[Mr.Foxx] Commissions - Requests - Pinups - Short Stories

Bland Taste (released 2024-07-21)
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On July 22nd, Mr.Foxx posted the following two pictures on Patreon and wrote: " New version(2024) V/s Old version(2020)
Any improvements? 😁"
All I can say is that I find both pictures simply fantastic in their own way! 😍

Her Bits
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Whoever wrote the text/dialogues/moms-lines is not really good at it, to say the least... I mean, first of all, i hate when it's obvious that female character lines are clearly written too aggressively, clearly by a man who simply don't even bother trying to imagine female psychology or mental form and so on, let alone imagining/creating something taboo, morbid and complex, as any potential incest scene/situation is. So, the best thing here are images/artwork, text is almost a complete turn-off, at least for me.
 
Gnaparelli said:
Whoever wrote the text/dialogues/moms-lines is not really good at it, to say the least... I mean, first of all, i hate when it's obvious that female character lines are clearly written too aggressively, clearly by a man who simply don't even bother trying to imagine female psychology or mental form and so on, let alone imagining/creating something taboo, morbid and complex, as any potential incest scene/situation is. So, the best thing here are images/artwork, text is almost a complete turn-off, at least for me.
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As a writer of VN with a female main character I totally agree. I spend as much time rendering as I do writing and I'm never completely satisfied.
 
I mean he specializes in short comics so he can only do some much dialogue before he has to cut to the chase. I mean is dialogue is a lot better than most of the other short comic creators. Also his artwork is unmatched.
 
What's his website for subscribing fans for series like chore day, beauty of reality, etc.?
 
Tepocu said:
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Very attractive and great.. but it should have been continued
 
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