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[Pegasus Smith] Au Naturel

From the little that can be understood from the translation, Kelly has told Brandi that she has slept with Dylan and it doesn't seem to bother her in the least (after that conversation in the bathroom at AN22, I think). And Kelly seems more relaxed and even happy. She just needed a good fuck to calm her worries by doing it with her own nephew. Now it's Brandi's turn to get ruffled with other men on the island.
 
I'm sorry i didn't read all the post about ntr, but, i would like to just write my two cents. Personally I don't think this story it's that deep about relationships and things like that, i mean it's about this private resort where they can't escape (because the boat come once a month right?), honestly in a real situation (being stuck naked with "hot" people) i think everyone is more lenient with boundaries. so i wouldn't judge much about ntr yes or ntr no ✌️
 
What you described is still NTR, bro; just because Dylan wouldn't know wouldn't change the genre of the scene, just less extreme than what happened.

Also when it comes to Swinging which seems to be what you keep defending, it was never going to work and it would've been always considered NTR because this story started pretending to be an Incest story (mom-son), but as it turns out the autor wanted to just be a better looking Pigking, chapter 9-10 killed this story, so many people back from 8muses left. You put something in between the mother and son; it's NTR, worse, it's the worst kind, mom NTR.

If Pegasus wanted to make this story Swinging and not NTR, he should've started from the beginning, but then no incest crowd would've gotten in; instead, he spent 7 chapters developing his protagonists incestual relationship, just to have the female MC railed by someone else in front of the male MC. That is like a 9/10 on the scale of NTR; your idea just knocks it down to a 7. Dylan not knowing would be a bomb that would explode even worse in the future too.

Pegasus should've wrapped this story of Brandi-Dylan the moment the mother character accepted to have a relationship with her son, then made some epilogue with her pregnant, not even implying sharing; maybe add the aunt if you want to be a completionist; it would've been perfect.

IF he wanted full swinging he should've used a new set of chars, that could've been introduced with Dylan-Brandi and took the mantle of MCs from them to keep the Title going, like Victoria or the other useless characters, then they could START with the swinging, not with the incest, so the NTR would be lighter, much lighter. But yeah, if Pegassus had done this with Brandi, the story simply wouldn't have been as popular back then.

Anyway, I'm only here for morbid curiosity, though I'm happy I'm not the only one. I remember @Gnaparelli from way back when this was good.

@PPanGames I didn't notice your cut before, since I only maintained a minimum attention span here and only delved into the comments when making one, but from what you wrote, you did what Pegasus should've done: isolated the protagonists from the filler and unwanted developments. I will check it out and hit you back.
I fully agree with your take on this one.
 
From the little that can be understood from the translation, Kelly has told Brandi that she has slept with Dylan and it doesn't seem to bother her in the least (after that conversation in the bathroom at AN22, I think). And Kelly seems more relaxed and even happy. She just needed a good fuck to calm her worries by doing it with her own nephew. Now it's Brandi's turn to get ruffled with other men on the island.
Yeah Kelly told Brandi about it and Brandi just don't care to much and that's what she needed a good fuck to release all her emotions, now Brandi is going to keep perverting Victoria to keep going ike Gina did to her previously btw where's is she Tom Pete and The Monster.

I think Brandi needs to interact more with male locals on the island to finally grow a pair and talk to Dylan about her feelings and avoids another unnecessary NTR scene Kelly can help her making that step since Gina is out of the picture.
 
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Well Dykan29, you're back. There are some who have been wondering if you were grounded or missing hahahaha. Great images of aunt Kelly getting fucked like she deserves hahahaha
 
because of me ps develop with subscribestar a three point system to locate the bad boys....
Oh shit that's wild , now you have to be very careful.

Crazy that Daval doesn't implement that same system don't you think his shit is leaked everywhere lol.
 

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