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You know these are just stories right? Nothing has to "work out" 20 years down the road. I also had an older dad - don't worry; he was married to my mom - and it's not as bad as you think. He put in a real effort at being a dad, even though he was near the age of my friends' grandfathers, and I never felt "deprived" of a real dad.

I don't mind the ending of BWH? - not everything has to go to formula and RAAC but it was a bit jarring They're in bed and he's hitting it raw and suddenly they are in Costa Rica. I'd have liked to see more of a build up - her wondering if the child is Hank's or David's. Maybe David thinking it's his, but some telltale sign on the child (birthmark or Hank's eyes or whatever.) More of a twist.

I also wouldn't have cared if she had gone back to David, but not everything has to be wrapped up and a bow put on it. I just would have liked more exposition between "OMG! No condom!" and "Bienvenidos a Costa Rica!"
You never felt deprived because you never knew
How Far is Too Far? Chapter 18 is released. Anyone, please share it.
This is another one that needs a fork stuck in it. This was over, then someone hit with a defibrillator and now it's back. The poor bastard had another chic lined up and then the wife came and crushed everything. Let that motherfucker put a Tom and Jerry tattoo on her snatch, he the husband were posed to believe he's kool with it. That one of the problems with all these super chuck stories is they never have a line that will get the husband to say anything once it's crossed. They just go along with everything. The writer will have them talk to themselves and act upset but that's just false drama because the writers just leaves them and plot holes when the same thing happens in the next chapter and the husband does the same thing. I like reading about the drama, but they'll build it up but it never happens. Or never like you want to.
 
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The contract chapter 6 is out...anyone can post epub will be much appreciated
Should be good!

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They're all trying to have the next "T/A" style series where they can drag the story the f*ck out. If you'll notice most of the newer series from different writers are going in that direction. Everyone is wanting to get in on the " milk train ".
Not only did I notice, but I am a happy user of these knock off smut drugs. Infact, I did a Literotica Reddit thread where I explored the possibility that Antarctica 77, Ed Wilder and Don Silver are all pen names for one dude. I was talked down from my tin foil theory by the other Redditors, but each of them acknowledged it wasn't the most dissonant concept advanced in that community 😂🤣🤣😂
 
(How far and far) Jia is a real tramp, I hope David ends up with Alice in the end, David could have sent Tom away. I hope not all the women in the story are queens of size (a cliché in these stories, all the men have big, thick penises and all the women are fine with it). The only cliché I find cool is the woman using her husband's love to manipulate him, but when the man breaks free from the spell and realizes he's been manipulated, it's goodbye.
I'm actually starting to feel accomplished that I was able to deduce in under 3 sentences that you had your spoiler bomb not only in hand, but the fuse was already burning as you cocked back with the form of Giants pitcher Tim The Freak Lyncecum ready to blow my perv Christmas all over the western US, and I turned my head as if Roseanne Barr had just removed her sundress less than a yard away from me. 😜😉🤘😈🤘😉
 
It is a formula, how many have you read where the wife don't leave husband for for the old man or getting pregnant by old man.

Yeah, But the cuck element doesn’t move the needle for me, so I don’t care if the wife ends up with the husband or with the other guy. If anything, I’d rather it be with a guy with whom she has the asymmetric relationship, because to me, that’s the appeal of these stories: What circumstances would Barbie to give up Ken and start fucking Shrek?
 
You never felt deprived because you never knew

This is another one that needs a fork stuck in it. This was over, then someone hit with a defibrillator and now it's back. The poor bastard had another chic lined up and then the wife came and crushed everything. Let that motherfucker put a Tom and Jerry tattoo on her snatch, he the husband were posed to believe he's kool with it. That one of the problems with all these super chuck stories is they never have a line that will get the husband to say anything once it's crossed. They just go along with everything. The writer will have them talk to themselves and act upset but that's just false drama because the writers just leaves them and plot holes when the same thing happens in the next chapter and the husband does the same thing. I like reading about the drama, but they'll build it up but it never happens. Or never like you want to.

Thanks for the free psychoanalysis, but I could pretty much piece together how things were in other families. I had him until I was in my 40s and like I said I never feel deprived. There were actually some advantages because he had a maturity that a father in his 20s or 30s might not have.

Back on point, BWH? needed more exposition between conception and resolution. At least that’s the way I see it
 
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Yeah, But the cuck element doesn’t move the needle for me, so I don’t care if the wife ends up with the husband or with the other guy. If anything, I’d rather it be with a guy with whom she has the asymmetric relationship, because to me, that’s the appeal of these stories: What circumstances would Barbie to give up Ken and start fucking Shrek?
I don't really care for this type of series myself, the plot is so easily figured out. I was just stating this story was following a formula. Everyone knew how it would end they were just reading to see how they would get there.
 
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TBT Chapter: 22

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I liked the chapter, the wife's concerns, the boundaries, and her getting involved. The problem with these stories is that the husband is kind of crazy. Soon he'll be saying he wants his wife to get pregnant by another man. These things are kind of complicated to understand; I don't know if it's cultural (the US is totally different from us Brazilians). The only thing I liked is that Tom started to see the risks; let's see when he'll see the emotional risks and the risk of losing his wife. I'd like a more frank conversation with the wife talking about the risks of younger men. In many stories, it seems like the husband wants to give his wife to another man so he can get a divorce and start a single life.
 
I liked the chapter, the wife's concerns, the boundaries, and her getting involved. The problem with these stories is that the husband is kind of crazy. Soon he'll be saying he wants his wife to get pregnant by another man. These things are kind of complicated to understand; I don't know if it's cultural (the US is totally different from us Brazilians). The only thing I liked is that Tom started to see the risks; let's see when he'll see the emotional risks and the risk of losing his wife. I'd like a more frank conversation with the wife talking about the risks of younger men. In many stories, it seems like the husband wants to give his wife to another man so he can get a divorce and start a single life.
I hate having to wait for things to finish so I wait to read them. How far along is the story?
 
Christmas tyme. I hope is good.
I hope the wife sleeps out. That Tom makes love to Jia in the early morning. David still hasn't realized he lost his wife. I don't understand why they don't each go their own way. I hope Alice stays with David and Jia with Tom, and life goes on. It's like in the series Toxic Attraction, the marriage was in crisis, the couple had financial problems. The wife likes Lester; he's better in bed and has far more financial resources than Dan, and he has the knack for messing with people Sarah also likes. It would be a tragic and cool ending if Sarah asked for a divorce and chose Lester. One thing that was lost was the engagement ring Lester gave Sarah (I hope she willingly takes off Dan's ring and starts wearing Lester's). It's ridiculous how lost Dom writes Dan; he got all soft with Trisha, then sees his wife cheating behind his back and masturbates. Dom's writing of Dan seems retarded; he's lost with the character and his actions are random. Soon he'll portray Dan as gay, seeing Lester, she'll give him her ass and start sucking Lester's dick, quit her job, dress up as a maid, and wait for Lester to fuck her ass.
 
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