[Pegasus Smith] Au Naturel
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- big-tits hair-blonde milf mother
- blowjob double-penetration group-sex incest
Oblivion
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Holy fucking shit the drama is real
serge audouin
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Au Naturel 28 ( 6 à 10 ?!! )
Nippur
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Rian
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As expected. At this point p.s is writing soap opera
instead of working on underrated gems like Milf Mansion and Unexpected Consequences.
Oblivion
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Or giving interesting plots to Brandi and Kelly not involving Dylan for once, he's relying on Vic and kids way too much, see hes in the corner because doesnt know what to do with Brandi deep desires after chapter 10 forced disaster , he delivered a overdose of cope with The Master and all that fantasy horseshit, Kelly came the threesome finally happened and now what, Gina is gone the only one trying to guide her on the ways of the island, Courtney warned Dylan about his selfishness/hypocrisy, PS did this to himself like a mark, I'm right once again.As expected. At this point p.s is writing soap opera
Nippur
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I can't believe the last action of Brandi was the threesome in Chapter 25 then only 10 pages the chit chat with the decision of staying at he island and we have practically two chapters and a half with Victoria's drama just interrupted with the Andrè and Sister arc. Don't get me wrong I love Victoria but the evolution is kind of slow.
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Oblivion
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Holy bible yisus
Oblivion
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I like Vic too but PS fumbled Brandi so bad even Kelly, get ready because after this scenario more Andre and Shonda is coming
gamer2000
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Wow. Images jumped from 034 to 052.
Man-jock35
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If there's NO laws against adultery ( as well as incest ) there in Au NatureL,Vicky should divorce her asshole husband and married her sons.
then why shouldn't bigamy be allowed... or even polygamy...
...?!?!?Man-jock35
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If these are pages 52-55, then where are the other pages before that...?!?
Oh well, at least we get a sneak peek at what's ahead in the chapter...!!
pazzdan
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Well ....there are some others way for plot...
Example
Kelly is an anal virgin so new territori to explore
Brandi with 2 boys
Brandi or Kelly double penetraded
Sons swapping
Brandi or Kelly with 3 boys
Brandi Son s cuck his mom with 2 or more boys
Lesbian with Victoria and Brandi or Kelly
Gloryhole of Brandi/Kelly
Brandi fucks Victoria or Kelly ass with dildo
Victoria anal with both sons
Well a lot of incest situation or al least moms with boys
Example
Kelly is an anal virgin so new territori to explore
Brandi with 2 boys
Brandi or Kelly double penetraded
Sons swapping
Brandi or Kelly with 3 boys
Brandi Son s cuck his mom with 2 or more boys
Lesbian with Victoria and Brandi or Kelly
Gloryhole of Brandi/Kelly
Brandi fucks Victoria or Kelly ass with dildo
Victoria anal with both sons
Well a lot of incest situation or al least moms with boys
cupcake_cream01
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It will be a self-goal type situation. The two boys plots are like one of the most useless for now. If that happens, then PS will be stuck in Victoria Case. That will make AN too unpopular. For now, if Brandy gets good fuck by Pete or Tom with Good Storyline, then it will make AN again to its top. Brandy is the protagonist.
Plot will be like, while Dylan is involved with his Aunt, Brandy will be out from her home and will tour the island. And then she meets with Pete or Tom who will say sweet and kinky words to lure Brandy and then she will fuck. Or, with Dylan's permission she will fill her own quench.
This story is far better than involving two boys with Brandy. Actually none wants them right now. If PS does that, I assure it will be more worse than Chapter 10. Brandy loves to see Tom's cock and Pete just want to try her for a long time. One of the two should get involve with Brandy to save AN popularity.
Again I want to say that PS is biased. What he promises, he does not fill that. To even fill that he takes years. USELESS.
meteor
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Personal opinion: 1. "Anal sex virgin - Kelly". In the reader's perception, Kelly should be Dylan's' taboo '. Generally speaking, readers are not willing for Kelly to play with men other than Dylan. If you must play, Kelly and Brandy can pair up with two monsters - Harry and Tom - to play games!
2. Victoria is currently playing with her own children, but has not yet played with outsiders. After this showdown. There should be a gap period, during which Victoria, her husband, and their two children will have some awkward moments. At this point, the husband should continue to play with women outside. Victoria will temporarily not play with her two children due to embarrassment. At this point, twin boys will go hunting on their own or become prey for other women!
3.Speaking of 'first anal sex'! No matter the size of the male penis, after all, this is the first time! It's impossible to 'fuck it in one go,' right? Even if men don't feel pain, women will still feel pain! But how to make readers feel that 'the size of the male penis and the first anal intercourse of a woman' are achieved in a logical state? In this state, the author still needs to show the gentlemanly demeanor of a boy and the feeling of extreme hunger and thirst of a woman.
My personal imagination is to repeat some scenes - for example, what is the expression of the female when the glans of the male penis enters, what is the expression of the female when it enters one-third, and what is the expression of the female when it fully enters. Then comes the male, from gentle movements of the first half of the glans to wild movements of the entire penis opening and closing after fully entering. Women go from being shy and shy at the beginning to actively cooperating with men later on!
Share a video reference from Japan - HJMO-600. Time: 1:24:15-2:00:45. This paragraph!
Finally, 'Female homosexuality and dildos'. This is to cater to readers with special preferences!!
Most readers still prefer that normal male and female games have plot progression, right?