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[MrFoxx] Broken

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YAWN. Another blackmail plot ? YAWN !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The Mom is hot, but this is so tiresome already. Disappointing storyline. This had so much potential. The art is incredible, but not a fan of the story.
 
Actually, I beg to differ. The theme of blackmail is certainly more realistic than the crude and simple seduction of a horny mother who gets fucked by her son. The coercion, the shame, the fear, the amazement and the disbelief of what is happening, these are the real levers of the story. The woman who discovers that she is the object of her son's desire and who is disturbed and excited by it, the discovery that the boy is observing and spying on her in her most intimate moments and the violence of having to undress and let herself be looked at naked while her son looks at her with desire... In my opinion, the story evolves very well.
 
Actually, I beg to differ. The theme of blackmail is certainly more realistic than the crude and simple seduction of a horny mother who gets fucked by her son. The coercion, the shame, the fear, the amazement and the disbelief of what is happening, these are the real levers of the story. The woman who discovers that she is the object of her son's desire and who is disturbed and excited by it, the discovery that the boy is observing and spying on her in her most intimate moments and the violence of having to undress and let herself be looked at naked while her son looks at her with desire... In my opinion, the story evolves very well.
I'm not a fan of the coercion/rape storylines, either. But we agree to disagree. To each their own. I'll still follow, because the art is amazing, but the premise still sucks. Right, so the mother, while laying next to her husband, is moaning, OUT LOUD, about her son. Very nice. LOL And the son, knew she was going to, so he set up a video recording device to capture all this to blackmail her. Very very nice. LOL I'm surprised he wasn't hiding under the bed himself ! Hot mother, stinky story. And now, he'll end up raping her, because the mother will have to give in to his demands. Same old, same old. Yawn.
 
I'm not a fan of the coercion/rape storylines, either. But we agree to disagree. To each their own. I'll still follow, because the art is amazing, but the premise still sucks. Right, so the mother, while laying next to her husband, is moaning, OUT LOUD, about her son. Very nice. LOL And the son, knew she was going to, so he set up a video recording device to capture all this to blackmail her. Very very nice. LOL I'm surprised he wasn't hiding under the bed himself ! Hot mother, stinky story. And now, he'll end up raping her, because the mother will have to give in to his demands. Same old, same old. Yawn.
Yes I agree that there are too many short circuits, but I guess the audience wants the substance, that is the boy who finally screws his mother. How to get there is another matter lol. But in general, I think that in real life there is no mother who "wants" to screw her son, so a minimum of coercion is necessary. Sometimes it is blackmail, or she is drunk or unconscious, or she is blindfolded and unaware. Then I put myself in the author's shoes and I think it is difficult to think of a story, draw it, publish it... for free.
 
Yes I agree that there are too many short circuits, but I guess the audience wants the substance, that is the boy who finally screws his mother. How to get there is another matter lol. But in general, I think that in real life there is no mother who "wants" to screw her son, so a minimum of coercion is necessary. Sometimes it is blackmail, or she is drunk or unconscious, or she is blindfolded and unaware. Then I put myself in the author's shoes and I think it is difficult to think of a story, draw it, publish it... for free.
Again, I agree that this is all fantasy writing and story telling, so there must be liberties taken, that might boggle one's logical mind. LOL When this story started, I just felt it had so much promise and because of the incredible art, I was hoping for a better storyline. A better way to get to the end result, which is, of course, Mother and son engaging in coitus. I still love the visuals, and will watch this play out to the end. Who knows, perhaps the author will have some surprises in store for the rest of the story ? Would have been nice to see this made into a comedy of sorts, instead of a drama. That would have been refreshing. A change of pace, if you will ?
 
Yeah, I kind of liked it more when it was just a corruption story, it still has a bit of that but now he's forcing her.
That's what I mean. It's just going to turn into another rape story, and that kinda ends it for me. I actually feel bad for her ! But I don't blame Mr.Foxx, as I see it is a commissioned work. So the blame goes to the writer.
 
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Yeah, I kind of liked it more when it was just a corruption story, it still has a bit of that but now he's forcing her.
I agree with you, the son knowing her mother has a kind of lust for him choose extortion instead of seduction.
 
I think son's character is aesthetically right for the role. Regarding his way of being, it's ok for me, i think that in this type of stories sons should be bold, cocky, kind of manipulative and kind of determined to fuck their moms. Now, is blackmail a little bit too much, and wrong plot? Hmm, may be, but for me it's still exciting, especially if he manage to slowly convince her, after first resistance, to fuck him of her own free will.
 
I think son's character is aesthetically right for the role. Regarding his way of being, it's ok for me, i think that in this type of stories sons should be bold, cocky, kind of manipulative and kind of determined to fuck their moms. Now, is blackmail a little bit too much, and wrong plot? Hmm, may be, but for me it's still exciting, especially if he manage to slowly convince her, after first resistance, to fuck him of her own free will.
The son is an asshole, and it ruins the story for me. I hope he has a real nice friend, who the mother takes a liking to, and lets the nice, kind, boy get her instead. đŸ€­
 

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