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The story is moving so slowly, it's getting a little boring, and Sam's face is already annoying the hell out of him. Really show Janice's face and her ass more, damn it.
 
I don't think the art itself has declined. It went for a darker style, which I don't think turned out as well, but technically it's still quite beautiful. The problem is that this last story is unbearably boring. Like, there were two stories in a row focused on Timmy and Pam. And now we've completely moved away from the incest theme and are just focused on cheating. I just can't engage with this story. It doesn't seem interesting, it doesn't seem appealing.
 
I was so hyped in its moment for Chloe x Tim and sure that Sid with Tim will also arrive, and everything went down the toilet.

Suppose that I'm not the only one.
 
I was so hyped in its moment for Chloe x Tim and sure that Sid with Tim will also arrive, and everything went down the toilet.

Suppose that I'm not the only one.
Yes. It was a much more interesting dynamic. I think everyone wanted to see Chloe go all out to fuck with Timmy, or Sid getting revenge on her. But it seems like he wants to further develop this bland plot of the only character who doesn't have any taboos involved.
 
Yes. It was a much more interesting dynamic. I think everyone wanted to see Chloe go all out to fuck with Timmy, or Sid getting revenge on her. But it seems like he wants to further develop this bland plot of the only character who doesn't have any taboos involved.
Well I was never was a fan of the incest stuff anyway...so glad that is not a focus that much. The story is still unbearingly slow and long. And I'm never really clear on what the fuck is going on. 32 panels and barely any action. I think this easily could have been 16 panels and done.
 
I also prefer the older style of drawing, coloring, and pacing. Current stories aren't "bad" but the bodies get unbelievably out of proportion and I have no idea who the characters are. But, I also suppose it is bad form for me to whinge about free content.
 
Feels like he's lost the plot but is sticking to a schedule.
Give me some help here and a short summary of the plot and where you believe it just became filler or went off the rails?

I ask 'cause all I'm seeing is Doc pining for his experience w/ Janice and J coming through for him. Not completely clear on her motivation(s) yet.
 

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