learning new things about ourselves and our relationship. But that comes with maturity. You need to deal with the fact that I'm going to explore with Nate, and you need to accept that. And I need to accept the fact that you're dealing with your own emotions about this. But we can do this together."
 
Here goes Cumbunny ch. 12 Edited by RabbleLaid

"Look at how fucking weak he is," growled Gene in her ear, his cock pistoning upward into her ass with greater and greater speed, making molten pleasure flood her veins. 'I'm fucking his wife's ass in front of everyone, and he can't do shit. He always was a weak fucking cuck on the inside, Lizzie. You were always destined to be stolen by a stronger man like me."

Eliza shook her head, trying to deny it. But the truth was… David did look weak right now. He was stuck in the crowd, watching, while his well-hung enemy fucked his wife. The seeds that Gene had planted in her mind bore twisted fruit. Her weak, pathetic beta of a husband being so publicly defeated was only driving her closer to orgasm.

If the husband is weak for his inaction, how weak is the wife for giving in to the predator? 🤷

I haven't read this series, so this is probably out of context, but that text would signal they're both victims and their relationship has been destroyed by the creep.
 
Here's a summary of some couples from some stories I read, with different situations:

Lauren and Corey (married for many years): When Ryder crossed the line, she broke up with Ryder right away. And she got Corey back. Sarah: When Lester mistreats Dan and says he's jealous, Sarah is getting Dan back. Lester sends Sarah upstairs, and Dan then goes to the basement. Sarah doesn't get her husband back (instead, she violates her daughters' bed).

Daisy with Ash: Conner is in trouble after an accident. When Ash starts attacking her husband, he defends her. Conner is sexually broken and doesn't have cuckold kinks.

Julia and Tom: They don't have children. Tom awakened his wife's sexuality, but he was cut off and betrayed and knows he'll never be able to satisfy her. Her wife likes sex and Devon. Julie wanted Devon. Not the man himself, but the sex. She loved me, but she didn't want to give up this new side of herself. New adventures and feelings. # Just like Dan and Sarah, the consequences and the end of their marriage.

Ashley and Jacob are a young couple, only a few years into their marriage. But Jacob isn't a coward; he confronted Carlos. Life went on; Dan couldn't face Lester, who depended on him financially.

Louise and Johnny: Johnny sent Louise to Tony's hands, and he had only one rule: to know and use a condom. Just like Sarah, she lost her career, fell into the clutches of a teenager, and cut Johnny off from sex altogether.
Emily was waiting for Johnny, and Trisha is waiting for Dan. Sarah leaving Dan aside will take Dan away from Sarah. Tony makes Louise lose her sense of everything, just as Lester does with Sarah.

Nolan and Grace have a conversation, and Nolan regrets it. "...So, how do you feel? Knowing Nate slept with your girl?" she added, wanting more of that dirty talk to encourage him.

Nolan swallowed and cleared his throat, shifting in his chair as he tried to find the words.

"It's... weird," he admitted. "I mean, I knew that was a possibility when we started all this, but it's different hearing about it, knowing it happened and there's no going back. That another man knows how you... feel."

Grace smiled and squeezed his hand again. "I know," she said. "And I'm sorry if it hurts. But I also find it kind of arousing knowing that someone else has been inside me. That another man has claimed me, and that you have to deal with that."

Nolan took a deep breath. That had hurt him. But before Grace could continue, Nolan spoke. "I can't deny that it hurts to hear that, that you could consciously choose to hurt my feelings for your own pleasure," he said. "But you're right. I find it kind of arousing. Not just kind of arousing. Really arousing, actually. Knowing that you're being shared, that you're not just mine, even though you still are."

Grace nodded, her heart swelling at the revelation.

"That's why I think we need to continue this journey together," Grace said. "We're both learning new things about ourselves and our relationship. But that comes with maturity. You need to deal with the fact that I'm going to explore with Nate, and you need to accept that. And I need to accept the fact that you're dealing with your own emotions about this. But we can do this together."
Well Nolan is stupid , why even make the comment about his hurt feeling just to say that it didn't really matter because of how turned on he was. That's like getting mad because you smashed your thumb with a hammer just to turn around and say it's ok thou cause then I get to suck on it.
 
