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Looking for Don Silver thread Toxic Attraction chapters

Does anyone happen to have the latest "Behind the Neighbor's Door" or "A Young Couple's Journey," both from Antarctica77?
I recently posted on the Literotica Reddit about my theory that Antarctica and Don Silver are the same author under 2 pen names. Well, though many readers acknowledge the parallels in plotting, they were able to make me see that they are infact distinct individuals. Some of the tell tale signs are that DS is a more advanced writer and uses are much more polished and professionally presentable editing style. But I did manage to briefly convince myself that Don Silver was Stephen King and Antarctica was Richard Bachman 😂🤣🤣😂
 
i discovered Literotica only some time ago.... since then, i have been reading all the stories i can, The Bet, Toxic Attraction, How I Lost My Mother, etc.... these stories are sooo amazing and sexy that it is hard to believe... Stories on Literotica are far more hotter than any video porn i have seen..... i want to read as many stories as possible..... i thank all the writers for writing such amazing stories...... PS- if anyone has the parts of The Bet Epilogue, i will forever be thankful...
 
I recently posted on the Literotica Reddit about my theory that Antarctica and Don Silver are the same author under 2 pen names. Well, though many readers acknowledge the parallels in plotting, they were able to make me see that they are infact distinct individuals. Some of the tell tale signs are that DS is a more advanced writer and uses are much more polished and professionally presentable editing style. But I did manage to briefly convince myself that Don Silver was Stephen King and Antarctica was Richard Bachman 😂🤣🤣😂
Also, Don just does not give a shit about negative feedback. He totally ignores it and keeps writing, laughing all the way to the bank.

Antarctica throws hissy fits and blocks people from his patreon if you don't glaze the egregiously bad cap he loves to toss out there. I've seen him literally refund money and block users for daring to point out how stupid it was that Toby the tech genius from TNT could magically duplicate a phone and knock the original off the network in another country, put secret keyloggers and surveillance on everything, yet didn't even have a password on his PC and hadn't backed up any of the photos/videos/blackmail material.

They both do write hot sex scenes and disjointed plots that drag out for ages too long and include shit tons of filler chapters so as to collect cash every month.
 
Also, Don just does not give a shit about negative feedback. He totally ignores it and keeps writing, laughing all the way to the bank.

Antarctica throws hissy fits and blocks people from his patreon if you don't glaze the egregiously bad cap he loves to toss out there. I've seen him literally refund money and block users for daring to point out how stupid it was that Toby the tech genius from TNT could magically duplicate a phone and knock the original off the network in another country, put secret keyloggers and surveillance on everything, yet didn't even have a password on his PC and hadn't backed up any of the photos/videos/blackmail material.

They both do write hot sex scenes and disjointed plots that drag out for ages too long and include shit tons of filler chapters so as to collect cash every month
Patreon's an interesting thing for these writers. I can't dog anyone trying to make their paper, but it often seems like if I were to subscribe, I'd be paying hundreds of dollars over the course of 2+ years to read a book. I miss the days when 'content creators' used the internet to share their creativity with the world without having access to a pay-to-play platform. In the end, we wind up with market saturation that leaves a lot of the work being created behind paywalls, and that's kind of feels like a sad thing for society and the creator, when art is created for only those with the money to buy it able to see and experience it.
 
Patreon's an interesting thing for these writers. I can't dog anyone trying to make their paper, but it often seems like if I were to subscribe, I'd be paying hundreds of dollars over the course of 2+ years to read a book. I miss the days when 'content creators' used the internet to share their creativity with the world without having access to a pay-to-play platform. In the end, we wind up with market saturation that leaves a lot of the work being created behind paywalls, and that's kind of feels like a sad thing for society and the creator, when art is created for only those with the money to buy it able to see and experience it.
I write stories of my own, and I have a Patreon. I take a wildly different approach to most authors, however.

If you are a member of my Patreon, you get access to my stories before anyone else. This applies to all membership levels - including free members. Higher-tier paid members get little perks like the ability to create a character, or the ability to frame a scene, or the ability to suggest the broad beats for an upcoming story - assuming that the items above still fit with what I write. Otherwise, paid members are just doing it because they appreciate my time and effort and want to essentially tip me.

A decent number will come be a $5 member for a month or two, then cancel until I release a new story, then re-up for a month or two. Which I'm fine with.

I'm not blaming anyone for paid memberships, but I'm not paying $75-$200+ for access to a book. It's just not happening.

Also, I find that doing so leads to worse quality. Does anyone REALLY think that Don would have drug Toxic Attraction out for 40+ chapters of incredibly repetitive stuff if he wasn't getting paid to drop the tap every month? Of course not. He's have wrapped the story in 15 hot chapters and moved on to the next one.
 
I write stories of my own, and I have a Patreon. I take a wildly different approach to most authors, however.

If you are a member of my Patreon, you get access to my stories before anyone else. This applies to all membership levels - including free members. Higher-tier paid members get little perks like the ability to create a character, or the ability to frame a scene, or the ability to suggest the broad beats for an upcoming story - assuming that the items above still fit with what I write. Otherwise, paid members are just doing it because they appreciate my time and effort and want to essentially tip me.

A decent number will come be a $5 member for a month or two, then cancel until I release a new story, then re-up for a month or two. Which I'm fine with.

I'm not blaming anyone for paid memberships, but I'm not paying $75-$200+ for access to a book. It's just not happening.

