Rian
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Great. Now pegasus should put this series in hiatus for at least a month and work on other projects for a while.
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- big-tits hair-blonde milf mother
- blowjob double-penetration group-sex incest
Oblivion
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I don't think he's going to do that anytime soon but I want to see more of Timmy Strikes Back , the rest of his comics are meh to me tbh.
Mrh69
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Certainly. But how could PS add her in the current context? Could she be Pete's sister or Ann? Was she somewhere else on the island? Is she a PR person, the legal counsel for the naturist business, who was away working for the resort and now returns after a few weeks of travel?
The problem is that PS doesn't know how to take advantage of all the characters: some are overused, others underused, and others are simply introduced and never brought out again except in plain sight. I don't know if adding her would be beneficial to the story.
Victoria Swedberg
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Oblivion
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She can be Ann younger sister because her body is very similar even the bush lol , I would say shes somewhere else fucking younger horny dudes or fucking Pete( to this day still bothers me that Brandi never kissed him after he borrowed the phone to her or Kelly when she arrived to the island days after).
PS has a huge problem in character development thats a fact just look at the current state of Brandi is very disappointing and pathetic the main character after chapter 10 became such a boring lazy purist with 0 personality unlike how she was in the firsts chapters.
Wheres Gina Tom Pete The Monster Gina's daughter etc , cant believe this still happening after 24 chapters smfh.
Btw why the fuck the surfing shaft is so empty , wasted opportunity to see cameos at least
PS doesn't have imagination at all...
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Oblivion
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Very interesting spoilers by Trile3
Rian
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Me too. But pegasus doesn’t know how to properly use characters and storylines with potential. Look at TSB. MF added TimmyxTina for like 30-40 pages and didn't even write a proper followup in next episode. Instead he barely showed tina in the next episode.
Oblivion
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Exactly, same thing with Brandi in AN she's just there in the background doing nothing while the rest does shit like Kelly and Victoria.Me too. But pegasus doesn’t know how to properly use characters and storylines with potential. Look at TSB. MF added TimmyxTina for like 30-40 pages and didn't even write a proper followup in next episode. Instead he barely showed tina in the next episode.
dykan29
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let me add my view, pegasus is on the way to change the active characters to less needed. it is obvious for me after an20 pegasus is trying to focus. the only characters appear from all those 45? are emily and her mom. is a nice try to put together the story, I wish I am not wrong........
Rian
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I still believe that pegasus should take a break from A.N because the story is getting boring. Some people wants brandi to be everyone's bitch but that backfired when p.s tried something like that in chapter 10 and fell flat on his
. The best thing to do is make few one shot spinoffs focused on the minor characters who has a lot of potentials, all the while focusing more on the other comics.
bigusdickus
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Oblivion
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Chapter 10 backlash was because the way PS did Brandi and Rory sexual scene using NTR to create a rivalry between him and Dylan (his words not mine) after that this comic changed for the worst just look at the current state of Brandi.I still believe that pegasus should take a break from A.N because the story is getting boring. Some people wants brandi to be everyone's bitch but that backfired when p.s tried something like that in chapter 10 and fell flat on his
Oblivion
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??? lol
Bellerophon
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Amazing! Thank you!
Kalmeena
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Victoria Swedberg
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WOW ! That was amazing,. Especially the fucking part.!! Please continue this great work. And also same for victoria..You're the king!
Oblivion
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Can't wait for more.
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