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[Pegasus Smith] Au Naturel

pegasus since have lost a lot of subs decide to post here a.n and c.o.s, for me is fine with how many names is going to do that. but for me the 27 open another drama after victoria's 3some, I think was a mistake from pegasus to let the father see his sons fucking his wife. there is nothing to remind me how that a.n start. since that story continue on same island should appear more often characters like gina or rory or anyone else, for me each chapter is moving far from the 8-9 first chapters and that makes a.n less acceptable for me....
 
pegasus since have lost a lot of subs decide to post here a.n and c.o.s, for me is fine with how many names is going to do that. but for me the 27 open another drama after victoria's 3some, I think was a mistake from pegasus to let the father see his sons fucking his wife. there is nothing to remind me how that a.n start. since that story continue on same island should appear more often characters like gina or rory or anyone else, for me each chapter is moving far from the 8-9 first chapters and that makes a.n less acceptable for me....
Let's be honest after chapter 10 everything went to shit basically that's why Vic appeared to try to make fans forgot that stupid NTR shit PS did that ruined Brandi forever, now he's focusing on side characters because is clear that he doesnt know what to do with her and Kelly next , they are fucking residents for fuck sake why he's such a coward , is time.
 
Ok Rian you utter smegma lover whats so funny , you are just another user in negation that chapter fucking 10 ruined AN or what.
 
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Damn Vic looks perfect with a dick in her mouth 🍆

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Ok Rian you utter smegma lover whats so funny , you are just another user in negation that chapter fucking 10 ruined AN or what.
The reason for or the laughing reactions is that you repeat the same stuff withi every 2-4 post. Bashing writers, using colourful languages and throwing crybaby tantrum when someone finds your 💩 as hilarious.

Do something new like maybe leak the new pages or make gif or why not make some of your own fancomic of those whom you bash?
😂😆🤣😋😈

But I still believe that the bull💩+forced ntr in chapter 10 of A.N completely ruined the whole comic.
 
The reason for or the laughing reactions is that you repeat the same stuff withi every 2-4 post. Bashing writers, using colourful languages and throwing crybaby tantrum when someone finds your 💩 as hilarious.

Do something new like maybe leak the new pages or make gif or why not make some of your own fancomic of those whom you bash?
😂😆🤣😋😈

But I still believe that the bull💩+forced ntr in chapter 10 of A.N completely ruined the whole comic.
Wrong , not someone I only ask YOU about it because you love my comments, I'm not doing any tantrum for that at all so stop lying , is hilarious to me somebody find my comments funny because that's the fucking point.

Leak pages is not easy like previously that's why I don't do it anymore damn dude you are such a fool not knowing that , PS anti leak tactics are harder and harder, ask Dykan about it you innocent child.

Fancomic you say nah they don't deserve anything because those fans love to gatekeep possibilities, stop being so naive bro.

NTR in chapter 10 absolutely ruined AN that's a fact.

PD dont get sad like a lil bitch and enjoy the forum.
 
Everyone can express their own opinions here, 'One hundred readers, one hundred Hamlets!' The story did not develop in the direction roughly guessed by the readers, which is beyond our control. If readers find similar stories, they can also share them with other readers!
 
Everyone can express their own opinions here, 'One hundred readers, one hundred Hamlets!' The story did not develop in the direction roughly guessed by the readers, which is beyond our control. If readers find similar stories, they can also share them with other readers!
Tell me a similar story to this where the female main character can do whatever she wants not allowing her son to dictate her behavior in a free will island because I don't find any, PS is just a coward who refuse to finally do something interesting with Brandi that would make sense in this setting he created, is not hard to do what a hypocrite he is.
 
Tell me a similar story to this where the female main character can do whatever she wants not allowing her son to dictate her behavior in a free will island because I don't find any, PS is just a coward who refuse to finally do something interesting with Brandi that would make sense in this setting he created, is not hard to do what a hypocrite he is.
Check the crazydad comics.😁
 
Sincerly AN 28 began in a very poor way.
Just a regular intercorse of Victoria hubby with a local....story is going down.
Instead of focusing on Kelly ass,maybe penetrated by Brandi with a dildo or a DP with Victoria ' sono,or else,plot is pretty soft and emotionally poor
 
Sincerly AN 28 began in a very poor way.
Just a regular intercorse of Victoria hubby with a local....story is going down.
Instead of focusing on Kelly ass,maybe penetrated by Brandi with a dildo or a DP with Victoria ' sono,or else,plot is pretty soft and emotionally poor
Yeah , very vanilla shit without any shocking factor at all and knowing the fact Brandi is restricted by Dylan makes it even worse.
 

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