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[Pegasus Smith] Au Naturel

Apart from various mistakes and errors, when stories are too long and dragged too much, they become just non-exciting, sad bullshit. And you just think of how much better it would be if artists use their time and talent for new, shorter stories.
 
Emily is a little liar (AN23) when she says that no one has fucked her since Dylan agreed to get her pregnant (AN7) because on Saturday morning, she was still fucking her father (AN16).
But Pete is not going to make her a baby. :)

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Emily is a little liar (AN23) when she says that no one has fucked her since Dylan agreed to get her pregnant (AN7) because on Saturday morning, she was still fucking her father (AN16).
But Pete is not going to make her a baby. :)
I think you are asking to much from pegasus............
 
Dylan cums profusely inside Emily afterwards Kelly is like I have to do something about it LMFAO great timing and peak dialogue, now what she's going to do make Emily take a pill 💊 wtf is this plot , while Brandi does absolutely fucking nothing 🤦 at least make her spying while masturbates watching Victoria fucking her 2 sons or something smfh.
 
I name this post ......... "back in time for au naturel" and especially for an6 no text. brandi with emily and dylan hot as never again, the good hot scenes for au naturel are gone. after 23 an there is no development or even insiration even if ps add kelly and victoria, they both disappear among to 34-36 ? other characters. also the graphics quality is gone, au naturel 6 is more hot than 23 no matter how hard ps is trying. is time for a restart.
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I name this post ......... "back in time for au naturel" and especially for an6 no text. brandi with emily and dylan hot as never again, the good hot scenes for au naturel are gone. after 23 an there is no development or even insiration even if ps add kelly and victoria, they both disappear among to 34-36 ? other characters. also the graphics quality is gone, au naturel 6 is more hot than 23 no matter how hard ps is trying. is time for a restart.
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Indeed this was a really hot scene but all changed after chapter 10 I wonder why lmao Brandi is so boring now with so many restrictions she just there taking the sun while the rest have fun or watch others fuck like Kelly, PS needs to give Brandi a 180°spin asap she's the main character ffs spice this shit up stop gate keeping her...
 
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Brandi after the facts which took place at the temple, was totally comitted with the relationship with Dylan now is totally carefree if Dylan get pregnant to Emily being Kelly "The saviour" allowing Dylan to have sex with her. Poor writting.
 
Brandi after the facts which took place at the temple, was totally comitted with the relationship with Dylan now is totally carefree if Dylan get pregnant to Emily being Kelly "The saviour" allowing Dylan to have sex with her. Poor writting.
It doesnt make sense , all of that because chapter 10 "rivalry" like PS said lol , Kelly the failed saviour just watched the all thing while Brandi does absolutely nothing smfh...
 
At this point in the story, Brandi should be fucking everything she comes across, knowing that Dylan will be fine on his own and completely unconcerned about almost everything, like Gina. She should even have fucked Victoria's two children by now. Kelly, on the other hand, after the competition, should have already slept with Dylan. PS drags everything out so ridiculously and almost senselessly that it already seems like a drama between Brandi and Kelly.
 
I name this post ......... "back in time for au naturel" and especially for an6 no text. brandi with emily and dylan hot as never again, the good hot scenes for au naturel are gone. after 23 an there is no development or even insiration even if ps add kelly and victoria, they both disappear among to 34-36 ? other characters. also the graphics quality is gone, au naturel 6 is more hot than 23 no matter how hard ps is trying. is time for a restart.
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can you do the "back in time" for chapter 10 too? would really appreciate some no-text pages from that chapter.
 
is the same as "the escort" same scenes, same poses same anything with brandi - dylan. I believe pegasus is trying to find solution to problems have already create in au naturel............
'same anything' indeed, he didn't even bother to correct the age and spelling errors
 

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