[Pegasus Smith] Au Naturel

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Because PS doesnt have nothing interesting for Brandi and Kelly now as locals, he's so afraid to do the obvious next step by giving them total freedom to do whatever with the locals that he rather waste a entire chapter on filler drama about Victoria again dragging the story repeating the same shit we already saw instead of create a new interesting unhinged and perverted scenario with The Wilsons away from Dylan.

Yes I would love to see more spotlight for the side characters you mentioned but with less drama and more action but the one that needs pages to develop her character is Kelly because how big of a disappointment she is right now with her jealousy and insecurities that ruined the end of the rushed ceremony smfh.

If he keeps wasting time in useless uninspired scenarios his subs are going to go somewhere and his fate would be similar to Y3DF or more recently Daval3D, he should pay attention to the amazing feedback it was posted here in this forum @wicksel take notes stop the bullshit and create scenarios according to the concept of the comic a nudist swinger paradise that allows incest, crazy he struggles to do interesting plotlines in such a wild setting smfh.

You are totally right. Actually, both the Wilsons (not Dylan) need fresh air and fresh flesh of the island. But look what to do? I don't know why PS don't understand the core fact. Wilsons are the key to his earnings (especially Brandi). So, focus on Wilsons. And yes, Kelly should get focus too. But, Brandi should get a separate story with only Tom (no Dylan and Kelly interuption).

 

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You are totally right. Actually, both the Wilsons (not Dylan) need fresh air and fresh flesh of the island. But look what to do? I don't know why PS don't understand the core fact. Wilsons are the key to his earnings (especially Brandi). So, focus on Wilsons.

I don't know whats happening to him maybe he just lacks of imagination like I stated before, I think maybe he's doing this filler chapter about The Swedbergs while hes brainstorming what to do with Brandi and Kelly as new locals, he knows the next step for them is having sexual interactions with the locals not involving Dylan because he's having fun with the female locals since day 1 so now is The Wilsons turn, PS already admitted on discord the incest aspects between them is pretty much done after their threesome so to avoid repetition he needs to do the next move and now he has all the tools to do it post ceremony.

True most of us are here for Brandi and Kelly and sadly a lot are tired of Dylan always getting involved in their scenes so as new locals both blondes needs to explore by themselves to grow as new habitants of the island because Dylan just drags them to his convenience and that's not ok, most of PS fans are males so give the girls spotlight away from him, the island is too big you know.

A 1 on 1 between Tom and Brandi would be the perfect chance to prepare her to face The Monster eventually, now she has a very good relationship with Tom because all the nice things they told to each other in the ceremony when Dylan finished on Brandis ass so wouldn't be forced at all.

Kelly also needs spotlight next away from Dylan and Petra can help her get use to the island in no time.

Is still crazy to me he's struggling in such a insane setting to do unchained scenarios between the main and side characters.

 

[Gamera777]

Like to see Victoria get her vagina filled both by her sons.

 

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You have written a good fantasy. But with extra spices. If we want to see such fuckvibes, we have to wait for more 5 years. I don't know that Vic's family is not the protagonist of this story. There are many more side characters. But why do PS always have some dedicated parts and also extra scenes for these characters? If PS wants to show the story of side characters, Gina, Pete's families, Harry's families, Master's families, Momoko and her son, and many more people are there to have a better story. Even Andre and his sis have also (but not so much vibe). The part starts with a shipwreck in a storm; islanders were in tensed and now after 100 pages and months of waiting, we are catered to with the same tasteless items. If PS sees it, he should remember that AN and TSB are two pillars. If he ignores fans, one day fans will ignore him, and then he will have nothing.

You're mistaken. I don't have that ability, this has its own original work. I'm just modifying the character names and some words and phrases. Convenient for you to understand. Of course there are ingredients, the question is, can PS really create stories between adults? Or the independent story of Rory and Brandy/Kelly. Because Rory's height is similar to theirs. However, Rory needs to be more robust and have a larger penis. We need Tom's gentleman, keep Rory's own mischievousness! In the independent story, Rory needs to hide her purpose and use every opportunity to ignite Brandy/Kelly's desire. Let them have a few wet dreams, and Rory sees the opportunity to showcase his large penis and muscular physique.

 

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You're mistaken. I don't have that ability, this has its own original work. I'm just modifying the character names and some words and phrases. Convenient for you to understand. Of course there are ingredients, the question is, can PS really create stories between adults? Or the independent story of Rory and Brandy/Kelly. Because Rory's height is similar to theirs. However, Rory needs to be more robust and have a larger penis. We need Tom's gentleman, keep Rory's own mischievousness! In the independent story, Rory needs to hide her purpose and use every opportunity to ignite Brandy/Kelly's desire. Let them have a few wet dreams, and Rory sees the opportunity to showcase his large penis and muscular physique.

