Looking for Don Silver thread Toxic Attraction chapters

[Pete]

Hope I find Looking for don Silver thread TA chapters

 

[Chillie_Willie]

That's it! TA21 (insider)

Thank you swewxxx

 

[rs_rain]

That's it! TA21 (insider)

Thank you @swewxxx

 

[Raider1976]

Thanks again swewxxx

 

[Em Lear]

That's it! TA21 (insider)

Is there any changes to Detestable Liaisons from the drafts?

 

[Chillie_Willie]

Definitely a darker tone in regards to Sarah in this initial draft of TA chapter 21. Don kicked Sarah to higher gear from Lester’s reluctant co-conspirator to total slut wife. I would like to read the final draft as Don did add a lot more context to the storyline between the final versus alpha draft of Chapter 20. Especially like to see if Don will tell Dan’s reaction to Sarah since it went well beyond his initial fantasies.

 

[makoto shishio]

Definitely a darker tone in regards to Sarah in this initial draft of TA chapter 21. Don kicked Sarah to higher gear from Lester’s reluctant co-conspirator to total slut wife. I would like to read the final draft as Don did add a lot more context to the storyline between the final versus alpha draft of Chapter 20. Especially like to see if Don will tell Dan’s reaction to Sarah since it went well beyond his initial fantasies.

The laster could have remembered to say: "See Sarah, I told you that you'd have a second penis in you and it wouldn't be your husband's. Some dirty things and put his friend in the game. I'm still waiting for the gang bang with the RPG guys.

 

[Gussetlicker]

Thanks for posting ch21..for me the story is on the up again..especially like the way Sarah took control in this

 

[Chillie_Willie]

Sarah is clearly asserting her dominance, Dan is clearly made to look more ineffectual and weak. And Lester now was painted less than alpha and more like a puppy dog who got his toy taken away as he lost his grip on Sarah and overall control of the situation around him.

 

[makoto shishio]

Sarah is clearly asserting her dominance, Dan is clearly made to look more ineffectual and weak. And Lester now was painted less than alpha and more like a puppy dog who got his toy taken away as he lost his grip on Sarah and overall control of the situation around him.

I already think she's out of control, Lester himself is seeing the monster he's creating. Dan is losing his wife, I want to see when the pregnancy becomes clear, and Dan sees that the child is not his. Pregnancy makes a woman more sensitive when he loses her to Lester.

 

[Chillie_Willie]

Can’t wait for the pregnancy to materialize. It’s been alluded too so many times in the story and my patience is wearing thin. Another interested nugget revealed in the story: I wonder who Richard Thornhill chose to head the IT department at the hospital?

 

[Chillie_Willie]

Alpha draft of Don’s Chapter 4 Tainted Conception is available. Any have a copy?

 

[swewxxx]

Hey guys. I am dying to read Neighbor Chronicles redux chapter 3 (and 4) by Envoyeur. I am curious to see if it's worth the USD12.00 per chapter he charges at Patreon to make his alternative version to Avid's story a little better. He continued from Avid's chapter 5. Does someone have it?

 

[naughtysensei]

Hey guys. I am dying to read Neighbor Chronicles redux chapter 3 (and 4) by Envoyeur. I am curious to see if it's worth the USD12.00 per chapter he charges at Patreon to make his alternative version to Avid's story a little better. He continued from Avid's chapter 5. Does someone have it?

From reading redux 1&2 it’s definitely a good read. I don’t think anyone here is a member of Envoyeur patreon page otherwise it would have already been uploaded

 

[rs_rain]

Hey guys. I am dying to read Neighbor Chronicles redux chapter 3 (and 4) by Envoyeur. I am curious to see if it's worth the USD12.00 per chapter he charges at Patreon to make his alternative version to Avid's story a little better. He continued from Avid's chapter 5. Does someone have it?

This is someone else's take on NC in literotica https://www.literotica.com/s/neighborly-chronicles-au-pt-11

 

[swewxxx]

From reading redux 1&2 it’s definitely a good read. I don’t think anyone here is a member of Envoyeur patreon page otherwise it would have already been uploaded

So, maybe it's not as good as envoyeur thinks.

 

[Chillie_Willie]

I see the final draft of Toxic Attraction Chapter 21 is available. Anybody have it?

 

[naughtysensei]

Anyone have tc 4…??

 

[swewxxx]

I see the final draft of Toxic Attraction Chapter 21 is available. Anybody have it?

Not yet!

 

[Chillie_Willie]

Thanks for the update swexxx. Hopefully you will be able to snag a copy soon. Been debating if it’s worth getting a Patreon subscription with Don or not.

 

[swewxxx]

Thanks for the update swexxx. Hopefully you will be able to snag a copy soon. Been debating if it’s worth getting a Patreon subscription with Don or not.

This anxiety is what give DS and many other writers reason to charge for crumbs instead for the whole thing.
They keep satisfied with 100, 300, 600 people (aka subscribers).