If the husband is weak for his inaction, how weak is the wife for giving in to the predator? 🤷

I haven't read this series, so this is probably out of context, but that text would signal they're both victims and their relationship has been destroyed by the creep.
No it's not out of context, rabbleland has a style of writing as in lets completely shit on the husband. I honestly think the author is a woman that was married at one time and her husband dumped her for her mom because if read their stories it complete husband/boyfriend hating drivel. It doesn't matter what it is about, you can rest assured from the first chapter till the end anything and everything that you think can go wrong for the husband will plus shit you never thought about. There will be there will be nobody getting their come-up-ends for the villians or no redeemable acts by the people that crushed their partners. The acts will just keep getting worst and more absurd as the chapter keep going to the point to where it just turns laughable that the writer can keep coming up with bullshit to do to the guy. Their story "the bet" will end just as his ex told him it would when he went to talk to her and try to get info on dude. And how she tried to talk him up to try and except it the way her husband did. That's how it will end. Just like this story here "cumbunny" where he's not only fucking the wife but now is fucking the sister if there's anyway possible the guy will start to fuck his mom and his dad. If the author thought they could keep their audience they would have the guy start fucking the husband. I understand that is the point of the story but when it just becomes so predictable that you automatically skip to the end of the chapter just the red how it ends and say yeah that what I figured. It's turn boring. The story loses it's edge when all the husband does is loses in every chapter and never gets a W. It's like what's the point in trying to build the drama because you how it gonna happen without reading it. At least in one of Dan's earlier stories the husband gets to kill the guy in the end.
 
Here's a summary of some couples from some stories I read, with different situations:

Lauren and Corey (married for many years): When Ryder crossed the line, she broke up with Ryder right away. And she got Corey back. Sarah: When Lester mistreats Dan and says he's jealous, Sarah is getting Dan back. Lester sends Sarah upstairs, and Dan then goes to the basement. Sarah doesn't get her husband back (instead, she violates her daughters' bed).

Daisy with Ash: Conner is in trouble after an accident. When Ash starts attacking her husband, he defends her. Conner is sexually broken and doesn't have cuckold kinks.

Julia and Tom: They don't have children. Tom awakened his wife's sexuality, but he was cut off and betrayed and knows he'll never be able to satisfy her. Her wife likes sex and Devon. Julie wanted Devon. Not the man himself, but the sex. She loved me, but she didn't want to give up this new side of herself. New adventures and feelings. # Just like Dan and Sarah, the consequences and the end of their marriage.

Ashley and Jacob are a young couple, only a few years into their marriage. But Jacob isn't a coward; he confronted Carlos. Life went on; Dan couldn't face Lester, who depended on him financially.

Louise and Johnny: Johnny sent Louise to Tony's hands, and he had only one rule: to know and use a condom. Just like Sarah, she lost her career, fell into the clutches of a teenager, and cut Johnny off from sex altogether.
Emily was waiting for Johnny, and Trisha is waiting for Dan. Sarah leaving Dan aside will take Dan away from Sarah. Tony makes Louise lose her sense of everything, just as Lester does with Sarah.

Nolan and Grace have a conversation, and Nolan regrets it. "...So, how do you feel? Knowing Nate slept with your girl?" she added, wanting more of that dirty talk to encourage him.

Nolan swallowed and cleared his throat, shifting in his chair as he tried to find the words.

"It's... weird," he admitted. "I mean, I knew that was a possibility when we started all this, but it's different hearing about it, knowing it happened and there's no going back. That another man knows how you... feel."

Grace smiled and squeezed his hand again. "I know," she said. "And I'm sorry if it hurts. But I also find it kind of arousing knowing that someone else has been inside me. That another man has claimed me, and that you have to deal with that."

Nolan took a deep breath. That had hurt him. But before Grace could continue, Nolan spoke. "I can't deny that it hurts to hear that, that you could consciously choose to hurt my feelings for your own pleasure," he said. "But you're right. I find it kind of arousing. Not just kind of arousing. Really arousing, actually. Knowing that you're being shared, that you're not just mine, even though you still are."

Grace nodded, her heart swelling at the revelation.

"That's why I think we need to continue this journey together," Grace said. "We're both learning new things about ourselves and our relationship. But that comes with maturity. You need to deal with the fact that I'm going to explore with Nate, and you need to accept that. And I need to accept the fact that you're dealing with your own emotions about this. But we can do this together."
I apologize for my ignorance about all the stories you refer to.
But, please, give us a clue as to which story each statement refers to, and edit them a little, so that they are easier to understand.
 
