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Lol, these two pages are literally so identical. On the left side, Lisa is regretting her recent actions and thinking about John, while on the right she's lamenting the temptation and how much she thinks about the boys.

Why do we need these little regret monologues when we already had the entire chapter 12 dedicated to Lisa realizing how wrong what she was doing was? And that whole chapter ended up feeling pointless because by the end of Chapter 13 and beginning of chapter 14 she immediately gave in again when she saw Lucas, only for her to regret that also here.

At this point I'm wondering if this is just going to become a repeating cycle of Lisa “slips” → regrets it → thinks about John → gets tempted again → “slips” again.

I don't mind Lisa being conflicted, but I feel like we've already established that conflict several times. At some point I'd like to see the story actually do something with it. Either Lisa genuinely decides to stop, accepts that she wants this and chooses it knowingly, or the story finally lets her face some consequences.

Otherwise these regret scenes start feeling less like character development and more like a reset button before the next temptation scene, which isn't far, seeing the cover of the chapter of her and Josh.

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Lol, these two pages are literally so identical. On the left side, Lisa is regretting her recent actions and thinking about John, while on the right she's lamenting the temptation and how much she thinks about the boys.

Why do we need these little regret monologues when we already had the entire chapter 12 dedicated to Lisa realizing how wrong what she was doing was? And that whole chapter ended up feeling pointless because by the end of Chapter 13 and beginning of chapter 14 she immediately gave in again when she saw Lucas, only for her to regret that also here.

At this point I'm wondering if this is just going to become a repeating cycle of Lisa “slips” → regrets it → thinks about John → gets tempted again → “slips” again.

I don't mind Lisa being conflicted, but I feel like we've already established that conflict several times. At some point I'd like to see the story actually do something with it. Either Lisa genuinely decides to stop, accepts that she wants this and chooses it knowingly, or the story finally lets her face some consequences.

Otherwise these regret scenes start feeling less like character development and more like a reset button before the next temptation scene, which isn't far, seeing the cover of the chapter of her and Josh.

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No matter what she thinks internally either coping or getting horny because we all know she's going to get fucked again by the guys constantly lol women am I right 😗.
 
No matter what she thinks internally either coping or getting horny because we all know she's going to get fucked again by the guys constantly lol women am I right 😗.
That's literally the only personality she has, coping of being horny to two teenagers lol. Rose and Carol are bit different, they seem to have some semblance of control and boundaries, even though Roses defenses was almost broken by Josh, she still managed to stop him before he penetrated her that's why he was so shocked, because he was so used to how easy Lisa was and broke without any effort, in the second chapter it was just a massage that turned sexual than went out of hand.
 
That's literally the only personality she has, coping of being horny to two teenagers lol. Rose and Carol are bit different, they seem to have some semblance of control and boundaries, even though Roses defenses was almost broken by Josh, she still managed to stop him before he penetrated her that's why he was so shocked, because he was so used to how easy Lisa was and broke without any effort, in the second chapter it was just a massage that turned sexual than went out of hand.
I like the girls having different personalities like Lisa falling so easily to the lust because her husband never gave her enough attention so makes sense while Rose being way more difficult to crack but eventually she's going to fall to temptation too 😗.

Tbh I would love a scenario where Nat sees her mom naked but he doesn't know is her maybe in a video where she's wearing a mask or something like that, a little risk would be nice imo.
 
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I like the girls having different personalities like Lisa falling so easily to the lust because her husband never gave her enough attention so makes sense while Rose being way more difficult to crack but eventually she's going to fall to temptation too 😗.

Tbh I would love a scenario where Nat sees her mom naked but he doesn't know is her maybe in a video where she's wearing a mask or something like that, a little risk would be nice imo.
Lol werent you calling Lisa horrible not long ago because of what she was doing?
 
Lol werent you calling Lisa horrible not long ago because of what she was doing?
Yeah she's the ultimate piece of shit that's a fact just look at her cocky sassy personality but again I like that the girls are different and at the same time I find this comic very entertaining but I would love to see more risky situations like chapter 1 and 2.
 
Yeah she's the ultimate piece of shit that's a fact just look at her cocky sassy personality but again I like that the girls are different and at the same time I find this comic very entertaining but I would love to see more risky situations like chapter 1 and 2.
I'm curious, what kind of ending would you actually want for Lisa? You seem to enjoy how awful/reckless she is but also want her actions to have consequences. Would you want John and Nathan to eventually find out and leave her, or something else?
 
I'm curious, what kind of ending would you actually want for Lisa? You seem to enjoy how awful/reckless she is but also want her actions to have consequences. Would you want John and Nathan to eventually find out and leave her, or something else?
Shes a very interesting character, I said previously would be cool if she has consequences but since Mynks never does that well I wouldn't mind to keep watching her shenanigans, maybe for example Nat has a weird feeling something unhinged is happening when Jacob and Lucas are around her but no more than that, nah John can still be clueless but Nat tho he can be a threat to her, would be funny if Jacob and Lucas shows him a video of a masked girl naked so Nat can't stop jerking off thinking about it not knowing that's Lisa but he has a weird feeling he already saw her body before something like that.

Maybe in the last chapter Nat finds out about her perverted adventures with the boys but she doesn't give a fuck and keeps doing it like the entitled skank she is lmao.
 
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