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Au Naturel Part 30 - 30 pages - now available!
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1 thing is wrong: Pete aproaches Tom,not other way arround.At the dock, Tom approaches Pete and tells him that there has been an accident and that he needs Pete's help.
Oh really cool I just copy paste the spoilers fyi I just fixed it.1 thing is wrong: Pete aproaches Tom,not other way arround.
Wait 24hOh really cool I just copy paste the spoilers fyi I just fixed it.
Maybe you can give us spoilers of pages 21 - 30.
Fine by me, could be short spoilers straight to the point or long ones including all the dialogues, is up to you.Wait 24h
Nothing happened.Dialogues arent Shakespearian,but here they are:@zaxxon If you can provide long spoilers with full dialogues for more context the better.
Damn unexpected development I just hope this new scenario pays off greatly on Victoria mindset and sexual libido because the ceremony was rushed because of this so it better be good Pegasus...Nothing happened.Dialogues arent Shakespearian,but here they are:
Tom asks Pete"What kind of accident?"
Pete"The Athena, never made it to port. Captain darnell sent out a mayday call a few hours ago. But that was the last anyone's heard from them."
Tom"They must've been in the water for hours by now! And no one's even looking for them?"
Pete"No. But we can. We're closer to their last known position than anyone else. We can get there before the coast guard!"
Tom"Are you insane?you want us to go out there?in this weather? The athena was a fifty-foot yacht with a reinforced hull. If she couldn't make it, what chance do we have in my little fishing boat?"
Pete"Sure, your boat is smaller, but she's built for rough water. And you've weathered large storms before, you know how to handle yourself out there."
Tom"I know how to handle her in storm. But this isn't a normal storm. This is the kind of storm that sinks ships and kills men.Maybe it already has, because if the Athena went down, then Darnell and theSwedbergs are probably already dead. And we'll be dead too if we go out there!"
Pete"Don't say that. You don't know that they're dead!"
Tom"Pete..."
Pete"Listen to me!it's still early. It's only been a few hours since they went down. If they managed to get a lifeboat into the water, or something to hold onto, then they could still be out there, right now."
Tom"Pete, stop!You've been around long enough to know, that this storm is too much for any of our ships to handle.i want to save them as much as you do... But if we go out there today, it won't be a rescue mission, it'll be suicide!you don't even know that they're alive. Do you really want to risk our lives on a maybe, on a hope?you have a wife and daughter at home that loves you. We both have families, who's going to take care of them, if we're dead?"
Pete"You're right... But what if it's too late by the time we get out there?"
Tom"Honestly Pete... In this kind of weather, it's probably already is too late. But, we'll look for them as soon as the storm has eased. Until then, we just have to hope for the best."
MEANWHILE... Victoria wake up on some beach thinking"Ugh... Where am i?w... What... Happened?I... I remember now. We were caught in a storm... And the ship sank...i... I fell in the water, and the waves were hitting me so hard... Then it all went black.oh god... Martin... My boys!"
She looks arround see something in sea"Wait a minute... T... There's someone in the water... Looks like two people swimming towards the shore...is that? Yes, it's carl and lukas. Oh thank god, they're alive!"
Exhausted Carl and Lukas swim to her.
Carl"We made it, Lukas. Look. Mom is, right there."
Lukas"Bro... I don't know how to thank you. If it wasn't for you, i would have drowned out there. You saved my life."
Lukas colapsees on sand"I'm sorry Carl... I don't think i can move another inch."
Carl"It's okay bro, we're safe on shore now. Rest as much as you need."
Victoria"I... Is he alright?"
Lukas"Yeah, he's just exhausted from swimming all night."
Great timing Pegasus...
My prediction back in April who knew eh!Meanwhile there’s a boat accident Darnell and Victorias hubby gets washed away guess who gets washed up on the au natural beach![]()
I doubt they are back on AN island.They traveled 4h by yacht away from island.That is at least 100 miles.My prediction back in April who knew eh!
I remembered I said I wanted the yacht to have a malfunction so they would seek help in a near island lmao I'm glad something like that happened lmao.My prediction back in April who knew eh!