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No it's not out of context, rabbleland has a style of writing as in lets completely shit on the husband. I honestly think the author is a woman that was married at one time and her husband dumped her for her mom because if read their stories it complete husband/boyfriend hating drivel. It doesn't matter what it is about, you can rest assured from the first chapter till the end anything and everything that you think can go wrong for the husband will plus shit you never thought about. There will be there will be nobody getting their come-up-ends for the villians or no redeemable acts by the people that crushed their partners. The acts will just keep getting worst and more absurd as the chapter keep going to the point to where it just turns laughable that the writer can keep coming up with bullshit to do to the guy. Their story "the bet" will end just as his ex told him it would when he went to talk to her and try to get info on dude. And how she tried to talk him up to try and except it the way her husband did. That's how it will end. Just like this story here "cumbunny" where he's not only fucking the wife but now is fucking the sister if there's anyway possible the guy will start to fuck his mom and his dad. If the author thought they could keep their audience they would have the guy start fucking the husband. I understand that is the point of the story but when it just becomes so predictable that you automatically skip to the end of the chapter just the red how it ends and say yeah that what I figured. It's turn boring. The story loses it's edge when all the husband does is loses in every chapter and never gets a W. It's like what's the point in trying to build the drama because you how it gonna happen without reading it. At least in one of Dan's earlier stories the husband gets to kill the guy in the end.
I feel you on this one bud and share the same point of view...I really wanted to read it to see if things would change...I thought she would have been different from Leah and the other girls but she has fallen just the same....I like how the black belt affair went and I'm hoping that the bad tenant goes well also...
 
I feel you on this one bud and share the same point of view...I really wanted to read it to see if things would change...I thought she would have been different from Leah and the other girls but she has fallen just the same....I like how the black belt affair went and I'm hoping that the bad tenant goes well also...
Yeah I really like BBA went also,it would be so easy to ruin Carlos gym. Just make a couple post on how he sleep with his wife and how he fucked his shoulder for more alone time with her and he'd lose a bunch of members. I also liked how he stand up for himself. But yeah I don't get the consent L's rabbleland dish out to the husbands. It's gotten so predictable on how the story will go, look at The Bet, the wife is tattooed, nipple rings and agreed to anywhere anytime any place. We all knew that what was gonna happen my question is now how does he stay with her. Same thing in cumbunny how does the husband stay with the wife. The author has written both husbands cannot stand the antagonists, to where there's no redeemable act the wife's can do to over come their betrayal. Most stores the wife are written to where they have a good relationship with their partners, but not so much with those couples. TA suffers from the same thing, it's written to where Sarah acts like she doesn't even like Dan so how is there a way forward. I get the authors are trying to make it seem like the husbands get off on their wives being with other men, but after the sex aren't they supposed to get along with their husbands. It seems like none of these fuckers like each other, I don't see how they except the readers to see a future. I mean for real why would someone want to be with someone who shits on them night and day and why would someone want to read about it. I get that they try and build up this drama but when the payoff is never there it's like fuck. Why have to protagonists thinking about this and that and how he's gonna say something just to never have it happen.
 
Sarah has already completely changed Dan! In her dreams, she leaves Dan and her family and goes to Lester. Lester would never accept sharing Sarah with Dan. The best thing is for Dan to see Lester give pleasure to Sarah and Sarah in depravity. - End of the series: Lester conquers Sarah and Trisha has Dan for herself (Dan thrives away from Sarah). Sarah becomes pregnant and divorced from Dan (Lester now continues with the search to impregnate Renee), with the last arc with Dan x Lester when Lester talks about having a harem. Having a passage of years. Then Lester can die, a very exciting confrontation, all the depravities come to light.Lester thinks I have Renee, Sarah, now it's just a matter of the girls when they get older. They'll go to college, I'll give them the initiation they need... When they were kids they didn't like me, when they become women they'll change their minds.
 
We're at the point where Sarah will leave her husband for Lester and increase the humiliation (which will be words of contempt, to destroy Dan). The chair is part of a cuckold fetish (things Dan is afraid of and has already told Sarah, and she said she would protect him from them). It would be one of the betrayals. I hope Trisha gets involved, talks about work. For those who are interested in Dan, she rarely contacts him (she can get smaller jobs), until she uses these pretexts to call Dan.
I hope to see Sarah and Lester making love, Dan talking nonsense, and Sarah constantly asking Lester to get her pregnant.
Season 1 ends. (Dan gets divorced, Sarah gets pregnant by Lester, Dan steals Lester and Trisha's hard drives, and he begins his revenge.)

Season 2: Lester is the father of a daughter. Lester begins working on Renee, without Sarah knowing. Renee comes to help care for her granddaughter, and Renee becomes pregnant with Lester's child (Dan manages to search all the hard drives and select the evidence that puts Lester in jail).

Season 3 - The moment of truth. Lester will want to corrupt Dan and Sarah's daughters when he gets out of prison. There's the final battle, with all of Lester's schemes revealed. Dan and Lester, and Sarah, have their clashes...
 
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