Also, I find that doing so leads to worse quality. Does anyone REALLY think that Don would have drug Toxic Attraction out for 40+ chapters of incredibly repetitive stuff if he wasn't getting paid to drop the tap every month? Of course not. He's have wrapped the story in 15 hot chapters and moved on to the next one.
I agree 100%.
It makes no sense to pay for small parts of a work that is not yet finished, expecting the author to maintain the same style and quality demonstrated at the beginning of the work.
The main idea of Patreon and similar sites was to promote, assist, and support amateur artists so that they could become better in their field and/or become professionals.
The model created opportunities for true creators, but opened loopholes for opportunists who use these tools to maintain a small audience with empty promises, without the obligation to finish what they started or deliver the quality initially demonstrated. People like Don Silver and others can decide to stop at any time, for any reason, without having any obligation to reciprocate to those who invested their money (and time) to follow them for a certain period.

He remains good at describing sex scenes between Lester and Sarah, but they are extremely repetitive. It's like watching a couple of porn actors in 100 different sex scenes. A blowjob scene requires 30,000 words. There's nothing new.
For this reason, he continues to include new actors who are completely out of character and have no logical reason to be there, solely to give the illusion of movement.
 
Speaking of ongoing stories, etc...anyone have MrJakobs's 'Best of Friends' series? Looks like he's 35 chapters in on Patreon, but Kemono's only got through 18 (last August). Really enjoying this one...would love to see this one get a wider appreciation.
 
For this reason, he continues to include new actors who are completely out of character and have no logical reason to be there, solely to give the illusion of movement.
The corporate espionage stuff, the illuminati doing SUPER EVIL STUFFS, YOU GUYS... nobody cares, Don. It's sloppy and boring, and has nothing whatsoever to do with the actual story. We would be equally interested if you decided to narrate an entire session of Lester's D&D group; please, just stop with that shadow conspiracy shit.

The one that I find insultingly egregious is the pregnancy risk stuff. To start with, Sarah wasn't protected and only let Lester fuck her with condoms. He then sabotaged not one, not two, not three, but FOUR condoms in one session so as to get her to fuck him bare with the promise of his fake vasectomy. C'mon, man.

Obviously, they weren't going back to condoms; why would they, when everyone (foolishly) believed Lester's vasectomy story? But the correct approach would have been to build up the dirty talk about breeding her, then boom, she's pregnant.

Nope, Sarah was actually on birth control pills, you guys. Unprotected didn't really mean unprotected. Fortunately, Lester happens to know a way to get perfect duplicate packaging with sugar pills, hah hah!

Which he waits forever to use. And now keeps talking about knocking her up, and Sarah's into it now, but she's on the pill, but they are fake pills, but she still isn't pregnant despite Lester keeping her womb full of his semen every single day, and oh yeah, let's introduce Sarah's mom who also wants to fuck Lester.

C'mon, Don. It's time to treat this one like Old Yeller. Take it out back, shoot it, write the epilogue. Stop with dragging it out to the point that you have clearly forgotten what the characters have said and done already.
 
The corporate espionage stuff, the illuminati doing SUPER EVIL STUFFS, YOU GUYS... nobody cares, Don. It's sloppy and boring, and has nothing whatsoever to do with the actual story. We would be equally interested if you decided to narrate an entire session of Lester's D&D group; please, just stop with that shadow conspiracy shit.

The one that I find insultingly egregious is the pregnancy risk stuff. To start with, Sarah wasn't protected and only let Lester fuck her with condoms. He then sabotaged not one, not two, not three, but FOUR condoms in one session so as to get her to fuck him bare with the promise of his fake vasectomy. C'mon, man.

Obviously, they weren't going back to condoms; why would they, when everyone (foolishly) believed Lester's vasectomy story? But the correct approach would have been to build up the dirty talk about breeding her, then boom, she's pregnant.

Nope, Sarah was actually on birth control pills, you guys. Unprotected didn't really mean unprotected. Fortunately, Lester happens to know a way to get perfect duplicate packaging with sugar pills, hah hah!

Which he waits forever to use. And now keeps talking about knocking her up, and Sarah's into it now, but she's on the pill, but they are fake pills, but she still isn't pregnant despite Lester keeping her womb full of his semen every single day, and oh yeah, let's introduce Sarah's mom who also wants to fuck Lester.

C'mon, Don. It's time to treat this one like Old Yeller. Take it out back, shoot it, write the epilogue. Stop with dragging it out to the point that you have clearly forgotten what the characters have said and done already.
Respectfully then, stop reading it. If you don't like it that's totally ok, but why keep reading it and complaining? If I don't like a story, I just stop and move on.
 
Respectfully then, stop reading it. If you don't like it that's totally ok, but why keep reading it and complaining? If I don't like a story, I just stop and move on.
Perhaps you missed the point of a discussion forum. They are not limited to fans of a given work, or to positive commentary only. If you want to glaze TA, have at it - but that doesn't invalidate any of the concerns written in this thread.

Don writes excellent sex scenes. My points above are factually sound. I'm not wrong to voice that he needs to wrap this story up and start something new.
 
I stopped reading around chapter 15. I'm just waiting for "The End" because I still have no idea what Don means by the title "Toxic Attraction" and tagline of "Dark Cuckold Story" because those are better suited to the cost and pace of the slow release schedule than what's going on with the story.
 
Perhaps you missed the point of a discussion forum. They are not limited to fans of a given work, or to positive commentary only. If you want to glaze TA, have at it - but that doesn't invalidate any of the concerns written in this thread.

Don writes excellent sex scenes. My points above are factually sound. I'm not wrong to voice that he needs to wrap this story up and start something new.
Fair enough and makes sense. Thanks for clarifying your post. Much appreciated.
 
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