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PShango said:
Dear All,
TBT Chapter: 22

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I liked the chapter, the wife's concerns, the boundaries, and her getting involved. The problem with these stories is that the husband is kind of crazy. Soon he'll be saying he wants his wife to get pregnant by another man. These things are kind of complicated to understand; I don't know if it's cultural (the US is totally different from us Brazilians). The only thing I liked is that Tom started to see the risks; let's see when he'll see the emotional risks and the risk of losing his wife. I'd like a more frank conversation with the wife talking about the risks of younger men. In many stories, it seems like the husband wants to give his wife to another man so he can get a divorce and start a single life.
 
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makoto shishio said:
I liked the chapter, the wife's concerns, the boundaries, and her getting involved. The problem with these stories is that the husband is kind of crazy. Soon he'll be saying he wants his wife to get pregnant by another man. These things are kind of complicated to understand; I don't know if it's cultural (the US is totally different from us Brazilians). The only thing I liked is that Tom started to see the risks; let's see when he'll see the emotional risks and the risk of losing his wife. I'd like a more frank conversation with the wife talking about the risks of younger men. In many stories, it seems like the husband wants to give his wife to another man so he can get a divorce and start a single life.
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I hate having to wait for things to finish so I wait to read them. How far along is the story?
 
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carloswerty said:
Christmas tyme. I hope is good.
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I hope the wife sleeps out. That Tom makes love to Jia in the early morning. David still hasn't realized he lost his wife. I don't understand why they don't each go their own way. I hope Alice stays with David and Jia with Tom, and life goes on. It's like in the series Toxic Attraction, the marriage was in crisis, the couple had financial problems. The wife likes Lester; he's better in bed and has far more financial resources than Dan, and he has the knack for messing with people Sarah also likes. It would be a tragic and cool ending if Sarah asked for a divorce and chose Lester. One thing that was lost was the engagement ring Lester gave Sarah (I hope she willingly takes off Dan's ring and starts wearing Lester's). It's ridiculous how lost Dom writes Dan; he got all soft with Trisha, then sees his wife cheating behind his back and masturbates. Dom's writing of Dan seems retarded; he's lost with the character and his actions are random. Soon he'll portray Dan as gay, seeing Lester, she'll give him her ass and start sucking Lester's dick, quit her job, dress up as a maid, and wait for Lester to fuck her ass.
 
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makoto shishio said:
I liked the chapter, the wife's concerns, the boundaries, and her getting involved. The problem with these stories is that the husband is kind of crazy. Soon he'll be saying he wants his wife to get pregnant by another man. These things are kind of complicated to understand; I don't know if it's cultural (the US is totally different from us Brazilians). The only thing I liked is that Tom started to see the risks; let's see when he'll see the emotional risks and the risk of losing his wife. I'd like a more frank conversation with the wife talking about the risks of younger men. In many stories, it seems like the husband wants to give his wife to another man so he can get a divorce and start a single life.
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Exactly it's like the only thing they see is their kink for sharing the wife. It's like that the only thing that matters, no matter the red flags. I find it hard that person would follow his fetish blindly while everything is blowing up in their face. They can even see coming but just keep going ahead.
 
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makoto shishio said:
I hope the wife sleeps out. That Tom makes love to Jia in the early morning. David still hasn't realized he lost his wife. I don't understand why they don't each go their own way. I hope Alice stays with David and Jia with Tom, and life goes on. It's like in the series Toxic Attraction, the marriage was in crisis, the couple had financial problems. The wife likes Lester; he's better in bed and has far more financial resources than Dan, and he has the knack for messing with people Sarah also likes. It would be a tragic and cool ending if Sarah asked for a divorce and chose Lester. One thing that was lost was the engagement ring Lester gave Sarah (I hope she willingly takes off Dan's ring and starts wearing Lester's). It's ridiculous how lost Dom writes Dan; he got all soft with Trisha, then sees his wife cheating behind his back and masturbates. Dom's writing of Dan seems retarded; he's lost with the character and his actions are random. Soon he'll portray Dan as gay, seeing Lester, she'll give him her ass and start sucking Lester's dick, quit her job, dress up as a maid, and wait for Lester to fuck her ass.
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But David is Tom's boss and Jia is lying to David so even though he should be able to see what's going on but he doesn't. That's why his character doesn't make sense, he's over his department at work. He's written to where he can handle everything that comes at him at work. But he wants see what's going on right in front of him in his own house. It's a product of the writers trying to stretch their series out , like TA keeps stretching their plot out.
 
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