I already shared the perfect plot to make Rory a important antagonist again by getting close to Kelly maybe in the bar telling her what happen in chapter 10 (to this day she still doesn't know about that huge event that changed the course of the story in the worst possible way) so shes shocked Dylan or Brandi never told her so she doesnt believe him at first but still thinks makes sense why she felt Dylans tension towards Rory in chapter 22 so she goes and finds Brandi ask her if all of that is true and Brandi admits everything Rory said is true so Kelly gets curious about him to the point of considering having sex with him the next time he sees him meanwhile Rory is like well I planted the seed of curiosity now I just need to wait to see Kelly again revealing his plan to be the first local to fuck Brandi and Kelly see dude that's how you do a interesting plotline using that annoying punchable face obnoxious entitled piece of crap Rory .

Btw Rorys physical appereance is fine not everyone needs to have Toms body type to be able to fuck, remember even being such a piece of shit with Brandi previously he managed to fuck her but this time like you said he needs to play low to convince Kelly.

Btw take notes @wicksel

 

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I already shared the perfect plot to make Rory a important antagonist again by getting close to Kelly maybe in the bar telling her what happen in chapter 10 (to this day she still doesn't know about that huge event that changed the course of the story in the worst possible way) so shes shocked Dylan or Brandi never told her so she doesnt believe him at first but still thinks makes sense why she felt Dylans tension towards Rory in chapter 22 so she goes and finds Brandi ask her if all of that is true and Brandi admits everything Rory said is true so Kelly gets curious about him to the point of considering having sex with him the next time he sees him meanwhile Rory is like well I planted the seed of curiosity now I just need to wait to see Kelly again revealing his plan to be the first local to fuck Brandi and Kelly see dude that's how you do a interesting plotline using that annoying punchable face obnoxious entitled piece of crap Rory .

Btw Rorys physical appereance is fine not everyone needs to have Toms body type to be able to fuck, remember even being such a piece of shit with Brandi previously he managed to fuck her but this time like you said he needs to play low to convince Kelly.

Btw take notes @wicksel

What did Brandy tell Kelly? Rory is a 'little pervert'!
Kelly is very calm when facing twins and Rory. Kelly can still tease those twin boys. But when facing Dylan, there may be a little nervousness and restraint. There are some bloodline influences here, and the rest is that Dylan's penis is stronger than the twins and Rory's. Kelly can confidently showcase her figure in front of the twins, covering her breasts with her hands when facing Dylan, and even giving herself an excuse to say 'I'm not staring at your place'.
Rory and Dylan are like swords leaving their scabbard. Dylan is like a sword, and if the user doesn't handle it properly, they will hurt themselves. Rory is like a scabbard, with beautiful surface decorations and an empty interior (defeated by the rising Dylan at the bar).
If any reader wishes for Kelly and Rory to partner up. Perhaps it can only be achieved in an independent story.
Apprentice Paladin - Rory, adventure in the world of monsters, the story between him and three women!
The true paladin uses the holy hammer in his hand, while Rory uses the flesh hammer between his legs. The two testicles are hammer heads, and the long and thick one is the handle!

 

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What did Brandy tell Kelly? Rory is a 'little pervert'!
Kelly is very calm when facing twins and Rory. Kelly can still tease those twin boys. But when facing Dylan, there may be a little nervousness and restraint. There are some bloodline influences here, and the rest is that Dylan's penis is stronger than the twins and Rory's. Kelly can confidently showcase her figure in front of the twins, covering her breasts with her hands when facing Dylan, and even giving herself an excuse to say 'I'm not staring at your place'.
Rory and Dylan are like swords leaving their scabbard. Dylan is like a sword, and if the user doesn't handle it properly, they will hurt themselves. Rory is like a scabbard, with beautiful surface decorations and an empty interior (defeated by the rising Dylan at the bar).
If any reader wishes for Kelly and Rory to partner up. Perhaps it can only be achieved in an independent story.
Apprentice Paladin - Rory, adventure in the world of monsters, the story between him and three women!
The true paladin uses the holy hammer in his hand, while Rory uses the flesh hammer between his legs. The two testicles are hammer heads, and the long and thick one is the handle!

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What did Brandi tell Kelly? well confirming to Kelly all that Rory said to her about what happened in chapter 10 in the bar is true when he fucked her so aggressively and she loved every second of it.

You are undestimating Rory potential or you didn't see Brandi rolling her eyes of pure guilty pleasure in chapter 10 by him and again Kelly is calm because she still feels like a outsider in the island and you are suggesting she cant get slutty or unhinged when she get use to the culture of the island thats wrong.

Kelly teasing Vic sons (not twins btw) could be fun to see until both of them fuck the shit out of her while Dylan takes care of Victoria.

PS can use Dylan tension towards Rory in chapter 22 (glad you shared the specific page) to incorporate him again as a important antagonist with the example I gave you about Rory talking to Kelly in the bar so that way it wouldn't feel forced