lorys
Member
no, è finita, ho letto il capitolo 7 l'epilogo
lorys
Member
no, it's over, I read chapter 7 the epilogue
Rian
Active member
While it's highly unlikely; it would be great if Pegasus decides to make a sequel where mother and son does it again, but this time on their on consent.
But knowing the track record of p.s, I wouldn’t keep any hope.
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Dustellar
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Ok, yeah the end is bad, because it feels like it could continue without the influence of the succubus, Ethan could seduce his sister and mother on his own, pretending there are no feeling between them feels like a "happy ending" and not like a porn comic.
Anyway, wonder if the other long story will have a rushed ending too.
Anyway, wonder if the other long story will have a rushed ending too.
Rian
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The one which needs a hiatus, if not ending; is none other than Au Natural. Because pegasus has ruined the whole story in chapter 10 and has been only downgrading it since then. The new editional characters should have their own spinoff and then...
As for C.O.S; I believe a limited followup would be great if Ethan manages to get intimate with his mom on her own consent.
Nippur
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Thank you Mate!
Nippur
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329 -330 are missing, if you have them It will be appreciate it
Nippur
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And I love it, of course a little rush, but very original, and at least It has an ending a rare case nowdays where you find long stories year by year without and end with the risk of getting wrapped out without conclusion.
OldGreyGeek
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Ignore my numbers. I renumbered to handle the chapter page and the following xxxb file. The E is for the Epilogue.
AkaQ
Active member
Hmm... yeah... I hated this, hahahaha.
For an artist who primarily does incest, this was like anti-incest.
Not to mention the lack of sex in the last 3 chapters, no sex with the teacher, the sister went back to being mean to the boy... it's so much wasted potential it hurts, lame.
For an artist who primarily does incest, this was like anti-incest.
Not to mention the lack of sex in the last 3 chapters, no sex with the teacher, the sister went back to being mean to the boy... it's so much wasted potential it hurts, lame.
Rian
Active member
Nice. This is an open ending, thus there is a chance for a sequel. I'd love to see this story contunue only if pegasus doesn’t screw things up like he did with au natural and Timmy strikes back.
Oblivion
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By PS from reddit 9 months ago:
"I didn't want to draw the story out, into multiple repetitive sex scenes. I had a narrative in mind and I stuck to it. I was trying something new, and this wasn't intended to go on forever like some of my other comics. If I make a part 2 of this comic, it will feature a new main character. "
New main character
so what was the point of red Kelly.
"I didn't want to draw the story out, into multiple repetitive sex scenes. I had a narrative in mind and I stuck to it. I was trying something new, and this wasn't intended to go on forever like some of my other comics. If I make a part 2 of this comic, it will feature a new main character. "
New main character
so what was the point of red Kelly.
Oblivion
Well-known member
PS own words:
"Elara aka red Kelly can influence women, and hypnotize them to have sex with Ethan.
She can also temporarily posses women that Ethan has sex with, but she can only stay in their bodies, if he cums in them.That is how she was able to stay in Allison's body, and that is why Elara was disappointed, when Ethan chose to pull out and not cum inside his sister Hope. "
"Elara aka red Kelly can influence women, and hypnotize them to have sex with Ethan.
She can also temporarily posses women that Ethan has sex with, but she can only stay in their bodies, if he cums in them.That is how she was able to stay in Allison's body, and that is why Elara was disappointed, when Ethan chose to pull out and not cum inside his sister Hope. "
Mrh69
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What I liked about the story was that—or so I thought—it was all building toward a final showdown with Elara (which is indeed what happened), while adding depth to the characters and showing how Ethan navigated his relationships and his sex life, culminating in the struggle to free his mother after she became possessed. Ethan could have relied on the support of the characters Elara had influenced—being honest about what had happened and counting on them to help him defeat her and save his mother. The problem is that PS wrapped everything up abruptly just to finish the story and move on to something else. The teacher and his platonic love interest had potential for the kind of development I’m talking about, but things just ended the way they did.