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[Nenet & SVSComics text version] Photo Session With Mom

kokcomics

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This is a rewrite.
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The problem with this short artwork is there's no build-up, no context or background, no "convincing, talking-into-doing-taboo" phase, so potentially great mom and ok son character are kind of wasted here. In my opinion dialogues made everything even worse - too vulgar, kind of tasteless or gross...no tension, she's talking like a whore too...so it's kind of wasted opportunity.
 
The problem with this short artwork is there's no build-up, no context or background, no "convincing, talking-into-doing-taboo" phase, so potentially great mom and ok son character are kind of wasted here. In my opinion dialogues made everything even worse - too vulgar, kind of tasteless or gross...no tension, she's talking like a whore too...so it's kind of wasted opportunity
When content is stolen, no one bothers to download the description. I generally do not allow biological incest in my stories. The stepmothers, the teachers, the neighbor are involved. In this story, this guy is her neighbor. And yet, this is a pron, if you noticed, visualization is primary here. And there's only one problem, they put their own bastard, cocky signature on the stolen content.
 
Congrats @Nenet on your artwork. Well, too bad you're not doing "full-incest" stories, this mature woman above would be perfect as "mother" character. I personally hate any type of "step" stories, i think that once artist is touching "family" subject, it should go all the way. I mean, at the end of the day, it's still just a fantasy, it has nothing to do with your real mother, daughter or sister, obviously. Sometimes it's just about someone who makes you have that fantasy - for example, your short-haired mature character (can't remember her name) is similar to a mature woman i worked with many years ago, and i often fantasized about her as my "fantasy mom", always exciting, always worked great for me as a fantasy...
 
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