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Insider] Toxic Attraction: Chapter 42 Alpha Draft
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This one is coming a little later than planned. Apologies for that. Things are still up and down on my end here. We're finally getting to a point in this story I've been waiting to get to since the very beginning.

The mask is somewhat off. Dan and Sarah have discovered some horrible truths. These characters have been a lot of fun to write and sometimes they've surprised me with where they've gone and how they've deviated from my original plan.

Well, lets get to the good stuff, shall we? This is an alpha draft, so like always its full of grammatical issues and other uglies that I'll clean up in the next week or so.



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ā€œWhat the fuck?ā€ Dan blinked staring at Lesterā€™s outstretched phone screen. His brain took a few seconds to register what he was seeing. Sarah, Lester and himself on the screen. Danā€™s face felt red hot looking at how pathetic he was sitting in Lesterā€™s chair. ā€œWhat the fuck?ā€ Dan repeated trying to break himself out of his mental loop.

Lester chuckled and pulled the phone away as Sarah tried to reach for it. He casually strolled back into the living room, leaving Dan and Sarah standing at the open door. They stood frozen in place for what felt like an enternity as their brains tried to fit the pieces together. Lester slumped back in one of the chairs, compeltely disregarding them, eyes down on his phone.

They had been so close. Danā€™s foot had almost been across the threshold, leaving the apartment for good. But now he hovering at the door with Sarah at his side.

ā€œWhat the hell. Delete that,ā€ Sarah hissed taking a step into the living room. Danā€™s stomach twisted and the image of a bear trap jumped into his mind. ā€œLester, are you listening to me?ā€

Lester just thumbed his phone like he hadnā€™t heard her. There was a noise in the hallway. They could be discovered. Dan couldnā€™t bear to glance for the noise and reluctant shut the door, engaging the lock. He saw a smart smile flash across Lesterā€™s face as he did before it quickly disapperaed.
 
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The list of stories available through 16 files are:
The Contact - Chapters 1 to 5
Toxic Attraction - Chapter 41
Window to Temptation - Parts 6 and 7
Executive Privilege - Chapter 16 and 17
The Therapist - Parts 1 to 8
The Bad Tenant - Chapter 21
Behind The Neighbor's Door - Chapters 1 to 17
 
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What are your thoughts on the stories we have been reading recently?

I have focused on 4 which I provide my brief thoughts below
My favourite is The Contact - well written and has been exciting. There are expected to be another 5 to 10 chapters max.
Executive Privilege has only 3 to 5 chapters to go so will be interesting where that finishes
Toxic Attraction has brought me to this forum but less interested in this story recently - too many loose ends and all over the place
The Bad Tenant has been interesting although it takes Eddie Wilder ages to get to the sex.
 
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superhoopaus said:
What are your thoughts on the stories we have been reading recently?

I have focused on 4 which I provide my brief thoughts below
My favourite is The Contact - well written and has been exciting. There are expected to be another 5 to 10 chapters max.
Executive Privilege has only 3 to 5 chapters to go so will be interesting where that finishes
Toxic Attraction has brought me to this forum but less interested in this story recently - too many loose ends and all over the place
The Bad Tenant has been interesting although it takes Eddie Wilder ages to get to the sex.
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I've been pretty disappointed in Bad Tenant for that exact reason. I get that many authors have financial incentive to keep a story going as long as possible, but each new installment is a disappointment. I've been enjoying Window To Temptation lately, but it's heading in the same territory. I've largely given up Toxic Attraction as well. Got a little too unrealistic - and it's not like Im much of a realism dude. Other stories I've enjoyed are Sliding into Depravity - Some good chapter there, some unnecessary ones as well.
 
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carloswerty said:
So tired of blackmailed stories.
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Was that really a blackmail story , I thought it was more a whore story. I think they all deserved what they got, nobody cared that the owner killed himself over his cheating on him with the fat black guy.

What these writers have I common is they write the men in their stories to either to weak to stand up for themselves or they like seeing their wives getting smashed to the point to where they are really not even a husband wife couple anymore. Well guys like that don't get the hot chics, I'm sorry they don't. Now every now and then you'll see a dork with a hot broad but there's a reason why she's with him. It'll take more then a big dick to get those chics , they'll cheat but not to the point of jeopardizing their marriage. Cause those chics have had all the dick they wanted and then settled with the dork. Maybe for money or whatever but they won't fuck it up over a an old black guy with a big dick.
 
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superhoopaus said:
What are your thoughts on the stories we have been reading recently?

I have focused on 4 which I provide my brief thoughts below
My favourite is The Contact - well written and has been exciting. There are expected to be another 5 to 10 chapters max.
Executive Privilege has only 3 to 5 chapters to go so will be interesting where that finishes
Toxic Attraction has brought me to this forum but less interested in this story recently - too many loose ends and all over the place
The Bad Tenant has been interesting although it takes Eddie Wilder ages to get to the sex.
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I know, I like the karate series he did. It seemed he was adding two chapters a week at one point.
 
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