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Nandof's transitions from one shot to another are too rapid and sometimes disorganized, even in the dialogue, especially in MMPS8. I wish I could see the scene where the mother sits on top of her son, grabbing his dick and inserting it into her pussy. The dialogue also makes me feel that certain images should come before others. This isn't meant to diminish his work, but I think the comic would be much better.