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[Melissa N.] Collection

mihaluck said:
A Kpop Idol (Chapter 9 Part 2) is out
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Kpop preview (discord)

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I love Melissas art and stories but damn she is the queen of diminishing returns. Every update is 90% exposition bloat that could really be cut back, we’ll go 2-3 months before anything actually happens but get 200 panels of exposition like something deep is happening when it’s really just word vomit with some poses and it’s annoying because there is so much potential in her stories but they are so bloated
 
Sur_GalaChad said:
I love Melissas art and stories but damn she is the queen of diminishing returns. Every update is 90% exposition bloat that could really be cut back, we’ll go 2-3 months before anything actually happens but get 200 panels of exposition like something deep is happening when it’s really just word vomit with some poses and it’s annoying because there is so much potential in her stories but they are so bloated
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Agree. That's why I prefer her short stories.
 
Tug of War was very similar. Stuff happened really quick at the beginning then very little in the middle and suddenly a big jolt of story at the end.
 
Redryder74 said:
I went back to read her older stuff like Need for Speed or A Different Kind of Model. They were so much better paced then, a story that we can enjoy in one sitting.
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She did commissions then it requered more efforts besides regular updates stories and cost much less than she get for 1 month from patreon. Would be cool if she would keep do such commissions.
 
Does anyone have text stories with illustrations, for example, Tuf of War, stories that have text and some illustrations, I always translate from English to my language and in other formats there is no way to translate.
 
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