[Pegasus Smith] Au Naturel

Ikki de Fênix said:
Au Naturel 27 (Pages 01 - 50)

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Victoria is so hot. Everyone here is hoping for a double penetration. Will it happen?
 
 
A plan: Victoria and Dylan play together? Use this design material to unfold!

Suggestion: Dylan should be more robust and have a longer story, even if it's just a standalone spin off.✊✊

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Already 5 years past. But, PS has done nothing. We have to accept it. This, particularly this comic have a massive possibility, but it flopped. Possibility is full but execution is zero. Story is not going in a good pace. PS said that he wants to shape the comic in a loving way between Brandi and Dylan. He is not such capable of writing this. Think of it, like Starting time Trump was in the chair, then Biden came and again Trump came, he has passed 1 year already in the chair. Dune part one has come in the starting time of the comic, then Dune 2 also came, and even just 1 or 1.5 years later, Dune 3 will come. But, this comic will still be pointless.

Brandy has definitely a possible main character with whom they could be multiple stories. But, she is not used for this fucking 5 years. In the middle at the time of part 10, there was a possibility of good storyline but he messed up that. What a mess you are PEGASUS SMITH ! Accept it, you are a slow story writer, pointless writer. Write useless thing.
 
The creator of this story has their own style and plan, and many readers will provide feedback. But not all of them may be adopted by creators.
In fact, some stories can unfold in different eras, but the downside is that they can make people feel bored. Because the central content is roughly the same, only the times are different. The advantage is to match various hobbies with each other!
 
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