Pete really wants to search for them no matter what that's a badass giga chad individual and most likely Tom is going to help him, interesting premise I must say.I doubt they are back on AN island.They traveled 4h by yacht away from island.That is at least 100 miles.
That is lunatic behaviour,not badass.Not sure what PS meant with Pete dialogue with Tom,but to me Pete appear ignorant and stupid.If yacht is lost after 4h on 6h travel,how Pete thinks that AN island is closer to them than destination? Whole timetable is wrong.Yacht leave AN on 4PM and was schedule to arrive at 10PM.After 4h (8PM) Darell sent SOS and yacht sunk.NEXT MORNING Pete got call that Athena was in trouble. So it was at least 10h after yacht sunk and Pete says to Tom that was only been FEW hours?! PS dont think much about what he write.I remembered I said I wanted the yacht to have a malfunction so they would seek help in a near island lmao I'm glad something like that happened lmao.
Pete really wants to search for them no matter what that's a badass giga chad individual and most likely Tom is going to help him, interesting premise I must say.
I mean he wants to do it even in the storm he has balls but I'm glad Tom convinced him to wait that's my point, his intention makes him a badass but also a very crazy person even if don't make sense taking in consideration the timeline but I agree PS didn't think too much about this all situation but regardless of that Pete is going to search for them either alone or with Tom.That is lunatic behaviour,not badass.Not sure what PS meant with Pete dialogue with Tom,but to me Pete appear ignorant and stupid.If yacht is lost after 4h on 6h travel,how Pete thinks that AN island is closer to them than destination? Whole timetable is wrong.Yacht leave AN on 4PM and was schedule to arrive at 10PM.After 4h (8PM) Darell sent SOS and yacht sunk.NEXT MORNING Pete got call that Athena was in trouble. So it was at least 10h after yacht sunk and Pete says to Tom that was only been FEW hours?! PS dont think much about what he write.
I was just saying the boat got wrecked and we get to see Victoria again still a good guessI doubt they are back on AN island.They traveled 4h by yacht away from island.That is at least 100 miles.
I truly believe she's going to return to the island eventually but not soon, hope Martin and Darnell too.I was just saying the boat got wrecked and we get to see Victoria again still a good guess
Oh no. PS has already gone to the next level. Again, Victoria. Probably Trile3 said that many disliked this part when it was launched. Extremely useless. Though the story of this part has taken a new path. But Victoria is not liked by the majority of the fanbase. If PS brought them again to AN Island. I don't think that the future parts would be that level of interesting like previous parts except for the Victoria portions.I truly believe she's going to return to the island eventually but not soon, hope Martin and Darnell too.
Make sense this part was disliked by some users if you think about it because this is the reason the ceremony ended so rushed leaving a lot of details offscreen like The Master eyaculating on Ayanna's mouth, Tom disappeared like nothing after Gina ate his profusely cum, no Andre Shonda Kayla Emily Dani Courtney around, Kelly behaving like a jealous immature child (she needs to learn so much smfh) etc basically a barebones great orgy, this could have been a legendary chapter but PS fumbled it in the most part at least Brandi did the big step to open her horizons from now on and Dylan's blessing a lot of us were asking since a while (me since chapter 10, fuck that chapter)Oh no. PS has already gone to the next level. Again, Victoria. Probably Trile3 said that many disliked this part when it was launched. Extremely useless. Though the story of this part has taken a new path. But Victoria is not liked by the majority of the fanbase. If PS brought them again to AN Island. I don't think that the future parts would be that level of interesting like previous parts except for the Victoria portions.
Sorry for Victoria fans. But it is true. Victoria's story was not that interesting. PS should have given it more spice like Brandi's.
PS should introduce Hannah, Kelly's friend. Or, Brandi's single scene with Tom or any other locals without Dylan. Maybe that is the spice right now AN needs. Atleast one is needed right now. We could not know about the Wilson family's morning talks about last night's incident.
Last upload have 4 dislike (silver and higher have access ATM), That doesnt seem much,but usually AN doesnt have any dislike (only AN29 had more dislike - some parts even13)many disliked this part when it was launched