Wow, fantastic scene, congrats man, good dialogues too, always underlining the prohibited, taboo nature of this sexual relationship, and creating a plot where he's slowly conquering her, and becoming a main man in her life... very good in my opinion. Hope she'll get pregnant, and then , as every incest themed story, that should be kind of the end, and you can go on with another story, hope you won't go with too many chapters and/or new characters. This phase seducing-trying-convincing-fucking is always the best.