[PBX] Goten x Videl

[RoyalDidi]

Okaaaay, so a few things
1)while heavily inspired by PBX's work, I also plan, as you can see, to draw new pages.
The style is different, too
2)I won't make the whole kamehasutra 2 comic, only a few parts
3)I post the lineart first, then I'll colorize it, I wanne improve on this point and do something different compared to my previous stuff

Anyway, here's the lineart for the first two pages

 

[RoyalDidi]

I think I should have redrawn the first page from scratches, here the overall look is kinda bad, I think I tried to stick to PBX's direction while adding my style so the mix is weird
Oh anyway, doesn't matter, I guess
I really like how I've drawn the second page tho

 

[RoyalDidi]

Here's the line for page 3

 

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Page 4 line

 

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Page 5 lines

 

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Working on the next page
When I'll be done with the lineart (I plan to draw 3 or 4 more pages including this one), before the color part, I'll try to redraw a few things
There's, for whatever reason, a gap between pages, about how I draw them
Seems I just can't stick to one artstyle ?

 

[RoyalDidi]

Page 6 lineart
The last panel is...meh, could have been better I think

 

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Page 7 lineart

 

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Page 8 lineart

 

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Final page lineart
Now I can finally focus on the colorization

But first, I gotta try not to die because man the weather is fucked up
Wayyyy too hot

 

[RoyalDidi]

Goten's hand is too small
I'll fix when I'll put some color on this page

 

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Page 1 colorized

 

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Sorry not sorry for the 67 on Videl's plane btw, don't know why I did that